SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 28

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.. Loved it 😊
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nita dearest...
jus luv u for this early and long update...
tnx a tonne
so pari wanted them to be married...swaru denied and see how destiny has played its part beautifully ...and joined them together in this relationship...now knowing sanskar and his side of story...the bond will become strong...stronger...will lead to unconditional love...and that day is not far...ahaan pari want a company for her child...don't worry pari when swasan are there ...their child will give company to your kidddo.
Nita waiting for more now
with luv
isha
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vini224

Nita🤗

Never expected another chapter this quickly.
Thanks for this super quick update.You are welcome Vini, sorry for the late reply i just reached home from work and today was an busy day 🤗

So you made RP and Sujju, Sanskar's uncle and aunt .😆
Except for Uttara being Sanskar's sister and Laksh his cousin,you have made all other relationships different from the show.Are there any other surprises waiting ?Well i think i have covered almost all characters, why do you want kavya or Urvashiji 😉 to say jiji khush nahi🤣

Laksh doesn't seem as bad as I first thought.He thought Sanskar might be heartbroken and wanted to fix the problem in his usual brilliant way.Lakshya doenst suit to be a villian , so he will only do things because of impulsive nature, you will find out more about him next chapter😉

Again a super twist but this time Sanskar is the one left in suspense about what Pari was talking about that happened two years back.
Thankfully you did not end the chapter with that otherwise I would have kept hounding you with the question as to when your going to update😆...I had briefly thought of leaving it now and revealing it later but i dont want put you all through torture 😆


And how prophetic was Swara regarding her soulmate and that his wedding would stop at the last moment if he was her destiny without knowing she was talking about Sanskar and now she is married to him.Wonder what would be Sanskar's reaction once he comes to know that Pari tried to set him up with Swara. Well more than Sanskar i added it to make Swara legitimately think about this marriage seriously, how can she not when words like Soulmate and destiny are used to refer to her current marriage.

Love your story Nita.
Can I expect another quick update.Becoming very greedy😆... I try to post one during the weekend .

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow such a beautiful update... And thanx for the pm... Update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Nita,

This update was great. Seems that no one can escape destiny - Swara's declaration "If he is actually my soulmate then he should wait for me till I am ready. And if destiny is in my favour i will marry him even if it means stopping his marriage the last second just like all the hindi shows. But listen di there is no such things a destiny and soulmate so just stop asking me to go on an date. Ilike being single and if it was my choice I want to remain single till I turn 100." - did turn out to exactly what happened with her - well one truly should not challenge the fates😆

Sanskaar's angst and the way he shared it with Swara - he comes across as one who does not really open up but he felt comfortable sharing it with her and she realised it too. She also does let go a little to end up sleeping on his shoulder.

Awaiting the next update!

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Nyna

Sanskaar holding the baby - cute scene


Thanks Nyna dear for such an lovely comment 🤗 and taking you time to reply back in your busy schedule .So sweet of you😃.


Yep Swara should not have challenged the fate but it gave her a perfect life partner not an bad bargain😉

I did contemplate if sleeping on the shoulder was bit too early ,since they basically got married but i did make Sanskar openly talk about all his angst and feeling and swara should do something too. 😉

Will try to update soon

Love,

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
Continue soon



Thanks . Will try to update soon😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anusha62

nita:-)..lovely part swara she is nt in love at wid sanskar bt she is so undrstndng swt gal..nd u portrayed sanskar's feeling whn rp died was very well written felt bad for him..hahahah swara cutie she eagerly wanna knw abt kavita frm sanskar's mouth..hmm pari nd swara's before 2yrs back convo was cool nd sanskar wanna knw wht has happnd:-P..wow so swara slept on sanky shoulder as her heart says aftral he is her hubby nd da way sanskar share his pain wid swara was awsme loved it..now swara v'l became support for sanskar:-):-)can't wait for nxt part!!!!!!


Thanks dear for the lovely comment. Yep i want Swara to be shown as someone sensitive to other people pain and I need Sanskar to have a strong back story too. You want Swara to ask about Kavitha. Let see if she bring it up later 😉


I am happy you liked Pari and Swara convo , I want to build there relationship slowly and for that they need to be constantly reminded that they are married😉 Will try to update soon

Love,

Nita
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

thanks for the pm and this very interesting story i just love going through it


Thanks dear😃. Happy to know you find it interesting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kavita_b_2004

wow... Destiny had brought them together... Soul mates wow. Mm


Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shree1005

Awesome update... Loved it...


Thanks dear😊. Happy to know you liked it
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