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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sree8410



Sree 🤗


I really feel bad for her more now. But its alright soon her husband will fulfil the duties of her parents as well. So true 😉


The question which will be answered some time in the future (but not too far)? 😉 Hopefully soon . You know my pace😆



Ohh!! I don't want a saint mother-in-law. A more normal one would suffice.😊 You didn't use it as the call was more personal. Messaging wouldn't bring in the emotions a call can make. Though single liners hearing her voice would have made a difference to him and her too. 😳 We all want a normal one dear😆.


Nita dear forgetting your wife even in a dream is a punishable crime, I know 😆. How could you do that to my poor cupid? And yes maybe in future when she comes to know she might forgive him but under current situation I don't think she will see his efforts in that light.Well it because Lakshya the cupid cant multi task. He did make Ragini fall in love with him by this, Remember he was constantly around her for months till she fell in love with him. Exactly it all depends on when she knows about it 😉



I truly agree. This emotion is much strong for her and she will have a tough time coming out of it and finally finding peace. It will take a lot of work and effort but if she is determined then she can do it. The question here is how determined she is..She is very determined and for someone who always tried to be perfect , they will have this competitve nature to do everything 100 % they decided too. So dont worry she will reach there soon.😊



Yes indeed, I forgot about all the other pics on the wall. But its nice to know she was jealous of a stranger and if I'm right you will definitely bring her in to fuel the fire😉...Let see if i bring her in or not😈



I love you for this😳.

As for delaying their visit there was a good idea. Not because of the result but because she could ask her sister to know more about Sanskar. Not that she did it but still even here she was able to know how her in-laws death.Well I know asking Pari or Adrash about Sanskar seems like an viable option but i want her love birds to open up about themselves to each other slowly and realize on there own .How perfect they are for each other. 😳



You can take all the time to write this chapter just for this one reason. I'll not ask for a few days about the progress on next update😳 ..What if i didnt give you that scene 😈. Well anything can happen 😉. But about the update . I have yet to start . So you need to wait for it dear. Will try to post one before the weekend .



Patience is not my strongest suits Nita. But like I said I have no option, if I ask and you tell me then I have ruined it for both of us, if you don't I'll spend most of my time wondering or coming up with all the possible ways you would deal with it. But I like your surprises and the way you deal with them. That makes me love this SS more ..Well patience is not my strong suit either. I am always like when will Shruti ,Saku or Nimmi update. 😆 . But as you said knowing what will happen is not exactly something satisfying, as it can take out the surprise factor Love-Nita

Love

Sree

Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res 😊 Will Un Res as soon as I can, dear. Not feeling well so catching up with pending Un-res's a little gradually. Please bear with me.

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Hey Nita 🤗 🤗

Back finally for my Un-res, thanks for your patience dear. Have been feeling really under the weather for many days, with my vitamin deficiency and severe cold. Finally got a bit better, thanks for all your get well soon wishes.
🤗...You can take all the time you want Viji dear .I am happy to know your are getting better. Hopefully you will be back to your best soon😊

Coming to this chapter, I liked the steady and gradual pace you have shown in the growth and deepening of the SwaSan relationship. That gave a realistic touch, because both of them were kind of forced into their wedding. Though they are of course soulmates 😊, it would take some time for them to understand each other, become comfortable with one another. I am happy that no one is complaining about the pace. As i still do feel it is a bit slow. But as you said i cant seem them becoming close with out the small steps first. Chapter 9 will be a slow one too .Precaution warning .😆

Sanskaar is really so mature and understanding. I loved the way you have described his thoughts about Swara---his introspection that he really loves the way she looks, the innocence and beauty of her eyes, and more than that, her inner beauty which complements her outer beauty too. I loved the way you made your readers look at Swara through Sanskaar's eyes. 😊 His regard and affection for her, his admiration for the way she forgave Lakshya, the way she has maintained her cheerfulness despite her childhood of always being forced into activities which would suit Ragini---all these were well described.Thanks dear😳. I wanted readers to see how Sanskar views Swara and i am glad i was able to convey it a little.

I also liked his thought process and introspection about his expectations from their marriage, how he would handle the situation if he fell in love with Swara but she didn't reciprocate, whether he was right in making that promise to release her from their bond instead of just saying that they should work on their marriage. That was one very thoughtful and mature contemplation---very much like Sanskaar. Yeah, Sanskar might have on instinct tried to keep Swara preferences first but unlike in the show were Sanskar already knows he is in for heart break when they got married for real even though it was forced,here he is still new to this marriage as Swara. So it seemed logical that his mind would think about all the possible outcomes .😊

I was imagining Adarsh pulling Sanskaar's leg mercilessly, when Sanskaar took Swara's name as soon as he picked the call. 😆 Best pals are like that na---they can sometimes tease a person to the hilt! 😉...Best Pals are meant for that ... 😆

Also liked the subtle but sweet SwaSan moment when Sanskaar went to pick up Swara---their conversation about starting conversation in the right way was nice fun. 😆 "Good afternoon" 😉...Well Swara is a quick learner.😉 😆. Happy to know you liked that scene 😊

I liked the way how Swara is shown realizing how understanding and accommodating Sanskaar is, how much he is going out of his way to make things comfortable for her, without ever making her very conscious about it, either. Small tings--like sharing his cupboard for her to keep her stuff, ensuring that she can wear whatever she feels comfortable in, and so on. And luckily, Sujju is also a thoughtful and genuinely nice person, not the occasionally hysterical person she is in the serial. 😉...I dont want hysterical sujatha in my SS😆. Well now it time for Sanskar to make sure Swara is comfortable.I am hoping soon she will return the favor of thinking about him too😉

I really liked the SwaSan scene in Sanskaar's parents room, too. The way Sanskaar "introduced" Swara to the photo of his late parents, was so moving. Swara got a bit jealous seeing that pretty girl standing next to Sanskaar in many of his college photos. 😃 Wonder who that girl was? You've described Sanskaar is not building too many castles in the air about his future marriage, not dreaming of love the way Lakshya was. He had decided to wholeheartedly accept whoever entered his life as his spouse, and give her his affection and respect. So wonder who this girl could have been? I don't think Swara has anything to feel jealous about---but the very fact that she is feeling jealous is very interesting. 😳 😉 ...Happy to know you liked that scene. And keep guessing who the girl in the picture is 😉...

Also liked the subtle way you described Ragini's reactions to the proposed party thrown by their office staff. She's realized that she wants to overcome her jealousy of Swara, but also that it would not be really easy. So she decides not to go for a party where Swara would be the centre of attraction, and where she could again land up feeling left out and jealous. Good that she shared this feeling frankly with Lakshya...It better to avoid adding fuel to the fire😉. And while we might want to prove our self strong by facing it , sometimes it is quite okay to take a step back if we cant handle it. She is going to learn to live with Swara after all. Why go and add more jealousy .😆

And the ending---SwaSan sharing a bed with a pillow wall between them, but Swara's arms cuddling Sanskaar in the middle of the night, was so very romantic. 😳 ...Yeah when will we get any scene like this in the show😭.

Waiting for the next update, Nita dear. Will comment faster this time. 😊..Yet to start the next one...Hectic week 😭... As always i love reading your comment just the same. So when you comment doesnt matter dear. But i really get super excited when i see your comment thought or your OS for the matter. Any news OS/ss/ff on my way soon .😉 I take anything if it is from you ...



Lots of Love,

---Viji



Also Rafa lost and what was supposed to be an awesome week turned to a disaster with Fed out too .😭 😭. Actually he retired due to the heat of Miami. His first in the past 6 years. And i watched the match alive. It was not a great feeling to see him struggle with dizziness. 😭


Tomorrow is match between Djokovic and Theim. One i am looking forward too soo much.Of course you can guess who i will support😉


Love

Nita



Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
My friend,
First of all sorry for my late reply.
The update was awesome.
The feeling of love is started from both sides. The care and jealousy are the common symptoms of that.
But when they will realize it? It will be interesting.
Sanskar is a good husband. He was waiting for her mis call and he checked his phone more than ten times.
And swara is jealous, she is behaving like a typical wife.
The fact is that they accepted this wedding.
And laksh is playing the cupid between swasan, nice
And ragini is in her thoughts and ego.
Waiting for your next update.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

My friend,

First of all sorry for my late reply.
The update was awesome.
The feeling of love is started from both sides. The care and jealousy are the common symptoms of that.
But when they will realize it? It will be interesting.
Sanskar is a good husband. He was waiting for her mis call and he checked his phone more than ten times.
And swara is jealous, she is behaving like a typical wife.
The fact is that they accepted this wedding.
And laksh is playing the cupid between swasan, nice
And ragini is in her thoughts and ego.
Waiting for your next update.


Thanks Dear. Happy to know you liked this update😊 . Plz no sorry from now on, you can take your time .

Well they can pretend they are roommates but they are seeing the other one as there spouse all the time. You just can't live in denial about the fact that they are married .You might try not to address the issue now but you cant help see the other one as your spouse. Will try to update before Weekend


Love

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago
Updated first two parts.. Will update the next two before the weekend
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res 😊

Will Un res for a longer comment later, but in the meantime---who is the person whose call Sanskaar is taking? The one whose name comes with a few heart icons attached on his phone's contacts display? 😊

I think its likely to be Uttara? 😉 All of Swara's jealousy and worry for nothing. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nita another mind blowing update 👏
I think sanskar is became baby sitter 😆
I am sure swara will like this 😳
Adharsh don't get jealous because he want sleep only 😆
Sharmishta's misunderstanding 😕
But thank god parineeta come in right time and handel the very well 😳
After this fight swara realize that sanskar is so understanding
That phone call 😕 i think it is uttara or his best friend from college 😉
But with this swara will get jealous 🤣 which i am loving it 😈
Swaragini scene was awesomely written 👏 👏
There deal it is superb it would be interesting to see that
Sanskar brought a dress for swara 😳
Seriously i loved it
Update soon
Edited by sujoyricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
lovely... loved both the parts... the baby seems to make sanskar his favorite baby sitter.. and im sure swara would be so proud of her husband...
sharmishta misunderstanding swara thinking that she was running away from her new family and husband.. but the good outcome of this fight was that swara realised that sanskar seems to understand her way more than even her mother...


im glad ragini finally told swara the reality about her jealousy.. and the competition between the two sisters will be interesting..

again.. sanskar, the perfect human being... he went and got a dress for her.. swara's happiness is always his priority... im liking the budding feelings between these two...


about the phone call... idk whoever it was, and i have no doubts on sanskar, but i really hope it does not create any misunderstanding between swara and sanskaar...


overall, lovely update... cya at the next two parts of this chapter..

love
Jessica

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