DARK KNIGHT-A SwaSan FF-T4-DELETED-AN PG1- Creations-Pgs 98/9 - Page 60

Originally posted by: sneharay

Beautiful..
Pls save swasan
Update soon

Originally posted by: lucky.m

shru🤗🤗

Gosh 👏.👏. At this moment I am feeling too emotional to say anything and this update took me through myriad of emotions ..will be back when I can say something coherent

I never get tired of telling you .. you are brilliant and no words can do justice to the master piece you have created in form of DK⭐️

Love

Lucky

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Shru,

Dark Knight - Chapter 33: Till death do us apart - it did not, did it?

"and my red rose has turned to white" - that was what first came to my mind (it is a line from the book - Fear is the Key , by Alistair Maclean, and a story that I have read multiple times). Despite my oft-expressed desire for love stories with happy endings (the more candy and sugar types, the better), I agree that it is the tragic ones that are immortalised. Further, you, as an exceptional author have written the chapter so well that the conclusions seem natural given the flow of events that took place.👏👏👏 I can understand you being fatigued creating it, I am tired in mind and spirit after reading it.

@bold- thank you so much for that Nyna dear especially as I know the angst you suffered reading it thinking the other end of what I was going to do 😉

And if the ending of this chapter would lead to the conclusion it hints, I am sad and angry.

Why am I sad, apart from the 'right-in-front-of-your-face reason that they are dying, it is because their deaths would be in vain.

In vain for - Pawan, the lionheart, how would he live without his king? He has held on to what should be his last breaths so that he does not fail Sanskaar, if Sanskaar does not come back with Swara, how can he face himself? Notwithstanding the promise he made Uttara, he cannot go on.

In vain for - all the lives laid down by Sanskaar's men in the rush to reach Swara in time - how many brave men died in that fight, that they fought knowing that it was futile, their numbers were just not enough, and yet it was raw courage and absolute loyalty that spurred them to the very end. Their deaths would go in vain. Valiant Vali and Brave Veer - what of them, how could they survive, his death would mean death to them too.

In vain for - Kavita, the last minute sacrifice of her absolute worthless life - she redeemed herself - from all her poor choices, from her determination to hate Swara, from her foolish belief that Sanskaar did and does still love her, from her stupidity at choosing to believe her mother's words and with the final realisation that Sanskaar and Swara deserved each other. She managed to buy Sanskaar the few precious minutes. It was indeed the only act of selflessness that she had done and it goes in vain.

In vain for - Ragini, who made a somewhat half-hearted attempt to save Swara - I am not sure as to what prompted her, whether it was that the burden of guilt she bore, or terror at seeing what her mother had transmuted to or a small realisation that she loved Swara. Whatever her reasons, she did initiate the events which led to Swara being saved. Their deaths would sound the death knell for her too - there is no way Lakshya will forgive her, not over their deaths. She will not be able to forgive herself either.

In vain for - Annapurna who was a statesperson and a Queen - the one who had the foresight to keep tabs on Kaveri, the one who could convince Swara to arrive at the correct conclusion regarding Sanskaar and the one who was responsible for Sanskaar reaching Swara in time. But above all these things, she is a mother also, how will she survive?

In vain for - the preists and the soldiers accompanying Pawan who were massacred at the Mahakali temple (am I being a little dramatic?)

In vain for - all the soldiers fighting at Baadigunj - was it worth that the battle was fought when it was - for now, it appears that Janaki's insistence that Baadigunj be reclaimed was part of the larger plan of getting Sanskaar out of the way (I have to read to confirm but she started to insist only after Sanskaar returned with Swara and decided to marry her) - okay this is a little far fetched, but I stick to it. (drama quotient in my argument)

Why am I angry? Not only because you appear to be killing my beautiful Swara and Sanskaar, the cause of my obsession and the illogical unashamed shipping of this magical couple.

It is because, if you do kill them then it would mean that Janaki has won. And that is simply not done. Janaki has spent all her life channeling her resentment at being rejected by Shekar into hating Swara. Nothing would give her more pleasure than the news that Swara is dead. I do not think Sanskaar's death means much to her, she has spent that last twenty years hating Swara and the last few months plotting against Swara. For her, Swara's death is worth everything, even sacrficing her own daughter. She is demented but this would be a victory for her.

It would also mean that Kaveri won, though not in the same lines as Janaki. Kaveri never seemed to have any true affection for her daughter, she sacrificed Kavita, the day she was born when she ensured that Kavita was brought up as a courtesan. But with Sanskaar's death, Annapurna's pain and angst would certainly bring her joy.

I repeat, I am sad and angry and despite appearing childish cannot stop myself from requesting you - is there no way you can turn my white rose back to red? 😭😭😭

I fear you may think I have cheated on this reply but I think given you have read 34/35 and our other few exchanges I need not deal with a detailed revert on this? Hopefully now at the end of 35 that rose should be the deepest red possible? 😉 But overall yes I agree, if I had wanted them together in death than in life, that sequence would have played out somewhat differently although there does come a point where giving justice to others even pales before the wanting to be with that one person so much, if untimely death is the only way, you will take it. I don't believe in suicide as a solution but here it was hopefully implied to be totally different to that 😃

love,

Nyna

PS: And thanks a ton, for not having Sanskaar kill Devender, I would have liked it if Devender could not summon the courage to kill himself, but then he is also a Rajput so must have some amount of bravery.

Yes, despite his rotten core, Devendra was a Rajput too and he could fight well too, he was just an evil nasty piece of work and that's why him having to stab himself to death after suffering a million cuts and being decimated by Sanskaar seemed fitting to me, without creating a totally unrealistic scene either for dramatic effect 😊

PPS: Is it not somewhat ironic, that Swara and Sanskaar die of poison in the presence of Shiva, the god who drank poison to save the world and whose consort the great Kali (which is another manifestation of Parvati) is actually the kindest of all the goddesses despite her outward appearance?

I replied to this in the comment about Durga and you were very right- those references very very deliberately inserted after careful thought for that they symbolised 😃

Originally posted by: LoveSonu2408

Chap33-
wht i read was just amaizing.
A powerpackd updt.
Emotnal rollar coaster.
Nwdays m crying 4 swasan evrytime i see or read smthng lk ths.
Realy last part mk me cry.
Painfuly beautiful,emotnal.
*sniff*
*shaking head*
thnks 4 pm.cntu soon

Originally posted by: bilvyina

Hey shru...chapter 33 is just awesome...again u proved that u r a extraordinary writer...frm beginining onwards i am a part of dk...i just love u fiction itz just awesome dr...i want devandra death at any cost...i am happy abt that...after that u made me cry...i dnt want to c swasan die like this...i never want swasan die due to that devil so plz save them...i also want to c sufferings of janaki after her revelation of her dirty mask...loved it...and ur story made me cry...keep going...waiting 4 next update...
With lots of love and admiration..
Krishna

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Hey dear,

First things first..How are you??

This is called weekend treat..😃 Double update from one of my fav writers in this forum..😊

Didn't read the update.. Will read that,come back and edit this post..

Stay blessed.. 🤗

Originally posted by: mayasingh

Hi Shruti,

Loved chapter 33

Ramsay Bolton... ha ha devendra was still better than Ramsay

Ramsay is worse... skinning someone when they are alive is worse...

Loved Swara response and reactions, and understanding for Kavita and how Kavita got over her jealousy for Swara and ultimately helping In her own way. .

Devendra fate was written when he first time captured our Prince and princess

I am sure even Ramsay Bolton will die this season..

Now our Prince and princess are they going to die...

I hope not...

Loved the twist and turns you introduce in each chapter ...

Waiting eagerly for next update...

Regards

Maya

Originally posted by: dilwali

Hi Shru what a big update it was Hats off to you for putting all it on paper n writing it so beautifully 👏

It was so much in one update like a roller coaster ride of emotions. I was feeling angry, pity n what more I don't know. I am feeling like I have been literally there with swasan and living each moment. You are a bundle of talent Shru👍🏼

Actually today I m falling short of words because how much I write here it can't reach a single iota of what you wrote here.

Still I try. I loved the way you ended Kavita because it finally sent her peace finally. I also loved changed feelings of Kavita on meeting Swara. I have not seen any ruthless character anywhere like Devendra so the end u gave to him is justified. Now talking about swasan I m not sad because I know u will not kill them in the end may be you too don't like tragic ends. If you are planning to do so it's totally your wish because it's your creation all I can say is everyone like endings with happy ever after because humans are wired like this so if it's possible dear give swasan a happy ever after ending in this lovely creation of yours

Lots of love ❤️