SwaSan & RagYa FF - Behind Enemy Lines - Pt 7 on Pg 21 (05/10/16)

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Wow dear...

This part is fabulous.. sooo raglak are getting closer...hmmm n swara is sooo stupid.ragini is much smarter then her.loving sansku with each passing update...why..uu stopped story at interesting point...???

Will wait for next..update soon..

Talia

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Lovelykr

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Very interesting

Continue soon

Send me PMS plz

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Another amazing update!

RagLak is on the way of their relationship!

Bt what about my SwaSan? They still at the square one, I guess!

Offo why Swara is such a silly, mad, stupid kind of girl here? Always messing things around?

What was she thinking before calling for helps from those rascals? She obviously by now know that Sanskaar & his people won't hurt them still she is hell bent to make Sanskaar's people more hostile!

Okay update soonish plz!

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: Sree8410
Another wonderful update.
Swara is good at one thing and it's evident here - creating a mess of a situation😆

Ragini kissed Laksh😲. Would love to see Swara's reaction to this new development.

Love

Sree

Hey thanks for reading. Swara had gotten herself into a tricky situation this time :D

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
I so loved it!! Amazing update
Couldn't resist posting now itself
RagYa are going great. Ragini is so understandable here. Everybody loves freedom and when you have such a friend with you! Valley of flowers seems to be really beautiful!
SwaSan sword practice? Nice!! Love the way he calls her Princess, as if she were his own Princess...Umm I guess I'm thinking too much yeah!
Swara is Buddhu, stupid! Who told her to ask help from those men? She is really mad. Now my brave hero will step in to save HIS LADY! Wow! Will love it
Want an update faster okay?
Lots of love
Sakshi!

Hey Shakshi

Thanks for reviewing! :)

Ragini sure is enjoying her new found freedom with her new 'friend' Lakshya.

As for SwaSan, I sure love a knight-in-shining armor. :D

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: sneharay
Fabulous update..just superb...

Hey Sneha, thanks for reading this one too :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Helee
nice chapter. 😊 well I haven't read many ragya ffs but I like them In your story. swasan sword practice was awesome. swara is stupid but now because of stupidity she will get her knight in shining armor...! 😳

Hi Helee,

Thanks a lot for reading and reviewing. I am glad you are liking RagYa too.

Sanskar is so dreamy in the tv series- perfect to be a knight in shining armor :D

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Krishnabhisarik
Lovely chapter!!😊 RagLak going to the Valley to pick flowers and SwaSan go there to pick fights😆😆 Lol.. Ye kahaan rok diya yaar.. Pls jaldi jaldi update karo😛😛 Interesting suspense😃

@Bold lines - perfect summary. :D :D

I will be updating the next part real soon. Thanks for your continued support :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Kaveetha
Oh hoo.. Superb... 👏
Update the nxt part soon.. Can't wait for a long time. 😊

Hi Kaveetha, thanks for reading. I will be updating soon :)

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ErisedWitch45

@ErisedWitch45

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Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Wow dear...
This part is fabulous.. sooo raglak are getting closer...hmmm n swara is sooo stupid.ragini is much smarter then her.loving sansku with each passing update...why..uu stopped story at interesting point...???

Will wait for next..update soon..

Talia

Hey Krishu, thank you for reading and liking.

Swara sure knows how to pick trouble ;) Working on the next part, will be updating soon.