Calypso : SwaSan (Complete) - Page 3

Originally posted by: Sanya17

yippeee nxt prt of icarus it is my favorate story i m so happy to see its new part will give detail comment aftr reading

Originally posted by: .FairyDust.

Eeeks!

Icarus Spinoff!

RES

Originally posted by: jisa

nice..!

Originally posted by: manasie23

Saku thank you for the pm hon...This was such a pleasant surprise hope you are going to write more oneshots on this one ... Would love to read more of Icarus

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Res

Unres:

Sakura,

Fabulous work on this spin-off. I loved your spin off title and the title for the one-shot. The quotes were so apt for each of the three scenes.

I loved the portrayal of Annapurna. Her feelings when Sanskaar left due to her betrayal and that persistent guilt that is present within her. It is really well written. When everything just hits her and she sits on the sofa because she just destroyed her relation as a mother to keep the other relations in the house intact was brilliant.

I always wondered how could Lakshya act in such a cruel manner with Swara if he was the actual killer. He knew she didnt do anything and he still condemned her. So much for loving her,huh? This part answered that for me. Thank you. Brilliant portrayal of the relation between DP and Lakshya here. DP really hates Sanskaar and he protects Lakshya without any sense of right or wrong. Its really sad.

This part had the feels to it. I could literally see that guilt in her and then the way she finally discovers how wrong her husband truly is. It was so fantastic to visualize her realisation and the determinate way she finally found to give herself some peace over the constant guilt. Brilliant.!

Please update soon :)

-V

P.S.: Glad to see more of your works so soon. I thought would have to wait for some time to read such amazing writing again. Hats off and keep writing. 😊

Originally posted by: Sanya17

wow it was really wow 👏 amazing ,
durgaprasad i kept wondering in all through icarus tht hw cn sm1 be so evil ,he is really evil bt the real thing which is dangerous is nt his evilness it is his cuningness his power to portray himself innocent evn whn he is evil in real ,his ability to manipulate the situation this is the thing tht annhiliated d havoc n destroyed everything this is far more dangerous thn his evilness
ap this part gv more inside towards her pov she was nt evil bt she was blinded towards her husbands evilness n ruined her innocent elder sons life who trusted her with his life its true tht she did a very big mistake actually a crime/sin bt she did everythin to crct it too she hd sfrd fr her deeds too
awsm truly amazing waiting fr nxt prt icarus is my fvrt hv i told u bfr tht i lvd icarus so mch i hv rd it so many times tht i remember all of it ur definition of victory n the one "whn dreams turns into nightmare sleep is one inescapable prison " i dnt think i cn ever forget these two

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Saku dearest xoxo

You know my love for Icarus as I told you on that excellent piece and why it was so:). So as soon as I read Calypso, I was thrilled! Given my obsession with anything related to Illiad and Odyssey and indeed Troy, the name of the nymph that managed to detain the unusual Odysses for 7 (or 5 or 1 depending which account you believe!) years on Ogygia, inspires deep interest. And I see that this will weave all this in with your usual finesse with this style of writing. Taking a divert here but I always liked the somewhat tangential connects with the Odysses- calypso myth and that of Gilgamesh and how Siduri played a role for him. Back in terms of Calypso, as the name itself derives from concealing or concealment how appropriate for this piece which is in some way a prequel to Icarus? But a sensibly withheld prequel as otherwise the suspense of Icarus would have been lost.

The beginning scene displays the compelling Sanskaar who can be so calmly forceful and hit harder than anyone else when needed. And his intended effect on an Annapurna who is much like the queen I see her doing whatever is necessary for her Ogygia (after all the Maheshwaris live on their own weird little island!) was masterfully done.

Then the scene with lakshya and more importantly the Durga Prasad we saw in Icarus- a truly ruthless scion, was really interesting too. And it now casts so much light on what transpired in Icarus so am glad Sapna encouraged you to post this. All very gripping and I am desperate to lap up all parts. As the Winter Series was the fave of the lovely Winter Ladies, this humble lawyer lays claim on Icarus:).

PS: do you hold a stock of drafted pieces that you don't always post? I get fascinated by how different people write:). And then do you revisit it and make amends if you do decide to post or just post it? I truly admire your ability to work on multiple sections in that case. I get so obsessed over the current thing I am working on, each part of my writing brain then gets absorbed by it:(. Xoxo

PPS: I have assumed with Annapurna being calypso for now as essentially Calypso only detains Odysses for a fixed amount of time and then sets him on his way to return him to his destiny which is with Penelope, not her so that was my reasoning but if I am wrong you'll tell me:). Or is the reference to Swara as Calypso in the sense that Casper then showed SK the way back to his past and he had to return there to right things? Or an option I have totally missed? 😆

Originally posted by: -Jamina

Good to see you back with icarus sequel it was one of my favourite SK and Swara I can't never forget them.
And this one its interesting now we could See the Side of ICARUS. Continue Soon and Don't forget PM for further updates I don't wanna miss my Favourite work 😉

Love Jami ❤️