Vajra : An elven tale SwaSan chapter 13 page 52 Updated 21/5/16 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Vishi-

Thanyou so much clearing my doubts 😳
@bold will wait patiently... I love suspense 😳

And I ll try my best to share my views for each update 😳

Acha tho sanskaar warrior prince hai.and kavi usko guard karnewali warrior. Aur indono ki relationship aage nahin badsakti due to class difference.and mohan abhi shona ko protect karega for friendship .par shona ki maa k piche pratula hai ku ki who supremacy chahta hai.par shona ke piche ku hai sab log.and yeh pratula supreme hai k sanskaar.sach kahu jis tarah se mohan shona ko observe kar raha tha playground par it sounded so creepy.aapne mere rounte khade karne mein kamyaab rahi.

Originally posted by: nut-kut-86

Acha tho sanskaar warrior prince hai.and kavi usko guard karnewali warrior. Aur indono ki relationship aage nahin badsakti due to class difference.and mohan abhi shona ko protect karega for friendship .par shona ki maa k piche pratula hai ku ki who supremacy chahta hai.par shona ke piche ku hai sab log.and yeh pratula supreme hai k sanskaar.sach kahu jis tarah se mohan shona ko observe kar raha tha playground par it sounded so creepy.aapne mere rounte khade karne mein kamyaab rahi.

Feels like lotr + Thor + shiva ... But well done blending all. So Shona is to be the next heir after killing arya. Shona = Swara. Kavita I guess chooses to die may be for sanskar. May be her death gives him some protection? And then sanskar falls for Swara. I wonder if Pratula's daughter is Ragini. Hmmm. Swara seems tone half blood too. She is seer but she seems to have love and wisdom. In the intro it felt as though she didn't discriminate between winner and loser making me feel she feels similar for both. But then the question is who is the brother looking at and thinking she doesn't love him and he has lost the better when he seems to be winning the dual with

Very well written and as always you have held the mystery close to your heart.

Res

Amazing prologue ,loved it a lot👏👏

Dear Sakura,

Hi Sakura,

Originally posted by: foresight

Feels like lotr + Thor + shiva ... But well done blending all. So Shona is to be the next heir after killing arya. Shona = Swara. Kavita I guess chooses to die may be for sanskar. May be her death gives him some protection? And then sanskar falls for Swara. I wonder if Pratula's daughter is Ragini. Hmmm. Swara seems tone half blood too. She is seer but she seems to have love and wisdom. In the intro it felt as though she didn't discriminate between winner and loser making me feel she feels similar for both. But then the question is who is the brother looking at and thinking she doesn't love him and he has lost the better when he seems to be winning the dual with

Very well written and as always you have held the mystery close to your heart.

Originally posted by: NitaReid

Res

Unres..

Saku dear this intro was amazing. I absolutely loved it . ⭐️. I am lot curious about all the characters. Part Naga prince who loves peace instead of war😎. kavi the girl who will die for him ,Arya ,Mohan,shona , Pratula all the characters are interesting and the whole Fictional world you created was too good. Naga vs vajra vs anjanis. Cant wait to read the next chapter dear.

Do continue soon . Eagerly waiting for Chapter 1 😊.