THE BROKEN RELATION (CH--8 UPDATED. ON PG-17......) - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Can't wait to see Ragini entering Baadi
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: alisha17

Awesome update

Can't wait to see Ragini entering Baadi

thanks...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
when soon
how much time will u take to update your stories
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

when soon
how much time will u take to update your stories

here is the update... hope u will like it... and dont forget to comment...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

CH--7

Scene starts in Vivaan's house---

The three were sitting in hall.

Vivaan- Rb are u sure u wanna go there? Will u be able to control ur anger? Rb i think ...

He was cut off by Ragini.

Ragini- Yes, i wanna go there, i wanna see there last happy time with my own eyes, bcz after that they will never be happy.
Aarti- But Ragini, if they recognised u , then... specially Shekher uncle...

Ragini gives a sad smile & says-- Really, I dont think that Mr Gadodia wld able to recognise me, infact i am sure he wont be remembering that he had any daughter who was sent to hostel 20 yrs back, who never returned frm there... She said with fire in her eyes.

Vivaan- Fine Rb... But remember, i am always there for u, as ur friend, ur brother.. Haa...

Aarti- Yes Rags... I am also with u... Let them pay the price for what they did to u & aunty.

Rags hugs Vivaan & Aarti. They break the hug.

Vivaan- So lets go...

Ragini nods, she thinks-- Khusiyaa mannane ka waqt khatm hua, abb aashu bahane ka waqt hai Mr.Gadodia, khoon ke aashu, jo maine aur meri Maa ne bahaye thhe, aap ki wajah se... Aise barbad karru gii aapko , ki koi tarash khaane waala nahi hoga, log thhuke gey, aap parr, aap ki uss dusri patni aur uss nazaiyaj beti parr. Aap Maut mangegey, lekin woh bhi nahi melegi aap ko, kabhi nahi...

Her thoughts were broken by Vivaan's voice.

Vivaan- RB .. come yaar...

Ragini goes & sits in car.

Scene shifts to Maheshwari office--

Sanky & Laksh enter the DP's cabin.

Sanky- U called us Bade papa.

DP- Yes, He hand over a file to Sanskaar.

Sanskaar takes it.

DP- This is file of Sushine Resort project. We are doing it in partnership. And they are JR Enterprises.

Sanky & Laksh- JR Enterprises.

DP- Yes.

Laksh- The same who buyed baadi.

DP nods.

Sanky- So what we have to do bade papa.

DP- Sanskaar & Laksh, i wanna u both to handel this project. Read the file , get details, we have to sign it in a week. I hope u guys understood what i mean.

Sanskaar- Jee, bade papa...

Saying this they came out of DP's cabin.
Sanskaar- Laksh, come in my cabin... Laksh follows him...

Sanskaar open the file. They see JR enterprises balace sheet & there popularity graph.

Laksh-Wow bhai... In 8 yrs so much popularity that today they are No 1 in India & top 10 in world...

Sanskaar- Huh... quite impressive... He turns the page... He came to page were JR industry Owner name was there. It was written RB...

Laksh- Yahan bhi short form... Yeh iss owner ka purra naam kuy nahi hai...

They look at the pic. Yes it was Ragini's pic...

Sanskaar- Beautiful...

Laksh raises his eyebrow...

Sanskaar- I mean...

Just then Laksh phone rings... Its Swara's call...

Laksh talks & cuts the call...

Laksh- Bhai... If u wanna meet her lets go to baadi, Swara told that they are coming to see baadi...

Sanskaar- Yaa... i am just coming...

Laksh- KK, I am waiting in car... He leaves...

Sanskaar looking at pic says"Khoobsurat toh tum ho, lekin Mujhe aisa kuy lagg rahha hai jaise tumne apne andaar bahut dukh, dard, takleef chipaye rakha hai... Aur bahut se raaz chhipe hai tumhari inn aankho mein... So miss RB... I am coming to meet you..He smiles... & goes...

Screen freezes on Sanskaar,Laksh driving towards baadi & on other side... Ragini, Vivaan & Aarti moving towards Baadi...

Precap"Dida looks at Ragini & thinks- Aisa kuy lagg raha hai jaise koi badda toofan le karr aayi hai yeh larki... Kaun hai yeh??? And seeing Ragini... Dada-Dadi feel connected to her...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Yay😆
An update after so long😃😃
I had almost forgotten about this story but thank God u updated😉
What a dhamakedar update yaar👏
Loved Ragini 's dialogues👏
They were so powerful👏👏👏
Sanky dear has seen Ragu's pic😳😳😳
Pehli hi nazar mein munde pe chaa gayi😆
I m so happy it is Sanky
And I love how he is able to discern so much just after a glance at her picture😳
Waiting for RagSan's meet 😃
And yeah will pm u d links u asked for by Tom. Sorry was busy in exams so forgot😊
Anyway pls update this story soon😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
really nice update
loved it
continye soon
waiting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for the PM
Read all chapters in one go
So Sanky ko pehli nazar Mein hi kuch kuch hone laga. Ab mulakat Mein hi Yeh haal toh jab actual Mein milege tab kya hoga 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
nice update...

after such a long time...

so finally the tashan begins...

waiting for next update

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