REVENGE or LOVE (CH-18 UPDATED) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Nice update
Aww poor Rajveer's

Loved ragini and rajveer's bond




Edited by sudhi03 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
First of all thank you for PM.
And that was really emotional.
Feeling bad for Ragini.
Hope rajveer will get well soon.
And I'm eagerly waiting for raglak scenes.
Please update asap. Thank you. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Awesome update
Feel bad for Ragini...she has been through so much
Hope Rajveer gets better
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
really nice update thank you
poor Ragini and her brother hope he gets well soon

cant wait to read what happens next

please post it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Rajveer , felt bad for him.
Eager to who is dat person ??
Thnkww for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
CH-5
Scene starts with Ragini taking Rajveer with her from the mental hospital. She makes him sit in the car & tightens his seat belt. She herself sits on the driving seat. Ragini was happy that finally she is taking her brother with her after long 8 months. Finally her brother will live with her. She starts driving.
In MM--
Sanskaar & Laksh arrives. They see there family waiting for them.
Swara- Sanskaar , Laksh what happened, were did Ragini went? Did u guys found out something.
Sanskaar & Laksh tells them abt Rajveer & his condition. They feel bad.
Sujata- Dekha Uttara, teri ek galti ne uss larke ki kya haalat kar di. Sharm aati hai mujhe tumhe apni beti kahte hue.
Uttara- Maa... She cries..
Annapurna- Yeh sab chhodo Sujata, Ragini-Rajveer, Avantika ke bacche hai, bacchpan se unho ne kaphi kucch sahan hai, abb humey unka khayal rakhna honga.
Sujata- Haa jiji...
In the Car--
Rajveer sees Ice-cream parlour. He jumps like a kid.
Rajveer- Dii, Ice-cream, mujhe ice-cream khaani hai...
Ragini- Chhote, aapko shardi lagg jayen gi.
Rajveer- Nahi mujhe khaani hai, khaani hai...
Ragini- Okay fine... She goes with Rajveer & takes a ice-cream.
Rajveer (making a baby face)- Mujhe doon khaani hai... He takes one more.
Ragini smiles at his antics.
Ragini- Challe chotte...
Rajveer- Aap nahi lo gey... Ice-cream.
Ragini nods in negative.
They go in the car. Ragini was driving the car.
Rajveer was eating ice-cream. He brings ice-cream in front of Ragini's mouth. Ragini looks at him & signals him - What??
Rajveer- Aap bhi khaao na, Rajveer aapko khilayen ga.
He signals Ragini to take a bite. She eats a bite.
Rajveer- Tasty hai na.
Ragini nods yes. She had tears in her eyes. She goes in Flashback--
Ragini was in her home (in mumbai). Just then Rajveer comes from back & closes her eyes.
Ragini- Chotte, kya kar rahe ho.
Rajveer- Dii, dekho main kya laya hu. Ice-cream.
Ragini- Chotte, aap jaante ho na humme ice-cream nahi pasand. Cough ho jaata hai. Aur aggar hum motte ho gaye toh.
Rajveer- Oh meri health consious di.. kucch nahi honga... Ek bite lo na.
Ragini- Chotte...
Rajveer- Common Dii, plz lo na, aap jaante ho na, aap ko khilaye bina mujhe kucch hazam nahi hota. Aur phir aap nahi khaao gey toh main bhi nahi khaunga, aur meri favourite ice-cream pighal jaayen gi.
Ragini- Chotte.. tum nahi sudhro gey, mujhe khila kar hi raho gey. She takes a bite.
Rajveer- That's like my dii. Aur main aakhir aapka bhai hoon, itnni jaldi kaise sudhar sakta hu.
Ragini gives him a look & they both burst out in laughter.
Flashback ends...
Ragini comes out of her thought. She wipes her tears. They enter MM. Ragini & Rajveer gets out of the car. Rajveer sees a huge mansion.
Rajveer- Dii, yeh hamara ghar hai. Ittna bada (he says cutely with hand actions)
Ragini- Haa, andaar challe. She goes inside with Rajveer.
All sees them coming in.
Ragini- Aao Rajveer. He was holding Ragini's hand.
She sees Maheshwaris looking at them. She ignores them.
Ragini- Rajveer yahan baitho. She looks for dadi.
Dadi comes from her room.
Dadi- Arrey laddo to kahan gayi thhi. She sees Rajveer. She gets happy.
Dadi- Rajveer, my grandson. She goes to hug him.
He hides behind Ragini & holds her hands tightly.
Ragini- Chotte, darro matt yeh hamari dadi hai.
Rajveer looks at Ragini, he comes out from back & hugs Dadi. Dadi cries.
Dadi- Mahara chorra, kaisa hai tu.
He breaks the hug. He sees tears in Dadi eyes & wipes with his hands.
Rajveer- Mujhe rone walle log pasand nahi.
Dadi- Ab tu aa gaya na, ab main na rounn gi.
Rajveer sees Maheshwaris. He says- Dii, yeh logg kaun hai.
Ragini intros them to him.
Rajveer- Dii mujhe bookh laggi hai.
Annapurna- Haa, beta mai kucch le kar aati hu, tum donno ke liye.
Ragini (angrily)- Koi jarrorat nahi hai Mrs Maheshwari, main apne bhai ka khayal rakh sakti hu. Aur kya paata aap hamare khaane main kucch milla den. Main risk nahi le sakti. Jis tarah aapke pati ne mere baba par waar karwaya, ho sakta hai ki aap bhi waisa hi kucch karre, mere bhai ke saath.
Annapurna gets tears listening to Ragini's words.
Swara- Ragini yeh tum kya kahe rahi ho. Badi Maa... She was cut off by Ragini.
Ragini- Swara... tumhari bahut gandi aadat hai dusro ke beech bolne ki. Kitni baar kahan hai tumse. Lekin tum maanti hi nahi. Har baar loggo ke beech apni taang arrana, har baar mahan banene ka shauk tumharra kab jayenga. Haa. Aurr yaad rahe aggar aap mein se kissi ne bhi hamare bhai ko nukshaan pahuchane ki koshish ki na toh humse burra koi nahi honga.
She turns to Rajveer.
Ragini- Chotte, aap ko bhookh lagi hai na, pohe khaao gey.
Rajveer nods in yes.
Ragini- Aap dadi ke pass baitho, hum abhi aap ke liye banna kar laate hai.
She goes.
Rajveer- Dadi aap mere saath khelo gey.
Dadi nods. And they play...
So how is this chapter...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Very nice chapter! But Ragini is very rude toward AP! And good she tell Swara stop interinfering in others affair ;)
Waiting for the next chapter! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
Aww rajveer is too cute.
Ragini and Rajveer's bond is very sweet.
Thank you.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: azira07

Omg Ragini brother is mental :-( And very well written dear Can't wait to read next update and Raj_Ragini. Bonding ;-(( Thanks for pm

Thanks Dr... Glad that u liked it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Really nice update I like the relationship between the brother and sister so sweet

It's no she gets along with dadi I hope he gets well soon

I like what Ragini said to Swara

Thanks for the update can't wait to read what happens next

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