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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Part... 3
Nita.. 🤗 no words re.. 👏 just perfect.. To publish.. As a novel ..

I loved it to the core.. No flaws. Very emotional for me...I had tears wen Sanskaar talking about his parents how he missing his uncle... Cherishing his days with his parents... 😭

Swaras concern for him.. I was like... 😳 smiling...

One cute romantic moment... Was good...

Pari teasing that they would have child... 😆

Simply loved it...

Love you...


Thanks Kamilla dear🤗. Your comments made my day but i think your over exaggerating it a little bit when you say i can publish it 😆 Love you too.



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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Nita
Read all your updates. Must say you were being humble by doubting your writing skills, you actually are a great story teller.

By now almost all the questions regarding swasan getting married, their mutual connection to adarsh and parineeta are answered. Waiting for how you gonna make strangers realise that they are soulmates.

You are presenting an entirely different family tree, is there any reason for this??
I mean only sujata in MM from older generation?? Are you going to turn ragini negative now??


Eagerly waiting for next update..
Lots of love
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Unres

Nita🤗

I guess you have started showering your love for Ragini and AP. Now I get why AP is Ragini's mother.😉 she and her ladoo's pyaar🤢. And what a reason to fall in love with Laksh. 😆 does the guy know about his lovely wife's intention to marry him? Jealousy has already creeped in, wonder what would be her reaction when she finds Laksh going all Lakshman for Sanskar.

Sujatha seems to be alright now. She will definitely love her son a bit more, it's understandable. But you have made it clear that even though she loves Laksh more her love for Sanskar is not any less.

AP- I thought she slapped her daughter for her misdeeds but nope, she was worried about everything thing else other than the problems her daughter is creating.😡

Shomi is as always supportive. I like the way she tried to apologize for forcing a relationship on her daughter.

Swara I love her character in this one. She is not neglecting her family's fault in this forced relationship, but she chooses to forgive them for the sake of her mother. Loved it. This girl's imagination will land her in trouble for sure. Rather than clarifying for whom he bought the saree she chose to reject it upfront accusing him for gifting her something he bought for his ex. But I loved it. She herself declared her as his wife. Can i believe that in her heart some sort of feelings has started for her husband? And we got our first hug. Remember Janmastami in SR, we got a similar scene. She cries and leans to his chest and he consoles her.. For that scene to show that he will be will her no matter what, I love you 🤗 (my way of thanks😳)

That's it with the ladies. Now with the men.

Shekar -I'll not waste my energy on this one.😡

DP - like Sanlak did can we swap the father's for real? Swara as DP's daughter😳 seems like Sanskar and DP bonded well.

Laksh - does he even know what the hell he is doing? 😆 He has decided to play Cupid hope he doesn't end up messing his love story😆. Honeymoon trip for Swasan, really Lucky? They are still not at a place where they can start a relation and he wants them to go on honeymoon.🤪 but I was touched by his gesture of postponing his own trip to fix his brbrother's life. Good thing is that he literally force his bhai to praise his bhabi, informed his bhabi about his brother's likes and dislikes. Modern Lakshman, please stay like this...

Sanskar - I'm speechless. Where do I start? He clarified her doubt, asked Laksh not to force any more thing on Swara, supported her when she needed it the most without making it awkward for her, wants to put free her from this relation if thats what she wants, ate the food she made even though it brought back lot of sad memories... Perfect guy. She should consider herself lucky. Hope she does realise that soon. He is putting her feeling before his own, hope she sees that.

I loved it Nita❤️. Love you🤗 for taking the story in its own pace neither dragging nor rushing.

So next chapter will be them discussing further course of their life. Mostly Swara explaining what she wanted to do with her life, I guess. I suppose his doubt on whether she wants to be in this relationship or not will also be clarified there. First step of understanding each other will start with chapter 6.

Now back to waiting and watching😉😳...

Love

Sree.
Edited by Sree8410 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nita🤗
Love you for this long update.

Sujatha seems very mellow and calm here not like the person in the show.
Very sensible and trying to do the best she can in the circumstances she has been placed.

Felt bad for Sanskar when Swara behaved rudely with him.The pressure of the day seems to have gotten to her badly but still.But Sanskar was awesome ,instead of getting angry he immedediately cleared her MU.Loved how he is standing by Swara and how he ate the kheer inspite of the memories attached to it.Hope Swara recognizes quickly what a favor fate has done to her.

So delusional Ragini makes an appearance .She doesn't consider herself evil even though she suggested Swara to make the kheer knowing the history behind it.And AP is not mad at Ragini for her misdeeds but angry for family's name sake.What a mother daughter duo?. Wonder what they'll do next.

Loving 'Lucky the Cupid '.He postponed his honeymoon for his brothers sake.Hope Ragini doesn't get to know otherwise he's dead.

Eagerly waiting to know about Swasan conversation about their future.
Hope they don't talk about divorce.Just can't take that.

Really sorry about the late unres,Nita

Edited by Vini224 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Loved it...
Res! Will unres later today have to rush :-)
Have a nice day Nita:-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update. ...
Hw can stop like this...clip hanger...god...
Plz plz update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Nita

Loved the update 🤗

A little tied up as I traveling from tomorrow till March 14, (with limited / no access to net or mobile) - promise to give a detailed comment once I am back.

love
Nyna
Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nita 🤗
You made my morning a great morning with this update seriously
I loved whole scene 👏
Sujata feeling was very well written 👏
Swasan scene was awesome
And that kheer scene was lovely 😳
Ragini 😡 i really hates her
Lucky is too awesome in your story and it will be interesting when he became cupid in swasan love story 😃
Mother and daughter bond was very well expressed 👏
Swara crying on sanskar shoulder 😳
Cliffhanger 😕 but i can understand because i also love to give cliffhanger in my stories 😆
But you have to update soon please
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow sissy...amazing update ...i loved it.,
So Ragini family did great job for family prestige...:(..
Thanks to them...they made destiny...swasan:S

One thing i learnt...if something forced in our life...it may be also meant for us,...don't give up easily...

Nice update...

Thanks for pm...

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