Raglak DARK FF ::'YOU ARE MINE' last chap up!december 142016

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Jia Roh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: ammu92
No plzz no no..don't discontinue it.. 😭
I knw these days laksh is being jerk on show and you think this story will also take a toll on our hearts 😆
But plzz yar I found this story to be very different from actual concept in show..The only dark story..so I'm really curious to read it further 😳 I was waiting for your next update and you shocked me by asking to discontinue..
Plzzz don't do so I love this story.. 😃

I am going to continue it... 😳

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: rbb1
please please post the next part soon

I will... 😳

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: reshma4875
actually u r story s very different...plz continue writing...

I will... 😳

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#144

Hey...all of you beautiful people.so i have decided to continue the story, if you guys are so happy to bear the torture..then who am I to stop you all from bearing it? 😆

Edited by dewcute - 9 years ago

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Jia Roh

@dewcute

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Posted: 9 years ago

#145

. Chapter : 4

Ragini was in her room , she just had a shower and water droplets were falling from her hair..she looked at herself ,she was in a salwar ..just like before ,but the mangalsutra which rested lazily on her, mockingly told her that nothing is like before... " No...not anymore laksh , if I will wear this still..then it will be like insulting the greatest institution of marriage , I can't let that happen...our relation have already given everyone pain , it made me insult every relation..I destroyed myself...I destroyed my every other relation to be related to you ! But it's enough...now it's time to correct my all mistakes and prepare myself for a new start..for that this relation should end ...every symbol of this relation should be destroyed...". A lone tear escaped her eyes , wiping it with a bitter smile..she prepared herself to remove that mangalsutra.

Sharmishta was in the kitchen when she heard the sound of a car and door bell ,she wiped her tears and practically ran to open it ,as she was sure that it must be swara , whatever happened had took a toll on everybody, to pray for her ladoo dadiji and Dadaji had went to temple..shekhar was practically boiling in rage to kill Laksh , after coming back from MM ,he hasn't closed his eyes for a moment...he spend his whole night by staring at the sleeping form of his daughter , yesterday he couldn't do anything as he was too much in shock and was too concerned for his daughter to think and care about someone else..but if he sees laksh once more..he won't leave him , he will make him pay for everything he did to his daughter.his reverie was broke when he heard the door bell..it must be Swara..he and sharmishta tried to call her in the morning..but she wasn't attending it , he stood up from the chair and went to receive her , swara and ragini should stand by each other or else they both may break he thought to himself. He and sharmishta reached the door at the same time , but by opening the door sharmishta felt that she did her life's worst mistake ,instead of swara ,with a wicked grin there stood 'Lakshya Maheshwari' !.

Ragini who was trying to remove the mangalsutra got startled by the sudden yelling coming from downstairs. She rushed to downstairs and stood frozen in the middle of the hall...there he stood ! Laksh...!!! "Why is he here?" " what he wants now? "Hundreds of questions rushed towards her brain...she looked at her baba who was shouting at laksh with boiling rage..and she looked at her mother who was crying and trying to control the situation..and there was Laksh !who stood there indifferent with a smirk...his eyes were searching for someone and then his eyes collided with her eyes ,ragini felt like the time stopped there...his eyes flashed so many emotions...but suddenly it was masked with blankness.and that's when ragini came into reality.

" what are you doing here ? " Ragini's emotion less voice made laksh aware of his surroundings.. She looked pale..her eyes were red..but still she was beautiful...water dripping from her hair..Laksh snapped himself out of his thoughts.He looked at ragini and with a smirk he said " I am just here to take my wife back..".Ragini and sharmishta looked at him in disbelief...a loud sound was heard , shekhar just slapped lakshya ...after a moment ,shocking ragini to her death lakshya slapped shekhar back...!in the impact of slap shekhar fell side wards hitting his head on the table and fell there unconscious , with a blood curling scream sharmishta rushed towards shekhar.
But ragini stood there frozen..she felt numb...her father just got slapped by laksh! Because of her ,her father is there lying on the floor unconscious... Her mother is crying because of her...all this happened because she loved the wrong person ...he was wrong for her...and now her father lying there unconscious. ..."stop staring at your baba like he is dead ,he is just unconscious ,come fast...I don't have the patience to wait a second more than this ". Lakshya's words snapped her out of her thoughts .she looked at lakshya and back to her baba...sobbing she rushed to shekhar and pleaded him to wake up...she tried to hug shekhar when some one jerked her back and pulled her up ,it was Laksh !,anger flared on her.."HOW DARE YOU ..?" But before completing her sentence she fainted on Laksh..."well as much as I am concerned about your fainting , I can't take you to hospital.. As it may create unnecessary drama when you gain consciousness.. Neither I can wait for a doctor to come here to treat your baba and you nor I want you to gain consciousness now,because I want you to open your eyes only in our bedroom ".chuckling to himself Laksh took ragini in his arms and went to his car ignoring the protests of a crying ,helpless sharmishta with an unconscious shekhar.

Swara gained consciousness and she was asking sanskar to take her to baadi as neither ragini nor Maa was taking her call.she was sure that laksh must have reached there.. And she cursed herself for being feeling so helpless...doctor had prescribed medicines for her and AP ,both of them were fainted due to stress and weakness.suddenly her phone rang..before she could say anything she heard the sobbing of her maa ,by hearing what happened there phone slipped from swara's hands.each and everyone was shocked by hearing what happened ,AP felt like killing herself for giving birth to a son like Laksh..." Swara , if u want we can go to baadi " .sanskar said to swara, " NO...baba is fine , doctor said it was just a scratch , I should be here , laksh will be here anytime with ragini ,Ma said she fainted...she looked lifeless ".Swara started to sob
"I will kill him sanskar..I will kill him".

" Who do you want to kill babhi?" Everyone snapped their heads towards the door and with an unconscious ragini in his hands, there stood Laksh..! With an arrogant smirk he said " it can't be me ,you just can't make your sister widow ..right?". "Anyway ,doctor will be soon here , send him to my bedroom ". Ignoring all their stares lakshya went towards his bedroom by holding ragini closely in his arms.staring at the retreating back of laksh swara promised herself once again that she will seperate Laksh from ragini at any cost..even it cost her life.
Laksh carefully placed ragini on the bed...and inhaled her fragrance...he wrapped her in his arms and inhaled it once again " how stupid is everyone to think that they will seperate us ragini ? No one can come between us..I won't let anyone to come between us! I just hope you won't try something stupid ragini ,if you do..you won't like the consequences ,as I said before no one can come between us". Saying this he dialed doctor's number Once again ,he can't wait ragini to gain consciousness and her to find out that she is again in her husband's bedroom...in his life...in his bed...and her stupid sister swara to her family or his family no one couldn't do anything.all are helpless ..." He chuckled at the thought and waited for the doctor.

Hope you guys liked it...

If you guys didn't...then fine ,I can't help it..you guys asked for it ,I told you guys it will be crap 😆

Edited by dewcute - 9 years ago