//GUSTAKH DIL\\ A SwaSan SS - Part 3 updated at page 20 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Soumi 🤗
i m so happy that you start writing another swasan short story
prologue was awesome... Evil Ragini 🤢
update was nice too
would love to read more
update more soon
thanks for the pm
keep writing buddy
love you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
soumi...🤗
part1 awesome...i like panditi ji into...😆kya intro diya...u showed a side character as a hero type ki entry...when iam reading i was excited soo much who will be that man...🤣

sanskar is very excited to get marry...wow...! their love story starting track i loved it...love at 1st sight...

countinue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update..thanks for pm


U welcome sneha... hope u enjoy reading.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: avihothi

Your update was just awesome.
Thanks for pm.
Update soon.


No need to say thanx...will update by weekend.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Anusha62

wow..interesting..!!
update nxt part soon.


Hi anusha u liked it
i'm glad.
will try to update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Sree8410



<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Wo chodo yeh batao.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Is it love at first sight for Sanskar? Agar aisa hai then why she she feels he is punishing her. After prologue I was sure Ragini created a MU and Sanskar might have ill-treated her. But if he fell in love with her then why she feels he is punishing her for returning his love? Again please tell me its not like Swara rejected and then accepted when he reject her love.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Love</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Sree.</font>


Sree this is nt the way usually people reacts in love???
i gave multishades to each character here and no one is sane.So tym by tym u will realise this.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Humnava

DearSoumi.😊

I'maddressing u as "tui" instead of 'tumi". Plzz kichu mone koris na.😳 Actually "tumi" ektu beshi formal lage amr. We r friends after all.😉

1st part ta khub bhalo legeche re. SwaSan er biyer thik hoyeche. Oder prothom dekha.R Sanskar ok prothom dakha tei pochondo kore feleche.😆

Ragini ki Sanskar er ex bol toh?? Orato problem kiser jodi Sanskar Swara k divorce naa dite chaye...??😡

Jai hok, amr khub bhalo legeche ei update tar next part ta taratari update koris kintu.😃

R amake Aheli boledakte paris.😳


Well Aheli thanks for breaking the walls
even i am comfortable as "tui" only.
Dekh bypr ta oto easy na.ami oto reveal krte chai na bt thing is that ki no one is sane and victim here.
Time to time each one of them chooses to be victim of circumstances.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: rayab_rajpoot

Soumi 🤗
i m so happy that you start writing another swasan short story
prologue was awesome... Evil Ragini 🤢
update was nice too
would love to read more
update more soon
thanks for the pm
keep writing buddy
love you 😳


Hi ray dear...i love u seriously for always cmmnting on my poor writings as good.
well coming to the story thnx for the appreciation and liking.
Keep reading
Love u too my dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: swa291

Intresting waiting for more


Will update soon...thnx fr reading.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: Tapathi

soumi...🤗

part1 awesome...i like panditi ji into...😆kya intro diya...u showed a side character as a hero type ki entry...when iam reading i was excited soo much who will be that man...🤣

sanskar is very excited to get marry...wow...! their love story starting track i loved it...love at 1st sight...

countinue soon...


Tappu 🤗
U r looking so excited...
wait for upcoming parts.
keep reading.

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