beyond the horizon : swasan one shot

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello fellow swasanians...
m akanksha nd a terribly silent member of this forum...
WARNING: I am NOT a writer at all...but just like how w non dancer wishes to groove in an Indian wedding watching others..that's how randomly I get this sudden jolt of writing once in a while...
the below shot...I wrote it 2 years back on my favorite couple other than swasan...kriyaansh..my eternal love...
back to the topic...
its a tragic story...not the usual happy one...the plot is NOT mine...I got this idea from a post on Fb...no it wasn't a published story it was just a quote...
still in any way if it's offending anybody...forgive me plz...
P'S: I don't know anybody in this forum so can't pm anybody...it would be a great help if you can share it..
OK m going to keep quite now...
enjoy...
it's a crap though... :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That
red big ball was making the whole sky shimmer.
Birds were returning back to
their shelters, it was tym for evry1 to takeoff
from their watever work. But
dis part of the country never leaves its chirpy
surroundings. Goa is popular
for its beaches. People come here to relax
themselves from their hectic
schedule, or to jst enjoy the life, some with
friends nd some with their
special ones. All have one thing in common... nd that's is contentment nd happiness. Among these happy go
lucky souls, a guy was
standing far away from d crowd gazing directly
into d sea as if searching
smthing or to be more precise, someone. His face
showed no emotions. No means
no. it was lyk he is blank nd dead though he was
not. Seeing other couples
walking hand in hand, cuddling each other,
something pricked him inside nd a
faint smile appeared on his face as he went into
past...
A guy and a girl were running around the beach
chasing each other. They seemed so
happy and carefree as if the world doesn't exist
when dey r around each other.
The girl was teasing him nd running which made him
groan, he jumped nd held her
by waist above the ground making her squel in
pleasure. They
were newly married nd had come 4 their
honeymoon. They were together since last
5 years. Goa was special as it was d place where
they met for the 1st
time nd confessed also. It was vry precious for
both of them. It
was the second last day of their trip, they were
roaming hand in hand with
swara's head on sanskar's shoulder nd he was engulfing
her securely in his arms.
Perfect sight to watch but was short lived. A
little later, wen they were standing on the shore
making their knees wet, high
tides started rising, of which they were unaware as
both were busy luking into
others' eyes, suddenly out of nowhere a tide came
making them stumble a bit
while swara stumbled towards the water. sanskar's
breath struck into his throat nd he pulled her to
him. Both
were scared to death nd ended up hugging each
other as tight as they cud. While
moving back another wave came nd this time
engulfed her in the thick sheet
of water making her shout.sanskar tried a
lot 2 hold her hand but eventually
failed as water went back. He was about to jump
but other people held
him back. Lifeguards dived into the water but
came empty handed which shattered
sanskar to hell. Hr looked at his hands which gripped
some of the bangles of her
chuda(whatever u call it), nd placed them near his
heart nd fell unconscious.
FLASHBACK END
It
happened 3 years back, evry year he comes here on
the same date with a hope dat
the waves will tuk him also along with dem to his
swara so dat they can meet
there.Water
was continuously touching his feet and sanskaar with
teary eyes and a choking voice
said"chahe
jitna bhi pair (feet) pakad lo, par kabhi maaf nai
karunga, kabhi nai"
sharif_lafungi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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damn...I missed u bad sis 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear...
Amazing OS..sad 😔though but liked it...👍🏼

Keep up the good work...write more...

Talia
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice OS but asbu said a sad one
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: krishuuu

Hey dear...

Amazing OS..sad 😔though but liked it...👍🏼

Keep up the good work...write more...

Talia


thanks :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Nice OS but asbu said a sad one


thanku harshita: )
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sad..still I liked it...
Nice OS...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nive and touchy
do write more stories on swasan (happy wali)
🤗

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