Swasan ss I'm sorry part 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2- Advice
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After her failed attempt to convince sanskar through food, swara decided dat she ll talk to him and explain everything! She was waiting for sanskar who had not yet returned from office, when ragini came to her
Ragini- kya hua swara? Yahan kyun baite ho? It's 11.30 aur tum abb tak soye naye?
Swara- wo mein sanskar ke liye wait kar rahi thi! Abi tak nahi aaya vo!
Ragini(with a knowing smile)- par kyun Swara?
Ragini knew dat her so called Mahan sister has developed feelings for sanskar but had not yet realised it!And she wanted swara to realise it
Swara- kyun matlab?!wo abhi tak nahi aaya tho chintha ho rahi hai mujhe
Ragini- par tume chintha karne ke kya zaroorat hai Swara!Aur ho bhi Kyun rahi hai! Thum toh sanskar ko apne pati bhi nahi maanthi! Tho Phir?! Hame ek baat samaj mein nahi aarahi swara! Jab thum sanskar ko pasand nahi karti aur unse talak bhi chahthi ho tho ye Sab dhikava karne ki kya zarrurat hai!unke liye khana banana! Aur Der raat tak unka intezaar karna..ye sab kyun Swara!
Ham jante hain ki thum guilty ho ki thumne sanskar no accuse kiya aur sanskar thumse bhohot dukhi hai! Par wo tho thumhare sirf dost' hai na toh phir ek sorry bolke chale jao na ! Yeh biwi jaise harkatein kyun kar rahi ho!Ek minute ek minute..wo dost hi hain na thumhare? Kahi biwi ki acting karte karte sach mein toh pyaar nahi ho gaya tume?
Saying dis ragini left! Swara was very shocked by ragini's questions and for the first time started to ask herself
Swara(to herself)- pyaar aur sanskar se?! Nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta! Wo sirf bohot acha dost hai mera! Aur kuch nahi!haan! Ye ragini pagal hai! Kuch bhi bolti hai
Ragini(who heard all dis said to herself)- mein pagal hun! Pagal thum ho! Patha nahi iss ladki ko kab samajh mein ayega! Hamne itne ache speech di aur iss bewakoof ke dimaag mein kuch nahi gaye! Isska toh kuch nahi ho saktha!😡

Precap- Swara confronts sanskar!

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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
i hope Swara ko jald realize ho jaye apna pyar...nice update so Ragini is positive in this
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Superb update 👏
So ragini is positive which is great 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
nice update. swara working hard for sanskar's acceptance. awesome 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Nice update Pls update next soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Read both parts together..
Its really nice..update soon
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So sorry guys i'm actually busy with my exams! And thank u si much for your comments!
Sanskar came home by 1.30 and the minite he entered he was bombared with questions by non other than his lovely wife swara!
Swara- kya hua sanskar! Itne der kyun kardi ?chalo koi baat nahi! Tum fresh hoke aa jao mein tumhare liye dinner lagati hun!
Sanskar was shocked to see Swara still awake but was too hurt to care!
Sanskar- koi zarrorat nahi hai swara!Main khana kha kar aaya hun( he lied)
Saying this he left for his room! Swara followed him all the way while asking him
Swara- ye kya sanskar thumne breakfast bhi bahar hi kiya tha aur abb dinner bhi! Chalo koi baath nai...tum beto, mein tumhe tumhare vitamin tablets dethi hun!
Sanskar(rudely)-
koi zarurat nahi hai swara! Mein khud le lunga! Tumhe meri fikar karne ki zarurat nahi hai
Swara(hurt)- aise kyu keh rahe ho sanskar, mein toh..
Sanskar- mein toh kya swara? Mujhe samaj mein nahi arahi ki tum ye sab kya karrehi ho!yeh mere liya khana banana, itne der tak mera wait karna! Yen sab kya hai swara?!maine kaha na mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni..phir?
Swara(with tears)-sanskar mein jaanti hun mujhse bohot badi galti huye aur tum mujse gussa ho
Sanskar intereupted- gussa?gussa nahi hun main swara!toot chuka hun!tumne bina soche samje itna bada ilzaam laga diye mujhpe aur tum ye expect karthi ho ke mein tume maaf kardun!saab bhul jaavon! Nahi swara!
Aur ek aur baat mujhe samaj mein nahi arahi! Tum yahan kar kya rahi ho?
Swara(shocked)-matlab?
Sanskar(tauntingly)matlab mujhe ye laga tha ab sab kuch teek ho gaya, tumhare so called missions poore hogaye toh tumhara yahan par kya kaam!ragini ke baare mein sabko sab kuch pata chal gaya hai! Toh..tum chali kyun nahi jaati?
Swara(with tears)- kya tum yehi chahte ho ki mein chali jaaun?
Sanskar(tauntingly)meri chahne se kya hoga swara!acha tak koi farak padaga jo abb padega!tum sirf apni manmaani karti ho!tum jo sochti ho vahi sahi hai aur kuch nahi!mujhse nahi hoga abb! Tumne bhaar bhaar mujhe thana maara, mere pyaar ko dhoka kaha, phir bhi mein chup tha! aur jp ghatiya ilzaam lagaya hai na mujpar tumne use main kabhi nahi bhoolunga swara! Kaise tumne bhina soche police ko baathane gayi thi!tumhare zindagi me meri kya importance hai mujhe thabi pata chal gaye!Lekin abb bohot ho gaya!Tum ek kaam karo apna bags pack karlena! Kal jab mein office jaunga tab mein tumhe baadi chod dunga!iss unchahe rishte se tumhe hamesha se mukti chahiye thi na ab mujhe bhi vahi teek lag raha hai
He was about to leave but stopped and turned back
Aur haan.ek aur baath..iss ghar mein wapas aane ki sochna bhi math! Tumhari zarurat nahi hai yahan par kisi ko!!!na mujhe na iss ghar ko!and goes from there!
Swara was heartbroken to hear dis! She doesnt utter a word! She feels as if someone snatched the floor under her knees! His words ringing in her ears!she falls with a thud at the edge of the bed unable to react!

Laksh pov

Laksh was pretty confused with the things happening in his house!He knew he had made a big mistake in not trusting swara and marrying ragini in a fit of range! After ragini's revelation he believed dat now everything will be alright and swara would cum back to him! But he was wrong!
When he compared the things ragini did to get him and the things he did to get swara back was nt entirely different! He felt as if he became the exact replica of ragini in character! When he accused ragini of betraying him into marriage he never realised that it was him in the first place who proposed the term marriage in front of her just because of his anger towards swara!he knew dat though she provoked the final decision was made by him!
Now he had come to see everything in a light way! He realised dat lot has changed!he noticed the slight gleam in swara's eyes when she saw sanskar and sanskar purposely avoiding her! Dat look was something he never saw in her eyes for him! "Maybe it was never love" he thought!and surprisingly he didnt feel bad about it!he smiled to himself!

Just then ragini entered der room! He then realised how much wrong he had done to the poor girl! He knew that he was solely responsible for what ragini has become today! And he wanted to make things right
Laksh- ragini kya mein tumse kuch baat kar saktha hun?
Ragini- kya hua laksh! Kahiye?
Laksh knew it was no or never and revealed to her that it was him who kidnapped her and also apologised for all his previous mistakes dat he had made due to his implusive nature!when he looked up to see ragini to be in a very angry mode he was surprised to see her smiling sadly looking at him!
Ragini- hame patha tha laksh ki aapine hamara kidnap kiya tha!(she tells how but its not imp so i'm nt elaborating)ham gussa nahi hai laksh kyun ki hame patha hai ki hamne bohot saare galatiya ki hai aur hamne apkai liya koi option nahi choda! Issiliye apne aisa kiya!
Laksh was surprised- ragini mujhe tumse kuch aur bhi kehna hai! Mein hamare iss rishte ko ek mokka dena chahte hun! Mein tumse pyaar nahi karta but koshish karunga ki tumhe hamesh khush rak sakoon!
Ragini(happy)- sach?
Laksh- haan! So abhi se start kar dete hai!
Friends?
Ragini- friends!
Precap- no idea
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice chapter...! 😳 n all the best for your exams.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update 👏
All the best for exam
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Amazing update...wow loved sanskaar and his attitude it was good that he doesn't forgive her so quickly...
Please update soon...I hope swarm tells sanskaar her feelings soon...

Hope exams went well. ..

Waiting...

Raz

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