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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

superb update dear
beautifully written ... loved it

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Thank you dear 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi lekha di this is nidhi and iam one of the silent readers in dis foru.m but i really love d way u write dis.waiting for d nxt part update it soonnn plseee
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Waiting for next... :-D




sissy today pakka i will update..lil busy with family..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: paridhipari

hi lekha di this is nidhi and iam one of the silent readers in dis foru.m but i really love d way u write dis.waiting for d nxt part update it soonnn plseee




areey nidhi..i love ur name ...thank u for liking my story n writing...
will update today..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi friends!!!!.thank you friends for ur comments... 😃 ...and sorry for mistake and errors guys 😳 ..ok now going to start...



Here we go

CHAPTER 9

I reached home at night...lot of noises inside my house...neighbours are pepping inside my house..i ignored and went near main door..lot of sandals were lying at nook and corner...suddenly "areey di kab ayee chalo sab log tumare liye intezar karehi"..my cousin almost shouting.."yahan dehko swara di agaye"..oh god I entered whole family members chit chatting...its like market...why all r present here...any function...aur kya dadi ko kuch nahi vohnaa...y I should care...or did she planning for my marriage...uska Mei murder karloga aisa woh plans karneke phele...to clear my doubts...asked my cousin"areey idiot kab ayee tumko school nahi yeh ka??".."oye pagal..shaadi hone walli yeh is ghar Mei..kya bade ma nahi bola tha?"..i gulp my salvia..oh shit shaadi...no one informed anything...in oned day what change over happened in my house...I shouted..walking inside kitchen"ma yeh sab kya yeh maiko koi shaadi nahi karne yeh"..al laughed ..chachi..massi...aur cousins...before ma voice came from back.."ohooo hello madam...kya tumKo shaadi karna padeka..par itna jaldhi nahi..first let me marry..then I will search perfect damaad for sasuma kya yeh mom Mei sahi kahana"...its my hone walli bhabi ji..oh its my brother marriage but when...before bhabi she is good friend...we hugged each other...mom said"sahi bahu..soon will start for Shona also"...al ladies start to gossip...really best entertainment for al ladies...to stop..i said"don't worry ..i wont give difficult for searching boy for me...i ll bring my prince..after my studies...so don't take tension massi"...i said in teasing tone..winked at mom...al started to tease me"so u planning for love marriage...dadi ko patha chalegi toh tu Gaya"..."areey don't take tension...mei swara dadha ...i ll handle dadi in my way"..i said with attitude...mom scolded"Shona ap bas karo woh tumara dadi yeh baade yeh...dont forget it..go and get fresh up "...i went with bhabi to ask why so soon marriage...she told me that her dad health was not good nowadays..so suddenly elders decided...but thank god its al before my college starts...so next week marriage rituals will start..i called kushi n priya ...informed both of them about..both r peak excited to dance in sangeet...bhabi also joined them with their plans...kushi n priya was also close to Nidhi bhabi..she is my family friend...before marriage we asked bachelor party to bhabi..she agreed and informed me to take care al her friend n colleagues during marriage..preparation were going in full swing...i was happy for my bahbi n bhai...but still waiting when college wil start..want to see him...counting my days...kushi was teasing"at least till marriage smile swara don't keep ur sad face...dont worry he wont ran away from u..soon will go to Mumbai.."...to avoid my feelings...involved myself in preparation...shopping...before haldi bhabi called n informed me about tonight bachelor party at her guest house..after haldi finished for my brother...me,kushi n priya reached bhabi place at noon itself..bhabi introduced her colleagues...we al were sitting in terrace talking about sangeet and bachelor party..bhabi came with one girl..introduced her "hey sab log...she is uttara..papa ka frnd ka beti yeh..even she will join us in party..swara pls take care of her "...I nodded and started to talk with uttara..


My cute doll with full of attitude...but love to see my beautiful girl...lost in her thoughts...uttara disturbed me" bhai bhai...bade papa neeche bulariye chalo".."teeke chalo par kyu choti kya Baath yeh"..."woh bhai actually Gupta uncle ka beti Ki shaadi yeh...we r going to attend her marriage".."oh ok laksh kahaan chal kayega ".." Laksh bhai was down only sirf u were missing"...bade papa said"sanskar..after 2days we al leaving to Delhi to attend my friend daughter marriage..u have any work"...really I'm not interested to attend any function...so to avoid"yes bade papa..i have started to work for my project so I think I cant able to come"..laksh giggles..and said "chodeye papa..bhai ko kaam yehana tho..sirf haam log Delhi chalthe "...kya Delhi ...oh sanskar I can get chance to meet swara...without knowing the place...now what to do...laksh were irritating me by his action...but without hesitation.."bade papa even I ll come..how I will be alone without you al..kaam ko bathme karlegena..kyu laksh"...i pleaded him to support me...bade papa said"par tumara kaam ko kya hoga..kuch pblm nahi hogana"..before I answer...laksh said"nahi papa..actually next year project yeh..sanskar was studious right so started now itself..koi pblm nahi yeh"..bade papa told"chup laksh...wen you will became sincere like sanskar...if u cant leave but don't spoil sanskar ...you Tel me sanskar u don't have any pblm right"..hahaha laksh caught by his own words..."yes bade papa I don't have any pblm.."finally succeeded but no use how I can meet her...i don't anything ...where she lives..just for satisfaction for inner soul I have to go...ok let enjoy with family friends..laksh called me"bhai chalo..let me Ragini ka admission kya Hua"...oh yes I forgot to tell him what happened..."oh mera bhai ...tumara girlfriend created pblm for my love life".."what girlfriend who is that sanskar"..." Don't act laksh..its Ragini only.."..he was shock"kya bhai ...nooo I cant even imagine like that..she is devil bhai...i cant be happy for a minute also with her...whole life with her...no way..what r u planning to make my life hell haa"...I laughed n said"hey lucky she is nice girl..dont talk like that about her...woh hamara dost yeh..samjihi...".."accha bhai..samjihi..tum bhi samjavo...Ragini sirf dost aur kuch bhi nahi"...what really he meant it or what...he has no feelings for her..i don't what going between them ..hope they wont hurt each other.."ok ok baba..aap meri kahani ko sunlo "...i said him what and happened in college...he was shock ...widen eyes n mouth...i shaked him "kuch tho bol lucky"..."bhai isska matlab woh confirm mera bhabi yena ??"...I blushed by his question.."bhai aap koi pblm nahi naa"..."hey still swara not talked anything..let college starts..she have to face this sanskar...koi attitude nahi hoga mera pas...woh sab chodo..u should apologise priya she was hell angry on you lucky"..."has bhai ..i will call and talk with her..n will ask her swara oops sry bahbi ka number"..."oh hello I don't need her number..i will wait for her..will get everything by her wish...so u don't need to worry..and don't contact priya its better..after college starts u talk to her ..face to face..".." Ok sanky guru...so now u r love guru..my fate..what to do"..love guru me???...we reached Delhi...so hot...we had own guest house in Delhi..we got ready and reached gupta uncle villa..well decorated..haldi ceremony was going on...really its boring lot..no use of coming ...nidhi Gupta came near us hot blessings from my parents..talking something...and said"aunty aap logako pblm nahi tho Mei uttara ko lekar chalege..mera friends sab log terrace per yeh..aur aaj raath ek party yeh ...sirf girls ka party...so Tel me shall I take uttara with me..dont worry I will take care"...what girls ka party...i don't want to send uttara..i cant oppose now..coz bade papa gave permission...she taken uttara to terrace...laksh said"bhai yeh girls ka party...y we cant spy them"..." Chup lucky..its not manners..i was lil worried for uttara she is kid lucky".."yes bhai u r right...so only telling we have to spy for uttara..".." Its wrong lucky"..."its not wrong sanky .."someone patted my shoulder..its Ajay ...nidhi di ka bhai...mera accha dost..."what sanky how r u...lucky was not wrong we can spy them.."...im not all agreed with them...later I met al my family friends..we formed group..finally my time passed ...we al r chit chatting near pool side...I saw uttara at far distance with one girl...many girls coming towards pool side...now my vision was clear..im dumbstruck its swara..kya beauty...she wore simple lengha..orange with pink combination...light make up...first time seeing her in traditional dressing style..oh god its suits her perfectly...she looks so pretty...but what she doing here..kya Gupta uncle ka relative yeh..I think I did many good things in previous birth..so now gos helping me in al ways...she didn't notice me..busy in talking with girls...one girl behind me shouted"yeah swara what doing mom called 10times..you not reached on time you will be dead by ur dadi re...priya pagal Shona ko bulakar chaldi aajana yaar..I cant lie more to shomi aunty re"..she was shouting at priya who lil away from her...I turned to see her..i,knew its kushi..she was opened her mouth..her expression made me laugh...she compose herself..waved her hands"hi sanskar..tum yaha..."..oh she can able to complete her sentence properly..priya ran to kushi..they talking something...priya turned and said"oh hi sanskar"..but her face expression changed into angry...yes she staring at laksh..oh nooo..laksh cant create pblm like Ragini..to calm the situation..i walked towards them.."hi kushi n priya..what u guys r doing here"...kushi with attitude.."oh hello we have to ask this to u...u guys r came to our city ok"...i think this girls al having attitude speech only..."oh ok meri ma..i came to attend my family friend marriage..now can u Tel me why u guys r here"..laksh joined me "hi beauties'"..i gave angry look to him...but already priya giving death look to him..but kushi was giggling understand the situation ..kushi said"oh so u were girls side..welcome to our brother marriage..".."matlab kya Tel directly beauty"..laksh trying to flirt...without knowing this girls nature...kushi said"oh tum hai laksh..what trying to flirt with me..just for info..im not like Priya got it..i will break ur"...oh shit this girls r really disgusting...priya stopped her otherwise we r gone...priya continued"sanskar Tel ur bro to shut his mouth..otherwise he will hear only swear words from my mouth..im trying to behave calm n good girl...and aur yeh swara ka bhai Ki shaadi yeh..so we r from boy side..now r u clear "..she said with lil calm..but still she burning at laksh..I don't think so it will arise rhia big issue...really I'm searching the way to solve their pblm..now where is swara..kushi said"ok bye we r getting late..will meet 2mrw at sangeet bye sanskar..aur tum laksh oops sry don't take serious..."..she was teasing him...priya said"ok,bye guys"..they started scooty ..but Shona was nowhere..i turned my head and searching her...to shock some soft hands hold my cheek n turned head towards her..my doll..my eyes widen in shock..onething strike my mind ..just want to take her into my embrace...came out of my trance..she asked in teasing tone"kya sir whom u were searching with so interestingly...kya tumara girlfriend ko search karehi kya"...i gulped by her encounter...oh god she too bold...i understand..now its my turn cooly replied her by going very close to her..hahah she started to sweat for this itself.."yes miss swara..im searching my baby doll...you know she looks perfect n pretty today...i cant take my eyes from her..you want to see her???"...she moved back and gulped..."woh ..."both realized laksh n her friends staring at us...priya said in uncomfortable tone"swara plz come we have to leave ...u can continue 2mrw in private "...oh god what I did but I smiled at priya...swara run n sat in scooty...said"bye both of u"...oh god she affected lot...but its starting only..."abhi toh party shuru hui hai naa"..said to myself...laksh smiling naughtily at me...


Sorry for any mistake...and if u don't like anything in my story just tel me...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Leku superb update 👏
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
such a sweet update di .👍🏼👏 thank u for d compliment ... even one of ur characters name is nidhi na. iam to see dat ... update nxt part soon di ...
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏👏👏
Awesome update.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow.. Nice update.. when i red last part i thought it was a dream. But no. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey leku wonderful update..
Loved it 😊

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