SWASAN OS: SECRET NIGHTOUT

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Krishnabhisarik

@Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Vianna

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey,
That was such a cute one shot! Filled with love, teasing, childhood memories and naughtiness! Enjoyed reading this a lot! Sanskaar's two choices to Swara! Hahahah. So confident she was dreaming about him. :P
That bully bashing and head banging made me 🤣 ! That kiss in the end Beautifully written. Adorable SwaSan!

-V :)

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

So beautiful!

Our SwaSan😳

Deserve the world of happiness😊

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piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

Absolutely delicious ! 😳 Please give us some more !! 😃

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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Posted: 9 years ago

very sweet beautiful & cute.

like it

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

beautifully written.kya confident banda he😎 either dreaming about me or let live ur dreams with me 👏 liked it so much...The kiss real me yesab kab dekhne ko milega hume?????😳Thnx for the Pm its awesome.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the PM 🤗

I really liked this OS. It was warm and fuzzy and cute, and showed SwaSan having some much needed couple time, the normal courtship period interaction which is so precious for soon to be wed couples. 😊

You put it so well, when you said ""Their souls and hearts had bonded earlier alright, but that was through mutual pain, troubled times... they had never gotten the chance to discover the other's playful, carefree side. There was always a dark presence looming over their heads."

In the serial, this is what had been happening of late, with SwaSan combating one crisis after another, one villain after another. The carefree camaraderie thay had shared earlier during their warm friendship, was not being show much. I hope the next week or two's episodes will be giving those back to us, with interest! 😊

So sweet to read about them swapping stories about their childhood antics! Swara's head banging while playing air guitar, and Sanskaar's wink to a girl, after defeating her bully of a younger brother in a kite flying competition were just 🤣. And of course, the kiss at the end was so soulful and romantic.

Nice work. Look forward to more, Akshata. 🤗

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 9 years ago

awww this was damn beautiful
sanskaar's herogiri at 9 was so sweet
swara being jealous so cute
loved it

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Krishnabhisarik

@Krishnabhisarik

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bwvianna
Hey,
That was such a cute one shot! Filled with love, teasing, childhood memories and naughtiness! Enjoyed reading this a lot! Sanskaar's two choices to Swara! Hahahah. So confident she was dreaming about him. :P
That bully bashing and head banging made me 🤣 ! That kiss in the end Beautifully written. Adorable SwaSan!

-V :)

Thank you so much!! Thought they deserved a much needed break from all the negativity.. Glad you liked it😊