SwaSan FF: Forced into Marrying your soulmate(Thread 2 Link on page 1) - Page 10

Originally posted by: foresight

Res 😃

unres

that was a really interesting prologue. it raised so many questions and with it an interest to see you unravel them, So why did Sanskrit say yes to her when he was worried she might be in for the money. She is clearly not Kavita's sister because if she was, the question of money would not have come up. So who is she and how did he encounter her to even say yes. did he bump into her when she was in trouble and said yes? or when he was in trouble and needed a wife to get him out of the mess? same with swara. why did she say yes to marrying a stranger? what was her reason for it when she didnt know him at all

you can imagine the questions i have...i love suspense and i love digging my teeth into it even more. i cannot wait for you to post the first chapter. this was good. it definitely got me interested.

Originally posted by: foresight

interesting...so he knows of her in a way through parineeta. and parineeta is the wife of his best friend adarsh. so it looks like her family at least wasnt aware of the wedding? is his family at least aware? you haven't opened the lid on anything yet 😆 😆. returning the favour or something. 😆 😆 but it is good to see them try and judge each other and get to know each other through small reactions and gestures. i guess now sanskar might be a bit relieved about his fears and swara too. she can always ask her sister and juju about him in addition to finding it a lot easier to open up to him,

good one.

Originally posted by: Vini224

Superb update Nita.

When Swara was on the phone,like Sanskar, I was also thinking is it Swara's boyfriend .

Hopefully one doesn't make an appearance later.

Oh how and why did they get married ?

Can't wait for your next update.

Your story is just too interesting.

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Res 😊 I will un res from lappie tomo Nita dear.

Originally posted by: sujoyricky

Nita it was awesome 👏
Really i loved it
Sanskar's monologue was very well written
Update soon please can't wait

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nita! I had no idea you were writing a SS! I will read and comment soon! Please bear with me 🤗

Originally posted by: jess_27

Heyy.. Thanks for the fast update and also for PM...

Nice update... I liked sanskar's concern for swara.. And he was on the move to help her even before she asked for help...

But the suspense is killing.. Why did both agree for marriage.. And what is with adarsh..

Waiting for next part.. Update soon..

Love

Jessica

Originally posted by: Sree8410

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Oh My God!!! Is all I can say right now. Nita🤗 it's freaking good man. And you were worried about it😲

Hey where is the answer to at least one of the questions asked? I hoped you are not taking Sapna as an inspiration😉. One is my limit and it's already filled so please, please don't follow her 😆 Suspense huh... fine I'll wait for next update as I'm let with no other choice😆

Hey just one question, out of curiosity, did Adarsh and Pari ran away from home?

Swasan scenes were too good. I could understand the poor guys dilemma. He was very well seeing the next day headlines😆 I liked the way you said that his voice was already calming her down and he is drawn to hers. Now I guess things will be less awkward for them as he knows her from Pari and she can always ask her didi.

Love

Sree

Oh yes and for this line I should be throwing something at you😆

P,S - I am sorry if it was not upto the mark. All feedbacks and tomatoes are welcome.

Seriously man give yourself some credit. It's REALLY GOOD. TOO GOOD for anyone to believe that it's your First Attempt.⭐️🤗

Sapna no offense but I can't handle two suspense writers at the same time. 😆