RagLak/RagYa: I lost my heart and found you..

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Hi all!!!
a Mini OS..

So it begins with Tanya stabbing Ragini while stabbing Swara.

SwaSan(shout): Ragini!!

Ragini was in swara's lap..

Swara: Ragini..Ragini..

Sanskar: Ragini, don't close your eyes..Ragini try keep your eyes open..

Laksh who is fainted inside the wall opens his eyes upon hearing Ragini's name loudly..

Swara(crying): Ragini, Ragini..Sanskar take her to the hospital. ..

Ragini was in pain..

Ragini: aahh! Swara...l..la..Laksh..
Suddenly her pain increases and she screams loud..

Laksh, inside the wall understands that she is in pain..

Laksh hardly speaks: Ragini..Ragini..u r fine?

Ragini senses his voice n points towards the wall..

Ragini: Laksh (pointing towards the wall)

Swara: Ragini what are you trying to say..Sanskar, take her to the hospital NOW!!!

Ragini again does the same..

Swara: Ragini..what ar..

Sanskar: ek second Swara..I think, I know..

He goes towards the wall n slowly says..
Sanskar: Lucky?

Laksh who.is hardly awaken..

Laksh: bh..bhai..Ragini..

Sanskar: lucky wait m taking u out..

He starts breaking the wall with whatever thing he found..

As soon as the brick is removed from Laksh's eyes, his eyes searches for Ragini.. his eyes fall on Ragini .. he completely comes to his senses ..

Laksh(shouts): Ragini!!! Bhai what happened to her??

Sanskar was quiet. .n was busy breaking the wall..

Laksh: tell me damn it, who did this to her..

Swara: this is all because of you Laksh..tania did this. U brought her n she did this. *cries vigorously*

Ragini slowly brings her hand up to Swara's cheek n wipes her tears..n shakes her head in "don't cry"..

Laksh sees this n feels damn guilty.. meanwhile Sanskar completes with breaking of the wall..Laksh runs to Ragini but his leg gets hurt with the brick and starts bleeding..he winces but ignores and runs to her..

Laksh(cupping Ragini's face): Ragini, I won't let anything happen to u..*he is crying badly* Ragini...

Ragini (hardly): la..Laksh..look m leaving u forever.. u wanted me to go, right? ..I hope u get a dream lady..and...aahh ..

Laksh: Ragini, don't speak anything.. n u r not going anywhere..I won't let u go, understand?

Ragini smiles bitterly and the vision in front of her gets blurred n slowly it fades..

SwaSanLak: Ragini!!

Laksh picks her up in his arms and starts going to hospital..his leg is bleeding badly n he is bare feet.. which makes it more difficult to walk but all his concern was Ragini n only Ragini. .

Laksh crying: Ragini, u ll live..u have to live...*with a sigh he says* FOR ME..

Swasan were behind.. Laksh n Ragini were looking godly.. the way he was taking her in arms n walking it can't be described in words...

Finally, they reach hospital . All the way Laksh was looking at Ragini..

Ragini was taken to the emergency ward..SwaSanLak were waiting outside. ..Swara was crying n Sanskar was consoling her..

Laksh was expressionless... only tears were flowing from his eyes...he was looking at Ragini from the small window on the door...his right shoulder was on the wall and his arms were fold..his left leg was folded on right..

Sanskar came and patted his shoulder..
Sanskar: lucky, she'll be fine..

This time Laksh broke up in his hug crying..
Laksh: bhai, it's all bcuz of me...

After some hours doctor comes out..

Laksh: doctor.. doctor how is she?

Dr: she is out of danger now..
Everyone got relieved faces.

Dr: but sorry, we could not save ur child. Mr Maheshwari..

Laksh: child?

Dr: yes..didn't she tell u about her pregnancy?

Laksh was broken...
He slowly went towards Ragini..she was unconscious... he starts crying holding her hand..

Laksh: m sorry Ragini...m sorry...

Ragini opens her eyes..

Ragini: La..Laksh..

He looked at her..
She puts her hand on her belly...n looked at him with questioning eyes..he shook his head in no..

Ragini closed her eyes to let tears flow..

Ragini: Laksh..god snached my last happiness from me...
N starts cries..

Laksh: it wasn't ur last happiness Ragini..it wasn't..if m with u ...

Ragini takes her hand off his..

Ragini: u r not with me any more, Laksh..

Laksh: I m with u...always.. forever. .m sorry Ragini for whatever I did..m sorry..

Ragini: don't speak sorry Laksh.. it was all for my sins..n so u played the most prominent role on my redemption. ..

He smiles..

Laksh: why do u love me so much Ragini?

Ragini: becuz I do..n every 'why' doesn't hv an answer. .

Laksh: I love u..will u marry me again?

Ragini mischievously: will think and tell..

Laksh: cheater...

Ragini: don't call me cheater. .

Laksh: u r a cheater, u stole my heart n made me fall in love with u n now u r saying will think and tell..

She laughs..

He just mesmerizingly looks at her..

Ragini: u r also not banned from laughing..

He giggles..he cups her face n kisses her on forehead..

Ragini: I love u Laksh..

Laksh: I love u more..n about the baby..we will have a dozen. .just u have to cooperate..

Ragini: haww Laksh...

He winks at her..

"Can we also join the haws n winks? " Sanskar calls..

Ragini feels shy..

All 4 Of them talk..

Swara: but Laksh, how will u convince dadi..

Laksh: Ragini is mine n jab miya biwi raazi toh kya krega qaazi? We'll run..

Ragini: no..

Laksh: okay I'll convince ur hitler dadi maa somehow..

Ragini: she is not hitler..

Laksh: okay okay don't be angry...


So guys how's it?

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ASHAJYOTHIII thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hah Very Good n Emotional one Neha :) Aww Right more Dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg this is awesome ur amazing

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Awesome cute emotional os dear 😊
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Sowie 😊 double post
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww it was a emotional and cute update 😳😳
I wonder if we'll get something like this 😉

Thanks for writing it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww !!
Such a nice OS my Nehu !!

🤗🤗

I was just feeling s upset when they lost their baby

But then they found each other in the most amazing way possible

So sweet !!

Please make this a proper fic no ?

Love you !!

🤗🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Neha really nice story sweet and cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Neha,
The story was really nice

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww it was so cute. Especially last part.
Keep it up and write more please.
Thank you for PM.

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