LOVE WILL FIND A WAY-SwaSan SS (PART 9-Pg 46)

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mridulakrishnan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: hp_2006

Thank you soo much Mridu dear 🤗
Story ishtayo..😊😊 Santhoshaayi enik😃😳

story orupadu istayi...or mangalssery in ur ss...nee mohanlal fan aano...😆

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Sree8410
Naina, beautiful concept. Really loved it.
Took me back to my house. Please do continue and PM me if possible.

Thank you sooo much Sree 🤗
I am so glad you loved the concept😃
I will surely PM you😊

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan

story orupadu istayi...or mangalssery in ur ss...nee mohanlal fan aano...😆

Mohanlal fan aayirunnu..Pandathe mohanlal..😛😃 Ipolum ishtam oke und..ennalum pandathe athrem illya tto😊

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mishrialways

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Hi naina
lovely prologue
i love all your stories i am sure will love this one too
it is kerela based so i guess i will get to know abt your state too and its culture
i am all the more excited considering i have many both in real and on IF who are frm kerela
so i am in fr it
cont soon

ps- hw r u able to handle so many stories together yaar i guess 5 ongoing nw
i am not even able to handle 3 :-P

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: mishrialways
Hi naina
lovely prologue
i love all your stories i am sure will love this one too
it is kerela based so i guess i will get to know abt your state too and its culture
i am all the more excited considering i have many both in real and on IF who are frm kerela
so i am in fr it
cont soon

ps- hw r u able to handle so many stories together yaar i guess 5 ongoing nw
i am not even able to handle 3 :-P

Ritu dear 🤗
I am so glad you love my stories so much..😃
I hope you love this one too😳
I am also not able to handle..that is why my story updates are delaying so much😛

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Hello friends, thanks a lot for welcoming the prologue with love. I am going to update PART 1.

PART 1

Sanskaar stood with his eyes closed in front of the deity of Shiva in the temple. He was wearing only a white color mundu/ dhoti and was shirtless. (Men are not allowed to wear shirts inside the temples in Kerala) After his prayers, he took the prasadam

from the priest and applied the chandanam (sandal paste) on his forehead and below his collar bone. Then the priest poured a small spoonful of theertham (holy water) in his right hand. Sanskaar drank it piously and moved the same palm along the top of his head. He walked out of the temple and put on his shirt. Then he waited for his mother, Annapurna who hadn't finished her prayers.
After some minutes, she too came out of the temple.
Sa: Amma, shall we leave?
An: Hmm. (nods her head)
Both of them walked towards his bike which was parked outside. He half folded his mundu upwards and tied the ends together.
Like this :

And he mounted his bike. Annapurna too mounted at the back seat and sat sideways holding his shoulder.
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The bike arrived into the huge courtyard of the "Mangalasseri" tharavaadu (ancestral house).

Mangalasseri was a well known Nair family of that village and the tharavaadu was also named after the family. Sanskaar's father, Shri. Durgaprasad Nair, had passed away when he was only six years old. He was an army officer.
Sanskaar and Annapurna alighted from the bike and walked inside the house. Sanskaar walked upstairs to his room and changed his Mundu and shirt and put on a pair of formal pants and a plain blue shirt. He walked down the wooden stairs and walked towards the dining room. He sat down on a chair and inverted his plate which had been lying upside down. He could smell the aroma of freshly cooked dosa which was wafting from the kitchen.
Sa: Amma.. Its Dosa today.. ?(smiles)
An: (from the kitchen) Oh, you already came to have breakfast..Wait, I will bring now..
Annapurna came to him with a yummy looking dosa and placed it on his plate. She served him some coconut chutney and chilly onion chutney and then he started to have it. He just loved his mother's cooking.
Just then his younger sister, Ragini came into the room wearing a nice cotton saree. She was working as a primary school teacher in a Govt. school in the nearby town.
Ra: Ammaa.. Dosa for me too...
An: I am coming now..
Ragini looked at Sanskaar.
Ra: Ettaa.. (elder brother), will you drop me at bus stop at the main road, when you go to your shop?
Sa: Alright, Ragini.
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Sanskaar owned a super market store at the town. His business was actually doing well. It had been seven years since he had opened the shop. He also owned a vast area of farming land.
After dropping Ragini he arrived straight at his store. He unlocked the shutter and opened it upwards. Then he walked inside and put on the main switch. He went behind the cash counter and lighted the lamp in front of the photo frame of his father, Shri. Durgaprasad Nair. And thus he began his day
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In the evening, one of his friends came to the shop. His name was Nandu.
N: Sanskaar.. There is good news.
Sa: Hey..What is it daa. ? (daa is the way to address a person casually, like "yaar" in Hindi)
N: Farhad is coming for a holiday from Mumbai. He will arrive in tonight's flight. We have to go to the airport to pick him up. We can go in my car.
Sa: Ok daa. I will come. Let me give the shop key to Manoj and tell that he will have to close the shop at night.
Manoj was the person who worked as a supervisor at the shop.
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Sanskaar and Nandu reached the airport at 8 p. m. It was raining heavily and they had umbrellas with them. They reached the lobby and decided to wait there for their friend, Farhad. Just then Nandu's phone began to ring. In order to hear clearly he moved away from Sanskaar to somewhere else.
Meanwhile Swara was coming down in the escalator. She was calling her father.
Sw: Hello Papa.. I reached at the airport. Now tell me the address of my Amma's house.
Sh:(angrily) I won't tell you. You just come back here in the next flight itself.
Sw: (seriously) What is this Papa. ?I didn't come here to come back. You know that very well.
Sh: (angrily) Fine. !! Then you do as you wish, Chinnu.
He disconnected the call.
Swara was really shocked at first. But then she got really angry at her Papa.
Sw: (to herself) Hmmph. I am also stubborn like you Papa. I will try myself.
Swara was walking towards the lobby with her luggage. She was wearing a dark pink salwar kameez with dupatta. She passed Sanskaar and her dupatta's end got struck in his shirt button. Sanskaar felt a tug in his shirt and he looked down. He tried to remove the dupatta with his fingers, and it was then Swara felt someone pulling her dupatta. She turned and saw that Sanskaar was doing it. She became angry and walked towards him.
Sw: What are you trying to do, Mister?
Sanskaar was dumbstruck and looked at her impatiently.
Sa: What do you mean.. ? (looks at the dupatta end)..Oh hello.. ! Don't you think that I was pulling your dupatta..!!
Sanskaar left the dupatta angrily and walked off shaking his head in disbelief. Swara opened her mouth to retort but she noticed that his wallet had dropped down on the floor. She bent down and picked it up. When she again looked for him, she couldn't find him. She opened it hoping to find some details about him in order to return it. But she was in for a surprise. She found a passport size photo of none other than her own mother, Sharmishta inside it.
Sw: (shocked) Amma. (then frowns) But what is her photo doing inside this person's wallet. ?Who is he.. ? (looks around again hoping to see him) I will have to find out.. He might be somewhere here.
Swara hastily walked out of the lobby and looked around for him. It was raining heavily and so it was unable to make out anyone's face. Suddenly she spotted him getting into a car and saw it moving away.
Quickly, she also hailed for a taxi and got into it as fast as possible. Then she asked the driver to follow the car.
After one hour of chasing, they reached in front of Sanskaar's tharavaadu(ancestral home). His friend drove away after dropping him at his gate. Sanskaar opened his umbrella because it was still raining heavily. He saw someone arriving in a taxi and walked towards it with his umbrella. Swara, who didn't have an umbrella, also got down and paid for her taxi. When he came nearer he realized that it was the same girl.
Sa: You.. ?!
Swara was completely drenched and Sanskaar moved closer to her and gave her the shelter of his umbrella. She held out his wallet and said confidently.
Sw: I came to return your wallet.
Sanskaar looked at it and then searched his shirt pocket. He realized that he had lost it.
Sa: Thanks..
He smiled and extended his hand. But Swara slid it away from his hand. Sanskaar grew impatient and glared at her.
Sa: (angrily)You... !!
Sw: (smartly)But before I give it to you, you have to answer my question.
Sa: (angrily) What is it.. ?
Sw: I saw a photo inside your wallet. She is my Amma. I want to know how she is related to you.
Sanskaar thought "Oh. So this is her daughter, Chinnu... Mumbai girl huh...! But look at her... She is so arrogant...! Let me teach her a lesson first. "
Sa:(excitedly) Oh.. You are talking about my cheriyamma. (father's younger brother's wife) She lives here only.. In our house.. (then thinks for sometime) But she has never told me about having a daughter.
It was Swara's turn to be surprised. She thought "Oh my God !! My Amma also married someone else.. I can't believe this. And she has forgotten me too.. ", and she felt sad.
Sw: You are talking about Mrs. Sharmishta right. ?
Sa: Of course I am talking about her.. She is living here... in my house.
Sw:(uncertainly) Actually I have come all the way from Mumbai in search of my Amma. I didn't know her address and I saw her photo inside your wallet and followed you till here.
Sa: Ok then.. Come inside. But she is not here..Both my cheriyachan(father's younger brother) and cheriyamma have gone to a faraway temple. They will come back after two days only. Till then you can stay with my family.
Swara walked with him in the umbrella as he led her towards the verandah of his house. As soon as they reached inside the shelter of the roof, he kept the umbrella aside and then rung the calling bell. Annapurna opened the door after sometime.
An: Sanskaar. Did you get wet in the rain. ?
Sa:(smiles) No, Amma..
Then Annapurna's eyes fell upon Swara who was gazing around with an uncertain look in her eyes.
An: Who is she, Sanskaar?
Sa: You take her to our guest room first, Amma. She is coming back after a long journey.
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Annapurna came back to Sanskaar after five minutes. Sanskaar had a glint of naughtiness in his eyes.
An: Who is she. ?
Sa: Amma. She is Sharmishta Amma's daughter, Chinnu.
Annapurna was quite surprised and she clapped her hand on her mouth happily.
An: Really, Sanskaar. ? I will tell Sharmishta, now itself.
But Sanskaar stopped her.
Sa: (cautiously)Wait.. Wait.. Wait..
An: (surprised) What.. ? She will be so happy to see Chinnu..!
Sa: Don't worry about that. I will inform Sharmishta Amma tomorrow. But this girl is so arrogant. I just want to teach her a lesson first.
Sanskaar told Annapurna everything about the events which had happened at the Airport and then at the gate of their house.
An: Stop being silly, Sanskaar.
Sa: (seriously)Ammaa.. No means no.. Let me handle this.
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Meanwhile at the tharavaadu right next to Sanskaar's tharavaadu:
Sharmishta felt as if someone called her and she came towards the verandah of her house. She gazed around her courtyard through the rain.
Sha: I felt as if someone came. I felt someone calling me.
She understood that it was just a feeling and then she walked inside and bolted the door carefully.
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Hope I didn't disappoint any of you.
Plzz let me know your views about this update.
Love,
Naina😊

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K.Puja Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Thanks For PM

Loved The Story
new concept

Updated soon

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shamina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Awesome update

The introduction of sanskar was nice.

And the description of family was also nice. Ragini is his sister.

And the first meeting of swasan was also nice

Eagerly waiting for your next update

Edited by Sakkiyah - 9 years ago

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lekahravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

superb!!!!
Sanskar suits this role perfectly...
Pls update next part soon

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Krishna Priya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Nainu...itz realy super yaar...sanskar wearing mundu...oh that was so sweet daa...namuda mazhaum namuda malayalikaluda mathram culturum...u make proud dr...orupadu peru vayikuna forathil namuda kalcharum mangalasheri tharavadum k kanumple entho...oru santhosham...feling realy happy u make my day dr...continue soon...lv ur update...and dnt forget...plz complete zinda rehati he unki mohabatien...thankz 4 the pm...:-);-)

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