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Indrani

@indrani7495

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Posted: 9 years ago

#371

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Unres..Kamila 🤗

Lovely lovely update dear!!! 😳 absolutely loved it!! 😃

The starting note was a romantic 1 n i was almst hoping for the kiss to happen... Fingers crossed...but damn!! There came the truck 😆 ...wow swasan racing behind the truck ...😆...sanskar getting hurt...ouch it hurt me almst aswell!!😭 but the way swara showered her concern on sanskar aftr seeing him hurt was wonderfull!!😳...

Finally ...finally dey moved to safety...and then sanskar's so-called gf ...i at frst thot she was flirting wd sanskar but no she showed motherly care!!!Aww!! 😳 swara getting jealous lol...

And our Mr.Maheshwari was in full romantic mood...ooh.lala.😳 ...but swara ...tsk tsk...still nt confeesing it to him...😆n finally sanskar blurted out about her drunken-kiss.!!! 🤣

But the best part was swara's confession while sanskar was asleep...with d beautifulll song , one of my favryts...so heartfelt n so real...awww i love u for this!!! i always wanted this song to b played on our swasan in d show but they giv it for raglak...but u fulfilled mah wish!! I absolutely loved the line..."i m totally, eye-popping seriusly, mouth watering deliciously , damn passionately in luv with u"...😆 😳...this dialogue was soo-Kamila!!! Hehehe!!

Sry for the late unres n reduced comments dear...i hv been sick... suffering from pox lately so cudn keep up...bt knw dat i luv ur ff n u lots!! 🤗

Indrani😊

Edited by indrani7495 - 9 years ago

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Anamika sharma

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Posted: 9 years ago

#372

superb chptr dear
loved swara confession to sanskar's unconsciousness
song selection r mindblowing ... loved tht song so much
beautifully written
cont soon

thnks for pm

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SwaSan4ever

@SwaSan4ever

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Posted: 9 years ago

#373

Simply loved it beautifully written ! Loved swara's confession but wish somehow sanskar over heard it ! I cnt wait for the day whn she ll confess I want to see his reaction!! Tht will b the worlds best moment for him
Will b waiting for the next part

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Teddy94

@Teddy94

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Posted: 9 years ago

#374

Hi dear... Amazing updates.. Loved it entirely...
First of all sry for not replying for the previous update..
Even my bros Mrg is settled.. So I was lil busy...
N coming to the updates..
They r awesome...
Swara slept on sanskars lap entire night 😳
N Swara disturbed his sleep by killing tht bug wich was trespassing 😆
They r left alone in the valley
But Swara forced sanskar to eat the insects 😆
N finally she licked him n ending is awesome 😳
Then cmng to scnd part...
I would have liked it if u would have continued the first scene 😆
But finally they r rescued...
The best part his swaras confession of her feelings...
N the song I love tht song n it suited our swasan completely... 😳
I have a dbt tht whether sanskar heard her confession or nt???
N cmng to the girl I prefer roshni of jr...
Continue soon.. Waiting for the nxt update..
Thnx for the pm dear 😊

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#375

Loved the entire update akka. They lost in valley n he s taking care of her making her sleep in his lap. N his confession abt their future. Waiting for her confession when she ll Confess her feelings. Their talks of being gng to b die in the valley. Last she tried to lick his cheeks so sweet.

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#376

Just nw read the another update akka. Loved. Loved her care for him n his to her. His new gf so sweet of our King Kong n tamarin. She wants to enjoy his love tat feel for sometime after tat she ll Confess her feelings. N he s thinking to make her confess her feelings for him Wat she s hiding.

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sneha lokwani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#377

Amazing update

Loved it

Don't know what she is hiding

Waiting for confession

Update soon

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kamila.

@Seriously.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#378

Originally posted by: sujoyricky
Unres on page - 49 😉

Red it...

I'm desperately waiting for your updates of phir se... Love and bet.. Sorry bro forgot the name... 😃

Update soonsoon 😡

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kamila.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#379

Hi.. Nidhi... Sissy love you soo much... I send return pm... But you exceed the level please delete some PMS...

Hi darling sissy.. How are you ? Oh it's okay sissy.. Even my mobile troubles me a lot...

Aww love you soo much dear... I'm glad that you liked this update.. Yep she loves Him soo much.. In upcoming parts you'll realise it... But she is out of experience soo she is playing with him. But sure she'll express her love to him...

Mmmawh dear... Take care...

Love you too... 🤗

Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago