Created

Last reply

Replies

114

Views

8.6k

Users

40

Likes

307

Frequent Posters

Aayat23 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: leku

Dear!!!
After reading character sketch...mostly when read kavitha name..
Angry,unexpected things started to grow..
Now curiosity of mine in peak..
How bestie gonna turn lovers...
Whatever sanskar care was unique to swara...
Part 1 was awesome...
Swara character was known well from it..
Swara and Ragini friendship...best ...
Sanskar entry was good..
Kavitha 😡
Swasan 😳

Waiting for next update...
Well written

Love

Lekah


HI LEKAH...

GLAD TO HAVE YOUR TAKE ON THIS THREAD AND THANK YOU FOE YOUR WONDERFUL THOUGHTS..GLAD TO KNOW YPU LIKED CHAR PORTRAYAL...

I WILL ASK YOU TO JUST SIT BACK AND ENJOY HOW STORY WILL SHAPE AND SHARE YOUR VIEWS:-)

THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMPLIMENTS...

HAVE A NICE day...

stay blessed
mukta
Aayat23 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Superb start 👏
Loved it
Kavita 😡
Swasan 😳
Update soon



THANK YOU SUJOY...

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED THIS PART AND YEAH WILL TRY TO UPDATE SOON..
Aayat23 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#23


THANK YOU PRERNA...
GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED IT...
ANSHEL thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#24
wohooo finally a new story nd dat 2 a ss by you i m luvin the intro nd first part ...u are amazing n thaaank u for the pm
Edited by ANSHEL - 9 years ago
abi03 thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#25
nice...looking forward for next update dr...give some long update...
Aayat23 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 9 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice concept

Loved it
Waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm


THANK YOU DEAR...

GLAD TO KNOW YOU LIKED THE CONCEPT..

ACTUALLY THIS IS THE FIELD I BELONGS TO...ENGINEERING SO MAY BE I'LL ADD CONTENTS IN THAT LIGHT IN FUTURE...

YOU ARE ALWAYS WELCOME FOR PMS:-)

YOU GUYS FEEDBACKS ARE WHAT PUSH ME UP ALWAYS...

HOPE TO HAVE YOU ON NEXT PART...

HAVE A NICE DAY...
MUKTA
robiayousaf thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#27
i''m sure HIM is refer to Sanskar Maheshwari rihgt?
ANSHEL thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#28
hi muktai so here it goes swara mom trust sanskaar more dan swara ..same pinch ...😆😉.even i too trust him more regardin her safety nd wats up wid dis kavita girl i mean in one sided luv wid sanky nd den interferin in matter concerned wid him as is she was his girlfriend😲 😡bt nyways such things aare common in colleges bt dnt she dare go overboard😡 for such a wonderful effort👏
sharif_lafungi thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#29
loved the plot...
swasan best friends nd kavita attracted to our hero...
eagerly waiting for next part...
loved swasan bond nd how easily he predicts her reaction...
raaz19 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Wow buddy update already...wow I am so happy cloud nine...
So this is how it all start hey...fiery swara and a passionate sanskaar to console her...like that they are friends already...loved kavita take in this story seems like she will be the one tob unite the love birds. ..

I still don't like her but what can I say she is needed on the story right...others are sweet also...

Please make chapter two longer...and I see our hero is already saving his princess from all her troubles...

;)

Waiting raz

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".