||THREAD 2|| My Foe To My Soul (PART :- 24 PAGE :- 135) - Page 42

Originally posted by: indrani7495

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Unres..Kamila 🤗... Indrani... 🤗.. Love you soo.much yaar...

Lovely lovely update dear!!! 😳 absolutely loved it!! 😃

I'm soo glad that you liked this update😃

The starting note was a romantic 1 n i was almst hoping for the kiss to happen... Fingers crossed...but damn!! There came the truck 😆 ...wow swasan racing behind the truck ...😆...sanskar getting hurt...ouch it hurt me almst aswell!!😭 but the way swara showered her concern on sanskar aftr seeing him hurt was wonderfull!!😳...

He.. He... That I .. What to say... It'll happen naa... Man they are surviving there.. How come kiss😆... Baag swasan baag... 😆... His Tamarin distracted him... 😕... Awww sooo 😭... She is loving him naa... I'm soo happy yaar... 😉

Finally ...finally dey moved to safety...and then sanskar's so-called gf ...i at frst thot she was flirting wd sanskar but no she showed motherly care!!!Aww!! 😳 swara getting jealous lol... Hmmm.. That gf.. I thought it'll be fun if I bring someone like Marie here... Even I have planned for Swara bf tooo...😆... Naay yaar... She is giving him a mother love... 😛

And our Mr.Maheshwari was in full romantic mood...ooh.lala.😳 ...but swara ...tsk tsk...still nt confeesing it to him...😆n finally sanskar blurted out about her drunken-kiss.!!! 🤣... Mr.Maheswari.. Mostly he'll be in romantic mood... 😆... Swara she is hmmm what to say.. She wants to enjoy this feeling.. For alone... Like he'll woo.. Her.. He will do some tricks to impress her.. This all won't happen if she confess soon.. Soo she wants these from him... Ha.. Ha.. Cat is out of the burrow... 😆

But the best part was swara's confession while sanskar was asleep...with d beautifulll song , one of my favryts...so heartfelt n so real...awww i love u for this!!! i always wanted this song to b played on our swasan in d show but they giv it for raglak...but u fulfilled mah wish!! I absolutely loved the line..."i m totally, eye-popping seriusly, mouth watering deliciously , damn passionately in luv with u"...😆 😳...this dialogue was soo-Kamila!!! Hehehe!! I'm soo glad Indra.. That you liked her confession.. I'm planning for best and funny confession from Swara when he hears it.. Soo I have this emotional confession now... 😛... Hope you like that too... I love you too dear... That song I crazily want that on Swasan.. But this CVS fooled me... 😡... Soo I made it possible here.. That dialogue it have a story.. I'll tell you in next update... 😆.. Mmmawh... I'm crazy naa...

Sry for the late unres n reduced comments dear...i hv been sick... suffering from pox lately so cudn keep up...bt knw dat i luv ur ff n u lots!! 🤗... Don't say sorry yaar pox are taking treatment... It's okay dear take good care.. Don't have cool drinks...

Ahh man I know that... Very much... Let me tell you... I love you a lot... 🤗...

Kam...😉

Indrani😊

Originally posted by: gayu6

Loved the entire update akka. They lost in valley n he s taking care of her making her sleep in his lap. N his confession abt their future. Waiting for her confession when she ll Confess her feelings. Their talks of being gng to b die in the valley. Last she tried to lick his cheeks so sweet.

Originally posted by: gayu6

Just nw read the another update akka. Loved. Loved her care for him n his to her. His new gf so sweet of our King Kong n tamarin. She wants to enjoy his love tat feel for sometime after tat she ll Confess her feelings. N he s thinking to make her confess her feelings for him Wat she s hiding.

Originally posted by: Snehalokwani200

Amazing update

Loved it

Don't know what she is hiding

Waiting for confession

Update soon

Originally posted by: ajuswa19

wow so

romantic part!

loved it😳

Originally posted by: 7APK

So romantic ...
Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon... 😳

Originally posted by: chco

awesome update

Originally posted by: Teddy94

Hi dear... Hi.. Dear... 🤗...

Amazing updates.. Loved it entirely... Love you yaar... I'm very glad that you liked this update...
First of all sry for not replying for the previous update.. Please don't say sorry... 😭
Even my bros Mrg is settled.. So I was lil busy... Convey my best wishes to your brother...😃
N coming to the updates..
They r awesome... I'm very glad yaar...
Swara slept on sanskars lap entire night 😳 .. Hmm.. She slept on his lap... Without knowing that... 😳
N Swara disturbed his sleep by killing tht bug wich was trespassing 😆 .. Swara became Swara here... She forgot that her love was the ground for that bug... 😆.. It was out of curiosity...
They r left alone in the valley... Abandoned in the valley...
But Swara forced sanskar to eat the insects 😆 .. She eat anything.. But for him... 😆
N finally she licked him n ending is awesome 😳 ... Yep finally she teased him... Lick is better than a bite... 😆
Then cmng to scnd part...
I would have liked it if u would have continued the first scene 😆 ... Ohh babes sorry for disappointing you... 😕.. I'll give a perfect one.. 😳
But finally they r rescued... Atlast...
The best part his swaras confession of her feelings...
N the song I love tht song n it suited our swasan completely... 😳 ... Swaras confession.. I'm happy that you liked it... N the song... I badly want this on Swasan.. Soo I made it here... But I didn't do justice to that song...😕
I have a dbt tht whether sanskar heard her confession or nt???... No he didn't here her... He was no sleeping pill...
N cmng to the girl I prefer roshni of jr... Okay yaar...
Continue soon.. Waiting for the nxt update.. Will update soon... 😃
Thnx for the pm dear 😊

No thanks for pm..😡

Love you..

Kam...😉

Originally posted by: leku

Hi sweet sissy!!! Leku... 🤗.. Love you sissy..
Wow terrific and fantastic update Akka..sema..you driving me crazy Akka by your story...After reading wide smile,happiness overloaded mainly I forgot my stress and tension free..thank you so much... I'm very glad sissy... That you liked this update..😃... Aww sissy. The pleasure is all mine sis... I'm very happy that I bursted your stress and tensions.. Out.. 😃.. Don't say thanku..

Sanskar loosing himself..hahaha..oh that sound...truck engine sound disturbed the moment..(lol)..both ran to catch it..oh god he injured badly ...): Swara was hurt badly and finally stopped it..(good).. He is.. He will... Truck became his enemy com saviour... 😆.. They have to.. To meet their great grandchildren... Some flimy touch need naa. Soo I hurt him made her heroine... 😆.. She is hurt to seeing her love in pain and blood...

Swara showing her talents and impressed sanskar..pretty sissy..he trying to light up the mood...and both ready to grow future togther..<3..swara care and trying to tease sanskar with that lady...I love reading it Akka.. Swara.. Showing g her talent.. It's her adrenalin.. It made her run fast to save her life and love... Pretty... You feel I'm happy... Ha.. Ha... Ha.. Don't leave a single chance to tease it's her logo... I'm very happy leku.. You like it..

Sanskar doubt her behaviour..what she feels for me ..its hormones act or she really loves him..but he pretty sure she is matured enought..lets see how he found out what his tamarin playing with him... Sometimes it happens... Will get.. Same happened with him too.. She confused him.. Haa. His inner guts working here .. Sure he'll dig her feelings out... 😛

Swara POV was well described her feelings and what she felt...superb Akka..oh why lady shouting at our Indian sherni(hahaha),...now he making fun with her..and perfect dinner togerther,.it so cute..oh he bite strongly...(-_-)..but shock...O_O . ...nice.. You liked her POV.. 😃.. See I'm grinning... She didn't know about our sherni naa... That's y.. Our sherni.. Is in quite good mood coz she is helping them... 😛... Dinner i want some elegant cute moment between them... Soo I wrote it... Now he tasted her... 😆

Oh Italian lady vs Indian sherni..nice combo sissy..jealous..(never)..swara felt bad due to cold behaviour from that lady...dress oh god I cant stop laughing (xxl)..but sanskar changed the style..superb it was...i was enjoying reading it.
Perfect saas bahu naa.. Tough competition... She was her reason... Will reveal that in next update... Xxl I imagined Swara in that... It made me laugh.. He finds good in worse... Aww sis.. I'm soo happy.. Mmmawh
Oh y sherni had tears.. sanskar(~_~) ..he should listen wife words..but swara holding vase ..he got caught..cha Marie timing wrong...complete part was awesome sissy..swasan nok jok..superb..oh challenge turn into huge impact on both..hahaha both open up their heart thought..but sanskar the way he conveyed how she meant to him...amazing,fabulous description...i loved to core..awesome part..
Hmmm that vase... It'll happen in everyone's life especially me... If anyone irritate me especially my bro.. I'll throw things at him... 😆.. I won't find what it was.. I simply throw... He needs punishment for not listening to his wife words naa ... nok jok.. I'm glad.. Challenge.. Let's see what holding for us... You liked the description.. Love you...
But he was bit hurt...:( even swara also...ohooo again suprise to me..sanskar was awake..<3^3^:D
Hahha swara u got caught..poor boy going through confusion...pls clear his confusion(hehehehe)...oh Marie saved her..sharing bed.. :P fantastic part...suprise...
Yep he was hurt but all is fine in love.. Sure will clear his confusion in next part... Sharing bed.. It may become their routine sleeping style...😉
Nice song selection Akka:)
With flow you conveying theswara feeling and what he thought about him from bottom of her heart...its so nice ..just well written or described in normal or reality words for it..i loved it..she needs to enjoy it alone..(let her sissy)..but sanskar got the truth..hahaha he going bring out from her..waiting for it..sissy...good sleep...
Song super naa.. Suites with swasan than other couple.. I live to use normal words than a hard words.. For comic.. And romance it'll go well... 😛.. I'm very glad sissy.. Overwhelmed by your comment . letting her.. For a while...
Wow superb,fantastic long update..i loved it...
Sorry for late :'(

Mmmawh sissy... Don't say sorry...😭
Love you sissy..
Love you too sissy...
Lekah
Kam...😉

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...