Vajra : An elven tale SwaSan chapter 13 page 52 Updated 21/5/16 - Page 6

Originally posted by: gayu6

Different start related to battle. pls continue soon and pls pm me also

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Dearest Sapna,

When you say you're interested, I feel like dancing

You my friend as I have said countless times before are so good with your foresight, and need I say, most of your guesses are pure gold here. Just for the sake of managing suspense I will not tell you which ones.

Gosh! How on earth did you guess that VAJRA can refer to a person? I'm so amazed, so so very amazed!

Thank you so much, your views matter a lot to me. I hope you will keep sharing them here and I hope to keep your interest up with the coming chapters. Thanks again!

Loads of love,

Sakura

Originally posted by: foresight

hahahah...ah elementary my dear watson 😆 😆 glad i got some guess right. 😆 😆

i cannot believe the number of typos that i had in my first response 😆

Originally posted by: Vishi-

Great start
its so intriguing...
cannot wait more to read further...
plz update soon 😳

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

Interesting start

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Sakura meeting after a longtime ,hope u remember me😃😃

I am yet to read all lot of ur early works ,will read them all and will comment😃😃

Okk coming to this SS ,Awesome start👏👏

I loved the title ⭐️⭐️

Pls continue soon

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

A very intriguing start, Saku. 🤗 🤗

I just loved the references to the setting, poetic and vivid as always with you. The burning, blazing white sun, and the whipping hot breeze, the battlefield filled with sand that has been soaked with blood spilled over centuries; and yet, in one of the protagonists' mind, is captured the image, or is the memory? of snow. Far away from the scorching sand and blazing heat and the metallic smell of blood...

If I were to hazard a guess, the characters, in respective order of introduction, are Swara, Lakshya, Sanskaar and Ragini. You will tell me if am I am right, I hope. 😊

You know that I am a massive LOTR/ Hobbit fan. Its the only thing that trumps my Harry Potter mania. This whole setting reminds me of the Battle Of Helm's Deep, or the Battle of Pellenor Fields; or perhaps the Battle of the 5 Armies. The setting is simply epic, grand and breath taking.

And the title---Vajra. My God. What a wonderful one you have there--- it fascinated me at the word go, for you know how interested I am in Indian Mythos. I just can't wait to see the parallels of the Indra--Vritra story being drawn here.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Nice.

Originally posted by: manishasatpathy

hey!! another story i am so excited :), the opening was amazing though i couldn't make heads or tails abt what was going on :D still it seemed beautiful so plzz update soon
:)

Originally posted by: Sanya17

Wow u r back with a bang 😃😃whenever I see any new story of urs I feel really happy and excited happy to know that I will be able to read a new amazing story excited to read a new thrilling and suspencefull story so its time for us to guess the mystery from the clues u will leave for us as a crazy fan of ur stories i know u r really good in building suspense let's see if we will be able to catch the clues n guess the mystery

Vajra from the name n prolouge is it a historical story u told that its a fantasy so is it a historical story? From prologue the description of sand and sword I think it is a historical story but those words could be symbolic too it is not necessary that sword will always have to be real sword sometimes we use the word sword to mean that we know how to attack our enemy its not necessary that the attack will have to be physical a heart without love can be described as dessert too so it could be based on present time too so I can't be sure if its historical or present time or will it be an incomplete love story which is waiting to get completed from centuries

U have a way to attract readers n make them keep guessing just with a prologue

If possible pls pm me when u update, update soon really excited to read more