SwaSan Drabble series: Vignettes from the Past

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.
Your best short piece of work ever!
Great job Viji! Love how you subtly added those taunts in!

Looking forward to read the next ones.

Best,
Nisha

Hey Nisha sweetheart 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton. So so happy that you loved this dear 🤗

I've posted the last drabble of this series today. Do read when time permits and let me know what you felt.

Love,

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: -Jamina
Simply awesome ❤️

Thanks a lot Jami. 🤗 So happy that you loved it.

Cheers

Viji

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Nisha sweetheart 🤗 🤗

Thanks a ton. So so happy that you loved this dear 🤗

I've posted the last drabble of this series today. Do read when time permits and let me know what you felt.

Love,

Viji

Hehe, I read both of them together 😆

🤗

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

Hehe, I read both of them together 😆

🤗

Oh great then. Glad you liked them. 🤗

Hope work pressures have eased off a bit, you'd mentioned last week about having a torrid time.

Love,

Viji

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Hi Friends...

Thanks for your most wonderful feedback on this Drabble set, as well as the entire series.

I trust I've replied individually to all your comments now.

So touched and humbled by all the amazing feedback---Thanks again, guys. 🤗 🤗

Lots of Love,

----Viji

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Vijiii my dear...🤗

I was blushing and smiling while reading these 2 drabbles..😆
Especially the first one..😉

I loved the way you wrote about their interest in Tennis..😃 Even if I am not that much of a fan, but still I loved reading about Swasan moments while watching the match..

And Swara's comment about Federer was 😆 super hilarious..The way Sanskaar felt jealous was😛 ... (Even I love Federer😳, he is so handsome)

And the most interesting part was when Sanskaar joined the Gym, just for having a body better than Swara's favourite Tennis player..😆😉

And the legendary towel dropping scene was..☺️ ha ha..I enjoyed it just like Swara..😉

And coming to the second drabble, I loved Sanskaar's idea of retaliation to Raglak,,😆

Poor Swara was stuck in front of the supposedly romancing couple and Sanskaar was all the more happy to help her out..😳 I really loved Sanskaar here..

I was expecting some romance after that scene, but you just wrapped it up just like that..😛

But anyways I loved them both..Really awesome work yaar Vijiii 🤗

PS - Sorry,I know I am taking time to write updates for my works..But I am not able to complete them sooner, as promised.. Hope you understand my plight..I am way too busy..

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: hp_2006
Vijiii my dear...🤗

I was blushing and smiling while reading these 2 drabbles..😆
Especially the first one..😉

I loved the way you wrote about their interest in Tennis..😃 Even if I am not that much of a fan, but still I loved reading about Swasan moments while watching the match..

And Swara's comment about Federer was 😆 super hilarious..The way Sanskaar felt jealous was😛 ... (Even I love Federer😳, he is so handsome)

And the most interesting part was when Sanskaar joined the Gym, just for having a body better than Swara's favourite Tennis player..😆😉

And the legendary towel dropping scene was..☺️ ha ha..I enjoyed it just like Swara..😉

And coming to the second drabble, I loved Sanskaar's idea of retaliation to Raglak,,😆

Poor Swara was stuck in front of the supposedly romancing couple and Sanskaar was all the more happy to help her out..😳 I really loved Sanskaar here..

I was expecting some romance after that scene, but you just wrapped it up just like that..😛

But anyways I loved them both..Really awesome work yaar Vijiii 🤗

PS - Sorry,I know I am taking time to write updates for my works..But I am not able to complete them sooner, as promised.. Hope you understand my plight..I am way too busy..

Hey Naina darling...🤗 🤗 🤗

So very happy you loved this drabble and the series too, sweetie! Hahaha I am extremely glad to know that I could make you laugh and blush with these 2 drabbles! 😆 😉

Oh yes, Sanskaar certainly felt a tad jealous hearing Swara's innocent fangirling over Varun Kapoor and Federer. 😳 😉 He wants Swara's attention all to himself, you see!

He of course decides that Swara needs to know, Federer is not the only person whom Bhagwan ne banaya hoga, bade fursat se!! 🤣 But all that effort in the gym, to get ripped and toned works out well na---Swara is duly impressed with his physique! 😉 Of course, after that the towel also decides to play cupid.!!!!! ☺️ ☺️

Thanks for saying you loved smart Sanskaar's idea of putting RagLak in their place, in the 2nd drabble. Sanskaar will do anything for Swara; he would not mind inflicting scratches all over his shoulder and back, to shield Swara from RagLak's taunts! And Swara also realizes this...Sanskaar gets some much needed TLC from her, so I'm sure he was also happy in the end! 😉

Haha about adding a romantic clinch for SwaSan here---this was in the days of their "pretend marriage" na. They haven't yet acknowledged their deepening feelings, even to themselves, let alone to each other. More subtle romance comes in Drabble #3. 😉 Full blown romance comes in my other OS/ 2S/ 3S. 😳 ☺️

Thanks again Nainu...No problem about your updates dear, I know you're busy. Eagerly waiting for them, as and when you are able to post.

Lots of Love,

---Viji

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Viji... 🤗They are simply amazing... I love you for writing these... ❤️❤️❤️

Part 1 : Alright you had me laughing with this one... Sanskaar was so cute here... Jealous of Fed 😆 And generally your trainers give you threats... but our hero is unique... He gave his trainer a threat... 🤣 "Get ripped in 15 days" and "30 days insanity workout" 🤣
Awww... what wouldn't I give to see such scene... Sanskaar in towel and Swara speechless 😆 The first time I read this drabble ...I knew it that you are going to drop his towel... Poor Sanskaar... 😆and not so poor Swara... 😈😆

Part 2:
I love the way, you bestowed so much praise and looouuu on Laksh and Ragini... 😊😊😊 They are truly worthy of it 😃😃😃
Sanskaar... I love the witty Sanskaar... especially the fake marriage track Sanskaar... In just few words he gave back to RagYa so good... 😳😳 And Swara... 😆😆😆 how much I had wished for this Swara during that track... but she was busy then with maa-baba and behena jaap ...
So she does notice small details about her hubby... good very good girl... Loved it very much..
The last scene was so sweet... their care for each other... totally amazing...

Love
Nitzy😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: ..NightDragon..
Viji... 🤗They are simply amazing... I love you for writing these... ❤️❤️❤️

Part 1 : Alright you had me laughing with this one... Sanskaar was so cute here... Jealous of Fed 😆 And generally your trainers give you threats... but our hero is unique... He gave his trainer a threat... 🤣 "Get ripped in 15 days" and "30 days insanity workout" 🤣
Awww... what wouldn't I give to see such scene... Sanskaar in towel and Swara speechless 😆 The first time I read this drabble ...I knew it that you are going to drop his towel... Poor Sanskaar... 😆and not so poor Swara... 😈😆

Part 2:
I love the way, you bestowed so much praise and looouuu on Laksh and Ragini... 😊😊😊 They are truly worthy of it 😃😃😃
Sanskaar... I love the witty Sanskaar... especially the fake marriage track Sanskaar... In just few words he gave back to RagYa so good... 😳😳 And Swara... 😆😆😆 how much I had wished for this Swara during that track... but she was busy then with maa-baba and behena jaap ...
So she does notice small details about her hubby... good very good girl... Loved it very much..
The last scene was so sweet... their care for each other... totally amazing...

Love
Nitzy😳

Nitzy darling...🤗 🤗

I've been missing you so much yaar. 🤗 Your comment just made my morning brighter! 😊

Hahaha, yes in Part 1, Sanskaar is getting quite possessive of Swara, you see! 😉 He wants all her admiration and attention, though he hasn't yet figured out why he's getting a tad jealous over her innocent fangirling over Varun Kapoor 😆 and Roger Federer!

Yup, he certainly puts in a lot of effort to get toned and ripped like Federer! Certainly paid off na, Swara was mightily impressed! And then the towel also decided to play cupid!! 🤣 That was really a Jab se Tere Naina moment!! 😳 🤣

Part 2: Oh, Thank you, Thank you, for loving all the loouuu and sheer admiration I had lavished on RagLak. 😆 I also just love the witty Sanskaar, with that sarcastic and wry wit. He could put RagLak in their place with his laconic set downs any time! 😆

Oh Yes, Swara has started noticing lots of things about her "hubby"---his calf muscles, his woodsy fragrance, the aroma of the shower gel he uses, his wonderful eyes...😳 ☺️

Sanskaar is so protective of Swara, he would be willing to scratch himself all over his back, provided that would shield her from RagLak's taunts! But this worked out well too, he got the much needed TLC from his "wifey". 😉

So very happy you loved this, Nitz darling! 🤗

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virman_superhit

@virman_superhit

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Loveee this one as well.. 😆😆😆... Too many comments in one day.. No more words left.. For praising your works.. 😆😆😆.. Lol.. kidding.. They are just awesome..

Loved this one coz of the unending support Sanskaar is to Swara.. Awww... 😳😳😳.. He is just too sweet and cute.. Love the innovative idea thou.. Lol.. If this happened in the show in reality i would have died laughing after seeing the expression on the faces of Ragini and Lakshya.. 😆😆😆... That would have been a treat to see.. But even imagining it while reading your story was way too funny.. 👏...

We all need that one person who can back us up when the world seems to be low.. and i can see that Swara has found that one person in Sanskaar.. He can never see her upset or being humiliated by anyone.. Sweetheart he is..😳😳.. Also loved Swara here.. Noticing her hubby.. 😆😆

The initial scene between Swasan was way too funny... Sanskaar jealous... Lol.. For a person who loves so much someone it can come naturally... Awww... i wish we see such jealousy now in the show.. They both are in love with each other.. It would be actually fun to see some light teasing sessions between them.. 😆😆...

What else can i say... Thankkk Youuu... A biggg one and an even biggerrr huggg... 😃😃...