SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 62

Originally posted by: sana2c

update is superb...
loved it..

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita dearest 🤗

Latecomer alert here- which I already warned you about so won't be formal with apologies etc as I feel I know you enough to be "rude" by now! 😃 ..Since we are not doing apologies.. i wont too for not unres on DK chapter 21 yet. will get to it asap . .

So I know I commented on initial chapters but anyway, I'll give my general take now up to 6. I went back and re-read the chapters I'd already read too:)You re-read the chapter wow it makes me so happy shruti 😃

I really like how you've developed this, from the start of two strangers thrust into a situation neither really wanted and the slight MU which you nicely clearly up quickly enough and very sensibly to the interesting phase that they've now entered into now. You know my views on the start so won't repeat but I was giggling away at Swara's hilariously overdramatic visions of Sanskaar bashing Lakshya literally! 😆 Also before I forget- the little baby taking such a liking to irresistible Uncle Sunny was such a treat- smart baby!! Who can resist Sanskaar! And it's nice to see how well SwaSan are bonding after their clearing up of the initial confusion. You know how much i love MU and therefore i cleared it soon. Happy to know you liked Swasan journey so fat and Swara overdramatic visions. Well we all want to see it in the show too. The little baby is smart indeed. Why cant pari and Adarsh have a kid in the show. it would make it interesting then the jail track for the hundredth time😆

The family dynamics here are so interesting. I really liked how you've departed there from the show and Annapurna and Durga Prasad being Swara's side and with Annapurna as the really strict mami hence showing the massive difference in treatment between SwaRagini is very well etched. I also loved how Sanksaar opened up about his parents' deaths and how they are really connecting on so many levels with the grief shared leading to more walls coming down. And the RP-Sujata twist in terms of what they are to Sanskaar is good too!. Well i dont want to bring dadi here so it is given to AP to play the strict mami😆. I changed the family tree way too much 😉. But i am glad that you like the twists . 😃 .Swasan uniqueness is there understanding to other grief and pain and i wanted them to be just like that in this SS too😊

I just enjoy the story for its gradual but very compelling development between SwaSan. The laughter, the friendship, the underlying chemistry- it's all coming out so nicely and yet it's differently (in the best way possible!) handled from the show.Thanks ...I really hope i can develop there bond without disappointing you and other readers😊

I like the fair and balanced treatment you have RagYa as well here 👏. Ragini is so much more relatable and even when my heart first sank when I read her jealousy, it all made sense and this latest part is leaving me much hope. I wanted SwaSan to be the center of the whole SS. But both Ragini and Lakshya deserves to be show there side of the story too. 😉

Overall, as you can probably tell, a very enjoyable read and am liking it very much! Sorry I am so fractured and not able to comment on every part but am reading and wanting to read more! How many parts are there Nita? Great work especially if this is the first one you have written here? I'll try to be more prompt on the next one 😃... This is my first one not only here, everywhere else too😆. Thanks for this lovely comment and please no sorry .. I hope the upcoming updates keep you interested too . 😃

Lots of love like always!

Shru xoxo

PS-Edited- I loved the touch of sarcasm in the Swaragini reference but of course it was blended into a much more sensible plot line here 👏 -One can only hope my tale of Swaragini is better than the Cvs 😉. Love- Nita

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nita love...😊

Wonderful chapter...beautiful back story of swaragini... i actually loved both their pov...😃Thanks Talia dear

Swara as a child n grown up...always sacrificed her dreams for her family n sister...feel so connected with her pain n dissapointment...😭...Life was hard for her 😭...

Where as ragini as a child n grownup was deprived with freedom...she was a mere robot of her mother...😭

Ragini was not perfect..swara was ...even in things which she didnot want to do...whereas ragini was forced to do everything her mom wanted.. felt both girls pain ..disappointment...desperation..sadness...😭😭...I am happy to know you felt bad for Ragini too .I am not sadistic like that , i am just saying happy to know you connected with both of there pain😆

Both girls do not know what the other has faced n sacrificed...😕😭

Amaxing dear👏 ..We usually dont understand other POV unless we knew about it ,and yes they both doesnt know about other sacrifices😭

shocking part for me was.. 😲Dp wanted ragini to get married to sansku.😲..thank God..his marriage was fixed with kavita that time...😊glad she loved lakshya...but happy as we got swasan now...😆...Dp wanted best bahu for Lakshya , so i am sure he would have wanted best son in law for Ragini and it can never be lucky 😆. But thankfully Ragini fell in love

Anyways best part was sansku n swara understanding n mutual decision to give this relationshop a chance😳😉...now waiting for lakshya pov...😃 Yep accepting the marriage would have been way too soon and i wont have swara dropping divorce line at the drop of an hat . So i wanted them to deal with it in an mature way .

Update soon love...😊

Lots of huggy n kissy

Talia⭐️ --------Will try too update soon Love -Nita🤗

Originally posted by: sarra0

Sujjata had a decent start...its natural to love ur own child more esp when u only started looking after the other when he was already in his 20s...she seems ok for now...hope she dodsnt turn like serial saas 😆😆...Sorry for the late reply dear.. Nope i hate serial saas. 😆

Swara certainly didnt like the thought that the saree was for sanskaar ex and even if involuntary she has started feeling her haq and she even addressed herself as his wife...ah the power of jealously..once actually falling in love and then in love jealousy wud b so much more intense if now she felt like this...Jealousy is an much driven force to make them realize how much the other person means to them .😉

Aw how sweet is sanskaar he didnt let her galat femi stay but called her backand told her the truth...he didnt want to hurt her...😳😳 ...Sanskar is not only sweet but cute too 😆

Sanskaar is concerned about swara being hurt and warns laksh not to do anything further which cud make that happen and tells laksh the truth they only got married because of his stubborness...but laksh is as addled and feeble minded as in the show...how cud he think swasan wud b in the same kind of place as laksh ragani were...thou having said that they may well b in same plzce..both not recieving HAQ 🤣🤣...he decides to play cupid...his wife as villain will prob b a better cupid then laksh cud b 😆😆...Lakshyaji basic trait is his feeble mindness. Come on just one day is past and you are worried that lakshyaji is not receiving HAQ🤣 😆

Liked sanskaar swaping fil with laksh...laksh and shekar r perfect for each other...See i knew you would agree with me on this one . Shekhar and Laksh are just perfect with each other😊

I always love when the villains chaal fails and the opposite happens...but y do i feel ragani esentment didnt start with laksh apologising, and in essence it was his fault so y not apologise?? here not only did swara kheer taste good but sanskaar had it and appreciated it along with sujjata, but also things like laksh being more interested in swasan, complimenting swara without being asked and even if she doesnt know v do that her honeymoon tickets were torn up 😆😆 ah karma has already started, as her actions escalate the blowback shud b fun 😆😆😆...the momentary glance between laksh and sujjata was a nice touch...I am not stupid like the Cvs letting evil win all the time, i want good people to win in my SS 😉

Hai the AP Ragani love isnt as pure as the one in the show 😆😆 and ap is more concerned with reputation, society, image then anything else...so does ragani actually love laksh or was it convinient for her to convince herself of that to try and escape her mother...The one bond i hate more in the show is AP and Ragini. See now the bond id not as pure as in the show 😆. Ragini love Lakshya it is true love 😉

I liked swara telling the truth, how it actually is, ho she feels to her mum...of course she then has to live up to saint swara who can not c people unhappy and sad because of her and end up apologising and cheering her mum up 😕...her mum seems like a weak character in this...Yep Sharmistha might be a good mom but not the strong one like in the show, well actually like she used to be in the show, current sharmistha is just like the Sharmistha in the SS.😆

Aw sanskaar consoling swara and letting her cry he is already perfect husband...at every point here he has been wat she needed him to b..Happy to know you found him to be perfect .. 😃

Will read chapter 6 asap..