RagYa SS{{{{{ SHAADI }}}} Posted Final Part In Page----1

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Hello friends i am Fari & back with this second story But this time thought to write it on RagYa , Hope you all like it 😃
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Characters:::::::::
1)))Ragini:::
Ragini is 18 years old young girl very shy, obedient & sensitive girl
Literally a girl who's life is surrounded around her Dad Shekhar and her Daadi
Ragini is a very bright student but due to her upbringing she can't disobey her Daadi so, left studies and agreed for arranged marriage

2)))Laksh::::
Laksh is 21 years old Marwari boy Extremely obedient and blind follower of his Step Mom Arnapurna & father Durga Prasad Maheshwari

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{{{{{{Location-------Maheshwari Mansion}}}}}

Arnapurna and Durga Prasad talking to each other about Laksh's marriage that how they found a perfect match for their son who will always obey them and will also bring good amount of dowry with her also . Arnapurna informs Laksh that tomorrow they will go to meet Ragini at her house Laksh like a good boy nods his head in yes and agrees
{{{{Location-------Gadodiya House}}}
Maheshwari family reaches Gadodiya house and meets them Ragini enters with a tray of tea in hand Laksh is lost after seeing so innocent and naive girl like Ragini and fall in love at the er first meeting with Ragini . Ragini also likes Laksh and becomes happy of what every destiny has chosen for her . RagYa's marriage gets fixed . But Ragini is not aware of the fact that Laksh knows that his family is taking dowry and want a naive daugther -In-Law just to control and rule on her
{{{{RagYa's Wedding Day}}}}
Maheshwari's reaches mandap with Laksh But AP seems to be not happy with arrangements for the wedding and asks Shekhar about the arrangements of dowry including jewelries. Shekhar was not aware of this dowry giving thing, Shocked Shekhar angrily looks towards his Mom who was well aware of every thing.
Shekhar then Smiles and asks everyone that while he arranges dowry they should go and have food.
Everyone agrees to him.
After some time when everyone's eating is over and pandit asks all to proceed towards Mandap. Shekhar comes and pushes Durga Prasad and declares to everyone that he won't give his daughter in such a greedy and controlling family with a spineless puppet husband like Laksh , Shekhar also says that he didn't wanted to waste the wedding food that's why asked them to eat first because till know no guest have ever went without having food from their house that's why he didn't reacted that time . Meanwhile Ragini who was Shocked with whatever is happening with her was standing and tears were falling from her cheeks. An angry Laksh tries to Slap Shekhar for pushing his father but Ragini stops him by holding his hand and gives a Slap to Laksh and says that::::Don't you dare to slap my father Mr Laksh Maheshwari for a spineless and puppet guy who has no thoughts of his own just dances on others tunes i can't tolerate my fathers insult Thank you very much everyone for coming now please get out of my house right now Get Out

{{{{ After that day 6 years have Passed}}}}
Laksh has left his house and is working independently he still loves Ragini and in this years have asked for forgiveness to her many times but all the time Ragini's answer was No.

In this 6 years Ragini changed herself into a confident and independent girl. She is a doctor now and vowed to spend her whole life working for the poor and needy people's She won't marry ever, She want to spend her whole life dedicating to welfare of the society. She have understood that life has many many more beautiful colors then Marriage, Colors of independence, colors of happiness which comes from helping others
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Small Cameo Of SwaSan😳
Swara Maheshwari::::::Laksh's Dearest Younger Sister Who Is A Bubbly Full Of Life Girl Studying In College And Apple Of Eye For Laksh, He Adores And Loves His Chotti Swaru

Sanskaar Bose:::::Ragini's Long Lost Brother, DadaJi Who 20 Years Back Ran Away With Baby Sanskaar
Small Cameo Of SwaSan😳


6Years Later:
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Rakshbandhan Day::::::Everyone Is Busy In Celebration But As Ragini Doesn't Have A Brother So She Always Remain Extremely Sad In This Day,Every Year She Buys A Rakhi And Keeps Them With Her In A Beautiful Box.
Ragini Is Working As A Doctor In A Hospital Suddenly She Saw A Old Man With A Young Handsome Boy.Ragini Becomes Shocked To See Her DadaJi Alive.She Silently Follows DadaJi And Sees A Small Cottage.When DadaJi Came Out Cottage Ragini Decide To Confront DadaJi.

Ragini DadaJi Confrontation:::::::::::
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Ragini Says To DadaJi That She Is Ragini His Grand Daughter,DadaJi Gets Emotional Hearing That And Hugs Ragini,Ragini Rubs His Tears And Says Why He Left Whole Family?
Than DaadJi Confesses That Ragini Had A Twin Brother Who Is Of Same Age As Ragini Is.
DadaJi Says Dadi Wanted To Kill The Girl Child Amongst The Twins But DadaJi MU Shekher & Thinks He Is Also Involve With Dadi & To Give Them Punishment Of Life Time He Stole The Baby But He Thought He Is Stealing The Baby Girl But Accidentally It Was Boy Which He Took With Him And Ran Away From That City.The Bus Were DadaJi Was Travelling Mets With An Accident And Everyone Thought He Is Dead.Once DadJi Came To Gadodiya House But Heard That Sharmishtha Died Few Days Back And Dadi Due To Fear Of Samaj Walee Rearing Ragini.DadaJi Thinks If He Says Baby Boy Is Alive Than Daadi & Shekhar Will Abundant Ragini,That's Why He Silently Leaves From There.
Ragini Shocked Overwhelmed Says Where Is Her Chottu Brother And DadaJi Calls Sanskaar And Ragini All Teary Eyed Sees Her Sanskaar Bhaiya For The First Time As Ragini Knows Sanskaar Is Her Elder Brother By One Minute, First She Takes His Arshibaad Than Want Hugs Her Bhai And Cries Saying I Also Have A Brother Who Will Tie Rakhi From Me In This Day Of Brother And Sister .Than Ragini Opens Her Rakhi Box And Happily Ties All Rakhi's Which She Saved Till Now.
Maheshwari House Garden Area:::::::
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Laksh Is Saying To Someone Just Because Of Her He Came But Won't Enter House.A Smiling Face With Joy Laksh's Little Chotti Behena Swaru Hugs Him And Say Bhaiyu I Am Glad You At least Came For Me.Than Swara Ties Rakhi In Laksh's Hand And Informs Him That She Is Joining New Collage Which Is In Same Place Were Laksh Lives Currently.
After Few Days::::::::::::
Laksh Comes To Hospital To Meet Ragini And Again Tries To Apologize To Ragini But She Ignores Laksh Grabs Ragini's One Hand In Desperation And Says Today You Have To Listen To Me But Ragini Pushes Laksh And Says Go Laksh Can't Forgive You Please Leave From Here Right Now.
At DadaJi's Home Sanskaar Informs Ragini That He Loves A Girl And Wants To Marry Her Ragini Asks Who Is That Lucky Girl Sanskaar Blush's And Says Her Name Is Swara Maheshwari, She Belongs To Maheshwari Family Of Kolkata.Ragini Shocked But For Brothers Sake Decides To Talk To Laksh.
Ragini&Laksh Joins Hand Just To Get Their Siblings Married.Without Informing Maheswari's And Gadodiya's They Arranges All Things For SwaSan Marriage.While Preparing For Wedding And Doing All Arrangements Ragini Notices That Laksh Changed Allot He Now Has A Spine And Is Able To Take Important Decisions By Himself Which Melts Ragini's Heart.
While SwaSan Are Taking Saath Phere Ragini Searches For Laksh To Express Her Newly Developed Feeling For Him.
In Hurry She Collides With Laksh Both Falls On Floor And From Upstair Someone Drops Flower Bucket Accidentally Both RagLak Fallen Beside Each Other And Flower Patel Falls From Upstairs.
And One Empty Basket Falls On Ragini's Head And Her Dream Breaks She Laughs And Again Starts Looking For Laksh
She Sees Laksh With Some Boys Laughing Together She Goes Near And Gets Shocked After Hearing What Laksh Was Saying.
Laksh::::::::Hahahahahaha,giving Hi-5 To His Friends And Says Finally After So Many Year I Will Win The Bet Today As I Am Daam Sure Ragini Will Propose Me.
Ragini Shocked Grabbed That Engagement Ring Which She Wanted To Give To Laksh.
Laksh Said I Never Ever Loved That BehenJi Ragini And Laughs Claps Like Mad Person & Says How Dare That BehenJi Refused To Marry Me Laksh Maheshwari And Insulted Me In Mandap In front Of All Guest And Family.I Can Never Forgive That Loser Conservative Girl On Whom I Was Doing Ehsaan By Marrying Her,That Girl Had Guts To Reject Me How Dare She, Laksh Breaks Beer Bottle Which Was In His Hand.
Since That Day I Wanted Take Revenge From That Ragini And Destroy Her Self respect And Ego Forever Ragini Will Be Doomed And Again Starts Laughing Hahahahahaha.
Ragini Shocked After Hearing This Confession And Falls Down From 1st Floors Roof And Falls In The Swimming Pool.
SwaSan After Getting Married Were Searching For RagLak But When They Come Near Swimming Pool They Saw Pools Color In Red In Blood And Ragini's Body Is Floating In Pool Lifelessly.
Laksh Is Watching All This From Upstairs Shocked That His Revenge Planned Backfired.
Few Months Later Ragini Is Completely Mentally Unstable And Sometime Behaves Violently And Screams If Anyone Takes Name Of Love.She Even Tried To Kill Herself Shaved Her Hair And Attempted Suicide. Unaware Of The Reason Why Ragini Became Mentally Ill SwaSan And DadaJi Decides To Send Ragini In Mental Asylum For Better Treatment.
Doctors And Nurses Are Taking Ragini To Mental Asylum And Laksh Watches Ragini Leaving.
Laksh Shouts That No No My Plan Can't Fail I Was Almost Successful In Taking Revenge,I Can't Fail She Rejected Me In Our Shaaadi's Day And On Swara & Sanskaar's Shaadi I Was Successful In Taking Revenge I Can't Fail,
He Falls Down On Floor And Cries Loudly And Slaps Himself,Than Again Cries And Says Look Laksh Look What Happened Because Of Your Ego And Revenge You Except It Or Not But You Also Started To Love Ragini But You Became Blind In Ego And Continued The Revenge Look What You Did To That Girl Who Always Loved You More Than Herself What You Returned Her For Her Unconditional Love Only Betrayal.Mean While Ragini's Van Leaves With Ragini In Frustration That He Destroyed Everything He Broke Her Beautiful Heart Laksh Takes Gun In His Hand And Points It On His Head.Shoots Himself Falls On Floor While Shouting I Love You Ragini And Dies.

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Edited by Fariiiii - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting plot..
I am waiting to see how laksh is going to make her fall for him now..
Update soonish
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice concepts liked reading it hope you post another part to this story
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Originally posted by: jyothirgamaya

Very interesting plot..
I am waiting to see how laksh is going to make her fall for him now..
Update soonish

Hi Thanks for commenting 😃 I will try to update it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update 😊😉
Please post next part soon 😃
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Really nice concepts liked reading it hope you post another part to this story

Hi thanks for commenting 😃I will try to update it soon.
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Originally posted by: Apudeep

Nice update😊😉

Please post next part soon😃

Hi Sis 🤗I have still not thought about the next part but if you all are liking it then will try to complete it soon
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Awesome start 👏
Update soon
Pls pm me next time
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Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Awesome start 👏
Update soon
Pls pm me next time

Hi thanks for commenting 😃Actually this is second time i am writing some thing and 1st time on RagYa so was nervous about it. Will definitely give PM about next update.

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