SwaSan FF- KAISE HUA YEH ISHQ ? ( updated part 1 pg 5 ) - Page 3

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Super - Duper Amazing
Fabulous CS and Prologue
Post Next Super Soon
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thanks 😃
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Originally posted by: simsen23

concept is good...
however being terrorist is not cool
juat a suggetion...(hope swara will change)
keep writting pooja
and pm me.
love,
simi

p.s.-thanx sujoy for pm

thanks and sure the story line will change swara and lakshya's view😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Pooja.. It's a request please add English too I can't understand Hindi...:-(
Love to read your ff but its stopping me...

Please...

I'll surely write in English 😃
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Originally posted by: naucfan

Awesome dear n nice concept...

thanks😃
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Update soon...as the characters sketch and story was awesome...reserved for the next part already
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start
interesting m unique concept
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its a good start..in a different way😉..pls keep continue..good luck
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hi !! all i am back with part 1 hope u like

ASSAM
lakshya- swara i know what we r doing is not right but...
swara-i know lakshya its our job what we can do we are helpless (tearful eyes)
swara and lakshya are best frnds they had a normal life but suddenly in turn of events they had to become terrorists
lakshya- when the right time arrives we will surrender ourselves
swara- god pls help us we do not want to do this job but are compelled pls give us a solution
there crew member rakesh comes
rakesh- sir!! all the arrangemets have been done we have to leve in a hour
lakshya-(nods) ok
swara- lakshya we had so many frnds right in school days(eyes filled with tears)
lakshya- yea.. so many but when...
swara continued
swara- they got to know we r terrorists they left us...
lakshya- swara...leave the past it wont come back we have to do something so that we can improve our future
swara-(wipes tears) u r right lakshya..
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MUMBAI
sanskaar- ragini so when r ur parents coming
ragini- next month!! oh i forgot totally about it ..
sa- so any shopping plans for them
ra- yea..we will go next week
sa- ok
sanskaar goes home there his mom annapurna and sister uttara were waiting for him near there big mansion gate
an- sanskaar see its almost 10 y are u so late today
sa- ma.. chill pls i had some important work to be completed urgently..
an- but u could have called me right ?
sa(holds his ears)-sorry
his this gestures always made his mom smile
an- always u do something and i forget my anger
sa- mom u and uttara and ragini r my only family if u r itself angry then who else do i have
his last sentence made her eyes filled with tears she started remembering there old days and how her husband died when sanskaar was only 8 yrs and uttara was 6 yrs how hard it was for her to bring up these both ..
sa(concernly)- maa. remembering papa?
an(nods)- yes ..
sanskaar diverted the topic
sa-uttara!!! i know u must have only done something
ut- bhaiya..i didnt do anything
sa-hmmm.. i know wait till i catch u
ut-bhaiya.. no ..
both start running round of annapurna she sees them laughing
an- u both have only been my treasures always stay united
sanskaar and uttara hugged their mumma and retired to their respective bedrooms
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next day ..
swara and lakshya already reached the silver palace hotel and where planning further on..
la- so we have to attack the colaba area today swara and remember there should not be any mistake
sw- yea lakshya ...
la- and no one should recognise us .. it is the most important thing and so u must be very careful
swara nodded
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meanwhile
ra- sanskaar why shouldnt we go for a evening walk?
sa(smiles)-nice idea .. come lets go
ra- actually mom dad are coming this weekend itself so..
sa-u want to go shopping today ?
ra- yea...
sa- ok then lets go anyways we have completed our work for today ..
after their purchase was over
ra- sanskaar i am feeling thirsty (smiles) i want juice
sa- ok then.. u pay the bill i will get it
ragini nods
at the same time
la-swara...
sw- yes lakshya..!
la- u go this way ..and tell me which place would be right to place a bomb ..
sw- ok and u ?
la- i'll go this way
sw- ok..!
while swara was going in the lane a hand covered her mouth
it was a kidnapper !!
ki- oh item dont shout and if u act smart then .. even i dont know wat i will do ok..!!
swara tried hard to free herself but could'nt suddenly...
a strong hand hit the kidnapper in his cheek it was none other than ...
sa(angry eyes)- hey u !! leave her how dare u touch her
swara hid herself behind sanskaar protectively she felt a unknowing sense of secureness
ki- what u think of urself see what i do know
sanskaar hit the kidnapper red and blue the kidnapper ran away
sw(trying to smile)- thank u Mr...
sa- sanskaar ... sanskaar maheshwari
sw- nice meeting u and once again thanks ..
sa- no need to say thanks and where u want to go tell me i will drop u in my bike
sw(tensedly)- no ..no.. its ok i'll go myself
sa- no pls the area is not quite good and u like beautiful girls will attaract many people so i'll drop u .
swara( hestitely )- ok
sa- so where u have to go ?
sw- the silver palace hotel ...
sa(surprised)-silver palace ? new here ?
sw- yea.. i am came from assam yesterday
sa-oh ok
swara sat behind sanskaar he left her near the hotel
sa- byee
swara waved her hand
sa- 1 minute ..i forgot to ask ur name...
swara hesitated at first but
sw- swara
sa- swara !! nice name
sw- thanks
sa- ok bye..
sw- bye..
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sanskaar reached the shopping mall
ra- sanskaar!!where is the juice ?
sa- here ..
ra- y so late ?
sa- actually..
and told her what happened
ra- hmmm u did the right thing
sanskaar smiled
sa(confused)- but actually by seeing her i felt a strange feeling ... something unexplainable
ra- i think u started to like her ..
sa- really ??
ragini nodded
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hope i didnt dissapoint anyone
do share ur valuable likes and comments ..
Soundharya

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update pooja 👏
Swasan ko love at first sight
Lakshya and swara terrorist
Thanks for pm




P.s- Now update dill mill gaye 😆

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