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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sarra0

Chapter 7 - Part 1

Sujjata was worried for saskaar and his possible heartbreak was nice to c...Aw that was so sweet of swara to not only realise wat sujata was worried about but to also give her some of mind by saying she wud inform her b4 leaving...See i told you Sujatha will be a nice mom and Saas ๐Ÿ˜Š.

๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† always love bed coach negotiations...so much fun...and sanskaar did well..to negotiate coach for 5 days...lets c the solution he comes up for either being on the coach everyday or another solution...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† sanskaar actually gave her 2more minutes on asking..Well i love it when someone listen to me and give me 2more minutes too ๐Ÿ˜‰. My mom does that and even my Sister too. For the sleep loving me it kind of a big deal ๐Ÿ˜†. Happy to know you liked the negotiation, i wanted to write the entire scene but felt it would get too long or wont be able to give justice to it. Imagination makes it much more fun๐Ÿ˜Š.

Swara has no problem admitting she snapped and apologise accordingly...just wat v expect from her..owning her mistakes...Well in the show ,she apologize for no fault of her, at least here i made her apologise for some thing she did๐Ÿ˜† .

I wud any day take a one line sincere compliment then pages and pages of cheesy or fluttry flatery compliment which may sound good but have no weight behind them...compliments like the charaters as well...laksh all flash no substance, and sanskaar all sincerity and substance...and swara complimented him?? ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜ณ...Swara is supposed to be modern and i have every intention of keeping her the same and not become adarsh bahu. The marriage was forced but that doesnt mean she should simply blush and get all shy at compliments.She should be able to give it back too. ๐Ÿ˜‰ . I take the sincere ones too. But both Ragya and SwaSan are made for each other. Ragini would have loved it ๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ sujjata wants them out of the house for a while so she gets peace and can watch her serials..lets hope its not SR she is watching, it wud give her nightmares...Just like the ones we have been forced to endure at nights๐Ÿ˜ญ. Come on the serial has evil Saas and our shows Saas are saints who can forgive murderers and accept them in an heart beat๐Ÿ˜‰

๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿคฃ ur piling the pressure on ragani left and right...she is being bombarded every which she turns by perfection...of course for some coming accross such perfection wud make sure they never achieved it ๐Ÿ˜‰...u even used the words two perfect people for us ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†..She needs to feel the pressure or else she wont crack that easily ๐Ÿ˜†. Our two perfect people ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Hai awkward silence due to compliments...can only imagine when they start having feelings wat they wud b like..More fun for us and sweet torture for them๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Huh shekhar does anything and it surprises ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...and here he returned a hug from here..๐Ÿคฃ shekhar opted for news as a safe bet and silence as key...sanskaar has his head screwed on right then...Poor Swara, Her father hugging her is an surprise .And here she lived with him all her life unlike the show ๐Ÿ˜†

Iv commented enough on shomi ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† wont bore u with it again The show keeps saying how good Shomi the mother is , so i thought maybe she is but i do get while i sketch out her character based on that, it comes out exactly like you thoughts.๐Ÿ˜†

I love how swara is taking his comfort into account and how she got dessert changed without telling shomi y.., he eat Kheer made by Swara 2day, but he may not have been able to have it made from someone elses hand, especially if she is equivalent of mother..lYep is want Swara to take his comfort in account too, she would not be able to do that in his house like he does but she can do it in her house as this is her territory .๐Ÿ˜ƒ

And he hers by suggesting bacholetter party..of course without explaining...as usual swara active imagination filled in the blanks ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†...one day that will cause her problems... liked how she didnt forget her newly made promise to sujjata...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† of course sanskaars bachelor party was as unique as him...all alone... Mine would be alone too. But it will be for a month . I love to get some time alone for myself๐Ÿ˜† . Swara active imagination is effective ๐Ÿ˜‰.. Love-Nita




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: leku

Res

Unres..
Sorry for late unres...am in holiday trip..still cant leave forum for a day also.. Sorry for the late reply too Lekah. I am at home ,still a busy week . Nothing keeps me away from the forum but though the time i spend here is very less during this week

Coming to story...
Sissy again u did it...wow swasan portrayed was amazing sissy.. Thanks dear๐Ÿ˜ณ

Sanskar is gem of the person sissy..in busy situation planned to give time to understand his wife superb..
And waiting for swara msg or call (hahahaha)... ๐Ÿ˜†
Swara at her place..thinking about her prince understanding nature etc..i loved it sissy..Well he must have agreed to the marriage with out being in love with her but he surely did try to spend some time with her and get to know them.That why he is a gem like you said ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

That situation...between two daughters...realistic..want to take care both...beautifully described that part... ๐Ÿ‘ ...Thanks. Both Pari and Swara needs there parents. Timing conflict though๐Ÿ˜†

Sanskar thought about his situation..before and after marriage...awesome..
His thought about kavitha ...so truthfulness...im happy he is not hurt ...coz no feelings.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ .I wont let my Sanskar waste five minutes crying for Kavitha ,while the show made him suffer for five years only to destroy there love story in minutes๐Ÿ˜ก .

When actual questions arises in his mind...I took time to read that part..he want to make her happy...just happiness..he understand swara well after listening her past...yes very few person who sacrificed lot for others.. ๐Ÿ‘
But sanskar don't want to risk to grow an feeling..lot question ...well explained sissy...
Adharsh teasing idea nice...When you use your brain to decide for you, that how it will play out but soon hearts will come to play and Sanskar is going to get confused๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Finally swasan time..superb sissy...sanskar back answer for her costume nice..
Cute swasan convo ..i liked it..Thanks .Happy to know you liked there convo๐Ÿ˜Š

Trip to their own palace..nice description..
Sasuma can be evil also sometime ๐Ÿ˜† ..Sasuma are called Sasuma for the very reason๐Ÿ˜‰

Swara jealousy...hahah ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...I want to know who is that girl ๐Ÿ˜• ..I might reveal it or not . Still have to decide on that ๐Ÿ˜ˆ

Party ...waiting for it...thanks to laksh for playing cupid...its wrong yes how come they forget..raglak also new married couple ๐Ÿ˜‰ ..
But swasan are always centre of attraction ๐Ÿ˜ณ ...prince and princess.,. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ..Laksh is ignoring Ragini, he think long drive will make her forget everything. ๐Ÿ˜†. But this SwaSan SS they will remain the center of attraction ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Superb update...share all ur ideas.. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ..Thanks Lekah dear. Will do .


Love

Lekah

Love

Nita


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sree8410

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I'm late๐Ÿ˜ก

Unres Chapter 8

Nita ๐Ÿค—

I'm late in unresing, so ๐Ÿค—...I am late in replying too, So๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

You have given the best parents to Swara dear. I mean seriously they just left her to do the packing and stuff all alone and went to Pari. I know Pari also needs them, but they could have still waited till Swara left. Shomi in this SS is similar to Shekar I guess. The only difference is Shekar is in his own world all the time and Shomi seems to be lost to me.Well Swara has only two Mom to compare AP and Shomi. So she thinks her Mom is best ๐Ÿ˜‰. And we can try to let her know that truth but she wont believe it i suppose๐Ÿ˜†. But that was still not fair of them to leave Swara alone . Shekhar could have skipped meeting his friends though๐Ÿ˜‰

And Sanskar was so desperately waiting for her call that even without looking at it assumed that it was her. And like you said Thank God it was not his official phone otherwise the situation would have been more embarrassing. Adarsh is having the time of his life I assume with these two. Coming to his "what if"questions all of them were genuine and serious ones. Even I want destiny - you - to make them come to the same wavelength. But then again aren't they already there? ...I never did the mistake on Cell, but when i attended call in landline few years back , i thought the voice was like my mom and started addressing that person as mom only to find it was someone i never even met with. That was so awkward๐Ÿ˜†. Adarsh is having too much fun teasing his best friend and sister in law. They are already there to some extent but when will they realize it is the big question๐Ÿ˜ˆ

And then the telecon. I mean seriously it would have been better if they messaged each other. Single liners. ๐Ÿ˜† And I love the way he supports her even Sujatha for that matter. She seems to be good mother in law. Supporting both her daughter in laws and helping them. Sujatha is good mother in law , not saint like AP in the Show though, ๐Ÿ˜†. Yeah msg seems like an nice idea. Why didnt i use it

My cupid and his arrow๐Ÿคฃ. I was seriously laughing at his plan. Though it did seem to work for Swasan it created trouble for him. How could he forget that they were also a newly wed couple. And his wife is already jealous of Swara, though he doesn't know to which extent he definitely know that there is something about Swara that upsets her. When Ragini comes to know the truth about this party and the delayed honeymoon my poor cupid will be in deep trouble I meant TROUBLE...Well Lakshyaji is so active, once he starts a mission he forget everything ๐Ÿ˜†. He will be in TROUBLE for sure if he faced the current Ragini. But Ragini character is changing so if he met the Changed version his punishment might be less. You got to wait and see when she finds out ๐Ÿ˜ˆ


Her acknowledgement that it will not be easy for her to get over her jealousy that soon explained alot for now. And it's not that easy to let go of something that you had hold on to for so many years. Poor girl went out on a long and came back sick thanks to her husband.It will never be easy to move on when you were hiding it from everyone and holding on to it for so many years ,atleast she is trying to work it out now. Poor girl indeed๐Ÿ˜†

Swara is already feeling jealous about the girl who is hugging her husband๐Ÿ˜ณ. I assume this girl is Uttara since she hasn't seen her either am I right? I wanted her to ponder over the question as to why she is jealous. But then again she was disturbed. Hope once she is back from her sister's she will find some time like Sanskar for herself and try to find out why she is feeling jealous about any girl who is close to someone whom they have declared as "room mates".Uttara seems like a likely guess,but you forgot there were family pics all over the wall ,Sure one grown up Uttara would have been there and she would know how she looks ๐Ÿ˜‰. The mystery girl i will keep her mystery or reveal it sooner .My choice๐Ÿ˜ˆ. ..

My dear thank you so much for making them sleep in the same bed though its for one night. I so wanted to throw that pillow away๐Ÿ˜ณ for helping them of course no other intentions here๐Ÿ˜‰.But even he is thinking about how to stop sleeping in that uncomfortable couch, hope he comes up with some ideas. Leave that where were we?? Ahh!! they bed๐Ÿ˜ณ I wanted this and have asked quite a few times but didn't expect it this soon. Though she herself suggested it she was not that she didn't mind it. It was another forced decision she took just like her marriage with him. Poor guy was ready to stay awake till morning so that she is not uncomfortable. He is putting her first again. Destiny please make her see that the one she is searching for is right infront of her.Well i wanted to delay there visit to Adarsh and pari after the party .But i made it in this chapter for you. Since you asked for it quite a few times๐Ÿ˜ณ. Well i do get your helpful intentions but there are not there yet. Give them some time my dear Cupid ๐Ÿ˜Š.

"by sunrise Swara hand was over the pillow and across Sanskar chest. Sanskar woke up during the night as he was thirsty but seeing her hand over his chest and not wanting to wake her up by his movements .He decided to go back to sleep without quenching his thirst." Isn't he a sweetheart.? but what I'm waiting is the begining of the next chapter. Would love to see her reaction๐Ÿ˜ณ ...He is a Sweetheart for sure. I know you were waiting for Swara reaction . ๐Ÿ˜‰. Happy to know you liked that scene .


Love

Sree

P.S. Are my assumptions right or wrong? I guess I need to wait and watch๐Ÿ˜‰You need to wait and watch .Love-Nita

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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally caught up with all the lovely comments. Hope i didnt miss anyone .If so let me know .
Will try to start working on the next chapter soon .But still a busy week . Just letting you know ahead.


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Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Vini dear, Loved reading your comment and come on you can Res and Unres anytime you want.No need to worry about it at all. Why would you even hesistate to Res becuase you cant unres soon.You know i can wait right.๐Ÿ˜Š


And so you also got to wait for my reply. Little busy .Will reply to it asap


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Posted: 9 years ago
Res ๐Ÿ˜Š Will Un Res as soon as I can, dear. Not feeling well so catching up with pending Un-res's a little gradually. Please bear with me.

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Hey Nita ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

Back finally for my Un-res, thanks for your patience dear. Have been feeling really under the weather for many days, with my vitamin deficiency and severe cold. Finally got a bit better, thanks for all your get well soon wishes.
๐Ÿค—

Coming to this chapter, I liked the steady and gradual pace you have shown in the growth and deepening of the SwaSan relationship. That gave a realistic touch, because both of them were kind of forced into their wedding. Though they are of course soulmates ๐Ÿ˜Š, it would take some time for them to understand each other, become comfortable with one another.

Sanskaar is really so mature and understanding. I loved the way you have described his thoughts about Swara---his introspection that he really loves the way she looks, the innocence and beauty of her eyes, and more than that, her inner beauty which complements her outer beauty too. I loved the way you made your readers look at Swara through Sanskaar's eyes. ๐Ÿ˜Š His regard and affection for her, his admiration for the way she forgave Lakshya, the way she has maintained her cheerfulness despite her childhood of always being forced into activities which would suit Ragini---all these were well described.

I also liked his thought process and introspection about his expectations from their marriage, how he would handle the situation if he fell in love with Swara but she didn't reciprocate, whether he was right in making that promise to release her from their bond instead of just saying that they should work on their marriage. That was one very thoughtful and mature contemplation---very much like Sanskaar.

I was imagining Adarsh pulling Sanskaar's leg mercilessly, when Sanskaar took Swara's name as soon as he picked the call. ๐Ÿ˜† Best pals are like that na---they can sometimes tease a person to the hilt! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Also liked the subtle but sweet SwaSan moment when Sanskaar went to pick up Swara---their conversation about starting conversation in the right way was nice fun. ๐Ÿ˜† "Good afternoon" ๐Ÿ˜‰

I liked the way how Swara is shown realizing how understanding and accommodating Sanskaar is, how much he is going out of his way to make things comfortable for her, without ever making her very conscious about it, either. Small tings--like sharing his cupboard for her to keep her stuff, ensuring that she can wear whatever she feels comfortable in, and so on. And luckily, Sujju is also a thoughtful and genuinely nice person, not the occasionally hysterical person she is in the serial. ๐Ÿ˜‰

I really liked the SwaSan scene in Sanskaar's parents room, too. The way Sanskaar "introduced" Swara to the photo of his late parents, was so moving. Swara got a bit jealous seeing that pretty girl standing next to Sanskaar in many of his college photos. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Wonder who that girl was? You've described Sanskaar is not building too many castles in the air about his future marriage, not dreaming of love the way Lakshya was. He had decided to wholeheartedly accept whoever entered his life as his spouse, and give her his affection and respect. So wonder who this girl could have been? I don't think Swara has anything to feel jealous about---but the very fact that she is feeling jealous is very interesting. ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜‰

Also liked the subtle way you described Ragini's reactions to the proposed party thrown by their office staff. She's realized that she wants to overcome her jealousy of Swara, but also that it would not be really easy. So she decides not to go for a party where Swara would be the centre of attraction, and where she could again land up feeling left out and jealous. Good that she shared this feeling frankly with Lakshya.

And the ending---SwaSan sharing a bed with a pillow wall between them, but Swara's arms cuddling Sanskaar in the middle of the night, was so very romantic. ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Waiting for the next update, Nita dear. Will comment faster this time. ๐Ÿ˜Š

Lots of Love,

---Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res ๐Ÿ˜Š Will Un Res as soon as I can, dear. Not feeling well so catching up with pending Un-res's a little gradually. Please bear with me.


Dear Viji ,What happened? Most of the my friends in IF are sick nowadays and i dont like it ๐Ÿ˜ญ. Take care of yourself and Please get plenty of Rest and you can Unres next year too. I can wait .For now your health is important . Get well soon dear


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Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Interesting to read ๐Ÿ˜Š


Thanks ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid



Well in that case ๐Ÿ˜‰ .I just not liked but loved your analysis too . ๐Ÿค—


Not more than I love the SS๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie


Not more than I love the SS๐Ÿ˜‰


Thanks for loving this SS then ๐Ÿค—

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