||THREAD 2|| My Foe To My Soul (PART :- 24 PAGE :- 135) - Page 73

Originally posted by: Pygmalion63

AWESOME UPDATE..
LOVED IT SO MUCH..
Lovely song...
Next Swara's confession WOW

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Kamila akka, ... Kaveetha...🤗... Love you sissy...

Are u going to end this ff soon? No.. Don't do that how can i stay without your ff... (Like sanskaar's diwali wala confession 😆)...

Yeah sissy.. Just ten to twelve parts left... Ha.. Ha.. Ha... Nice confession.. I love that confession... Let me think about that sissy... I just ploted upto this...

Ok... I'll start with the song sequence..

I haven' listened that song before but i liked it. So just few minutes before, i downloaded it. Now i'm humming that song.. Agar main kahu mujhe thumse mohabbat hei... wow... amazing. ...

It's a nice song to hear and watch... I love that song... I like preeti and hirthik in that song... Soo cute sissy you are...

Back to the story..

Aww... Kissy kissy.. 😳 very romantic. But akka somehow i guessed this kiss in previous part.

Sorry for not stating that in the update... Clearly.. It's my fault dear... I'm very glad that you liked this update... Kiss too..

Cause sanskaar loves swara a lot. So he wouldn't mind to kiss her, whether her mouth smell good or bad. Well that is how our sanskaar is. I loved it..

Yep he loves her soo much... He wouldn't mind anything when it comes to her... True love Haan... Yeah he is Sanskaar Maheswari...

Yeh swara bi na... Sent her hubby to get a mouth freshner in the early morning. 😆...

She has every rights on him naa.. Soo she can sent him anywhere anytime.. 😆...

Head massage... Lovely.. ...

Ohh I'm very happy that you liked the head massage...

Oh.. That slap.. 😲 she thought that it was ashish.. I think Sanskaar felt very sad because she hit him, not because of the slap. But it was accidental. Both of them hadn't their dinner.. Poor swasan.. After that, the morning cheek kiss was lovely. 😳..

Slap it's not a planned one... Yeah she thought it was her brother... He is angry coz of it was his first... Not coz she slapped him.. But soon he'll get used to it... 😆... His actions are obvious one... We can't blame him... Ohh kiss.. It's needed after that slap...😛

Akka, each & every scene.. you have written beautifully. Excellent work👏...

Ohh sissy I'm very much happy that you liked this story... Ohh this means a lot to me... Mmmawh...

Yayy.. Next update is swara's confession.. Eagerly waiting. Update it soon.

Next part...

I'm not sure about it... I'm very scared now... Let's see how it's going to be... Hit or miss... Will update soon...

Love you akka..

Kaveetha.

With love...

Kam...

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Hey dear.. Happy to see ur update..

As usual amazing... Hey dear...🤗.. Love you soo much... I'm very glad that you liked this update...😛

Loved the song seq... Their gestures n all.. I'm very happy that you liked the song sequence... I was scared...

I love all ur song seq wich always suits the situation...

Soo sweet of you sweetheart... Mmmawh...

Tht Sunny bunny is always irritating.. Disturbing Swasan..

I know she is kinda irritating... Will irritate more too... But you can see Swara in action... 😆

So sanky got to know y she ate the eggs...😳

Loved his PoV n the kiss it's awesome 😳

Yeah he knows the half truth for now soon he'll get to know the real reason... I'm very happy yaar... You're liking POV and kiss... 😳

Swara woke up sanky to bring freshener tht too at 5:30 😆😆...

She is his Tamarin... She'll disturb him a lot.. He have to face the consequences of his love... 🤣

N the mrng Scene is amazing.. Loved it😳.. Me 😃... Happy..

N the kitchen scene.. Swara wants to keep her mouth shut but as always she can't 😆.. It's tough for her to keep her mouth shut... 😆

N tht. Sunny doesn't have a taste..😡 Loved the way Sanskar supported Swara..😳.. Sunny she is here to irritate and taunt Swara... She has her own reason... Yeah he is gentleman who believe in true beauty...

The way Swara changing Sanskar n herself for him is awesome...😳... Love bring changes automatically... I think... She is changing for him... Changing him for good.. 😃.. Well analysis.. Dear..

I loved it wen she drooled over Sanskar.. It would have been good if he would have caught her..😆.. He'll caught her red handed soon...

Swara taking care of Sanskar... Brkfst n massage... The way she massaged his head n made him sleep on her lap is awesome...😳.. Ohh dear I'm very happy that you liked the sequence.. Brkf massage.. That sleep on her lap... She is falling soo deep in his love... It's all out of that love...

But she messed it by slapping him... It's not her fault... Felt bad for her... Definitely it's not her fault... But she repent for that...

Sanskar even after being angry on her always try fulfill her wishes... Loved their bonding in the ff... But Swara thought they r divorce papers... Hebia loving her not that single slap stop him from loving her... He'll.. only few are their like him... Soo precious... I have to make their bond strong to withstand the twister.. Together .. 😆Yeah.. He didn't explain her about that package.. He simply asked her to sign it.. Soo she thought it could be a divorce papers... 😆

N his kiss on her cheeks😳 is awsum... Ohh that kiss.. I thought it'll be good for their patch up... I'm very happy again..😛

Eagerly waiting for her confession.. I know it vl be hatke in ur style...😆😛.. Seriously dear I'm very scared now... I have to make it up to your expectations.. I have to fulfil it.. Hope you like it...

Waiting for nxt update.. Cont soon... Sure will update soon...

Love u dear for long update...🤗

Love you too darling... 🤗.. For everything... Mmmawh.

With love..

Kam..

Originally posted by: divya2913

Hi Kamila, thank you so much for the pm first, and after reading your entire update i felt satisfied for the long wait, and... Divya...🤗... No thk you for pm dear... I'm very glad to know that you liked this update... Ohh soo sweet of you yaar... 😛

Day by day swara feeling comfortable around our hero sanskar is really nice that too she responded to his kiss during midnight that's really awesome, . yeah she feeling comfortable.. With him.. Yeah our hero is soo cool naa.. 😎.. You liked the kiss I'm happy.. Yaar..

and the slap which she gave him and the response he gave her is so natural, i too don't like if someone sprinkle water during my deep sleep but the difference here is our hero is on full romantic mood he would have never expected such a response from his love at that moment, poor swara still feeling like she is in her Maternal home that's y she gave such a blow to her sweet husband mistaking him as her bro, lovely dear.

Slap.. What you said is right... Hi-fi then me too hate that... Ha.. Ha... Ha.. Yeah he was in romantic mood.. Suddenly it was washed off in that slap... His behaviour is so natural... It's a hard truth... We still stick with our maternal.. Memories...

Actually ur story is different from my expectations in all the way bcoz i used to predict something about the next update but it came out always as a surprise for me..

Ohh dear then tell me the updates were upto your expectations or not.. If not please tell me.. I try to make it to your expectations.. If you feel it as a surprise... Hugs for you.. But please tell me..

I don't know really i should say this or not but still im saying this please don't take it in a wrong way bcoz i feel like u r most similar to swara of My foe to my soul, the same bubbly and fun loving girl i think, bcoz the words u r using and the dialogues, scenes are almost natural, no one can imagine something which they are not, i love each and every part of this story of yours, love u dear.

Feel free to tell anything to me.. There is nothing wrong in it... I love to clear your doubts... 😛.. Just multiply Swara by two that is me... 😃.. I love to write naturally than a fictional type.. And I love to add true incidence too... Not only mine.. Even that happened to my friends too.. But this part is full of my imagination... If I add any natural events . I'll tell you... Ohh dear I'm overwhelmed yaar... Love you too soo much...

And also i liked the way he brought application form for her further studies that's really showing his love for her dream also, she is so lucky.

He made a promise... To fulfil her dreams... He is doing it now.. Yeah she is soo lucky...

With love..

Kam..

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Originally posted by: divya2913

No need to worry at all dear, actually your every update came as a pleasant surprise for me its really really beyond my expectations, don't change anything for anyone bcoz we all love your story just bcoz u wrote it by your heart and it had came out very well natually,

And my guess is right u r more bubbly than swara, bcoz of ur bubbliness we got a superb story i think.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res for 21 (B)😊

Unres

Dear Kamila,.. Dear Nyna...🤗

I am so so very sorry for this delay in unres.😭

Don't say sorry yaar...😭... My heart is crying... No problem.. You unresed is enough for... Even I forget to unres my post in many stories... But I try hard to unres... We are tracing in a same bus...😆.. I'm very glad that you are liking this update..

But what an opening, Sanskaar openly flirty in spite of the rotten egg fragrance - truly he is completely fida and Swara is also slowly opening up😊 eating rotten eggs is worth him , she is also fida.

He loves her yaar... Love is blind but his love is blind in all senses... 😆... Yeah both are fida on each other... Swara trying her best.. But she is still way behind... Yeah eating rotten eggs worth him... His love is pure naa.. 😳

How much more better can Sanskaar get - he makes excuses (very valid ones) for her to his family.

He is good in that.. I hope protecting his wife... Soo I want same Sanskaar here... Ohh I'm very happy that you liked his reason and finding it as a valid one... 😃

The possible romantic encounter in the moonlight spoilt by Sunny (quite apt, in a twisted way) and then Sanskaar searching for a hidden camera🤣

You know how much I'm happy seeing you Rolf... No bound for it... Yaar... I'm very happy that I'm responsible for your smile...😃.. I love.. This miss miss game.. 😉... That makes swasan special... Naa.. Their miss kiss.. Miss romance...

And her half confession - when she admits that she ate the rotten eggs to stay in the marriage it was like she was confessing her love but then he wants her to say those words.

Her half confession... What can I say... Does she have any other way to get away from his encounter... Soo she confessed half truth... Yeah he knows it before (guys can read this kinda expressions easily).. All he wanted a littel nod from her in acceptance...

And yet he does realise that she loves him maybe a little more than he loves her. Well am sure the kisses would soon cause explosive fireworks between them.

Who'll eat rotten eggs... Eww.. He won't soo he finds her love for him is littel more than his... Kisses always cause for a fireworks... Let's see... What we get... 😆

Such a lovely potential romance and Swara had to ruin it by thinking it was ''Aashish" Sanskaar wants to seduce her and she slaps him. Poor guy and poor Swara - both end up spending the night apart.

But they do makeup so sweetly and you leave us with a tantalising hint about the next chapter. Do update soon.

Sometimes it happens... Happy moments end up in sad one... Same here... I can't say who's fault is this... May be timing... Yeah brothers are spoilers... 😃... I have one... I'm very happy that you find it potential romance...

Sometimes life gives us dhatka.. Sometimes opportunity... They utilized it... I love simple... No complication... Tantalizing...😕.. Now I'm scared more...

love,

Nyna

With love..

Kam...

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Kamila,

Finally unres page 95😊

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awesome updates
loved it