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Posted: 9 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: .IPKKND.

Really like this ff
Pls make an index with the chp no. And the page it's on so that it is easier for us readers to find the chapters in this thread

thanks... i will do it...
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CH-7
Scene starts with Ragini & Kid entering the mall. As Ragini enters Laksh feels her presence. Ragini to feels same but ignores.
Ragini- Toh softies pahele kya karna hai.
Manas & Kaya-- Mumma, food corner...
Ragini- Okay lets go.
They go & sit they order for pizza & cold drink.
Ragini was happy seeing her kids happy. In these 7 yrs they & Raichand family was the reason for her survival.
She came out of her thoughts when Manas ,
Manas- Mumma, aap bhi khaao na.
Ragini takes a slice of pizza.
Kaya- Tasty hai na mumma...
Ragini smiles & nods.
There in gaming zone.
Parsh- Chachu, mujhe bhookh lagi hai.
Laksh- Okay champ, lets go to food corner. He calls SwaSan, Adarsh & Pari too. All six go to food corner.
Laksh- So champ what will you eat.
Parsh- Chachu, popcorn.
Adarsh was abt to go.
Laksh- Bhaiya you all sit, i will bring. He goes.
On another table--
Ragini- So softies do you both need something else.
Manas & Kaya- No mumma...
Ragini- So lets go for shopping.
Manas & Kaya- Yippi...
They were abt to go when Manas- Mumma, i will get popcorn.
Ragini- you both wait, i will get it. She goes.
Meanwhile Laksh brings popcorn for Parsh.
Manas sees him. Manas & Kaya go to him.
Manas & Kaya- Hello dost uncle...
Laksh gets happy seeing them.
Laksh- You both.
Manas- Yes uncle, we have came with mumma.
Kaya- Uncle who are they.
Laksh intro them to Pari, Adarsh, Parsh & SwaSan.
Manas & Kaya say hello to them.
Laksh- Were is your mother.
Kaya- Uncle she had gone to bring popcorns for us.
Manas- Okay uncle we are going mumma wld be bringing popcorn.
They go. Ragini brings popcorn for them & they go for shopping.
Ragini did not saw Laksh & others neither they saw her.
Swara- How cute kids they were.
Sanskaar- Yes. We will have like them only.
Swara looks at Sanskaar. He realizes what he said. He looks back at teary eyed Swara.
Sanskaar- I mean...
Swara (controlling her emotions)- Its okay Sanskaar i can understand. She goes out of the mall.
Sanskaar goes behind her. Pari was abt to go when Adarsh hold her hands & said to let Sanskaar handel.
Outside the mall--
Swara was in parking area crying. Sanskaar comes to her & hugs her.
Sanskaar- I am sorry Swara. I...
He was cut off by Swara.
Swara- No Sanskaar, i am sorry. I cant give you happiness of a kid. We are trying for 7 yrs but my body is unable to conceive. Why Sanskaar, why. She cries.
Sanskaar- No Swara, never ever say like this. You are my life, happiness everything.I am will die without you.
Swara breaks the hug & keeps her hand on Sanskaar's mouth.
Swara- Sanskaar never say this. I love you.
Sanskaar too says the same & hugs her. She smiles. They go back to mall smilling.
They go were Laksh, Adarsh,Pari & Parsh were sitting. They too start eating.
There in same mall Ragini, Manas & Kaya were shoping. They have buyed many things.
Ragini- So softies, shopping ho gayai. Lets go.
Manas- Mumma, can you give us some money, we will buy something for u.
Ragini- No need beta, when i have kids like you, i dont need anything.
Kaya- Mumma, plz...
Ragini- Okay fine i will come with both of u.
Manas- Its a surprise mumma, he said making a baby face.
Ragini smiles at her softies antics. She gave them some cash.
Ragini- I am waiting, go & come soon.
Manas & Kaya leaves. Ragini was waiting for them. Just then she collided with some one.
Shoping back falls from her hand. Ragini bend down to pick it up.
Ragini- Sorry, i did not see you...
As she gets up she gets the biggest shock of her life. She saw Swara standing infront of her with tears.
Ragini- Swara... She sees Sanskaar, Adarsh, Parineeta & Laksh too.
All- Ragini...
There was tear in there eyes. Ragini was trying to control herself. Swara moved towards Ragini & gave her a slap. All are shocked.
Swara-- How dare you leave me? Haa, did not you think once abt me, Maa , baba, dada & dadi. Tum nahi jaanti jis tarah Rag ke bina Sur nahi lagta ussi tarah Ragini ke bina Swara kucch bhi nahi. She hugs her.
Ragini hugs her back. Tears flow from both there eyes. She breaks the hug.
Ragini sees Others. She smiles. Pari comes & hugs her. She intros Parsh with Ragini.
Parsh- Hello Chotti Chachi...
Ragini- How do you know me?
Parsh- Chachi, i have seen your pics in Laksh chachu's room.
Ragini looks towards Laksh. He had tears in his eyes. Ragini moves towards Laksh.
Ragini- Acchi acting kar lete hai aap Mr.Laksh Maheshwari, lekin kam se kam bacche ko toh baksh dette.
Laksh was shocked, no he was hurt but he have hurt Ragini more then it. He could feel sharpness, pain, anger in Ragini's voice.
Laksh- Ragini tum...
Ragini- Not interested Mr.Maheshwari. I want no explainations. Khush Ho na apni azaad zindagi mein.
Just then voice comes- " Mumma, See what we buyed for you."
Ragini turned to them. Others were shocked.
Manas & Kaya comes to Ragini.
Manas- Mumma, see we got a bracelet for you.
Laksh & others see them & get shocked. Laksh was happy. He have met them earlier but did not knew that they were his Kids. Tears of happiness flowed from his eyes.
Ragini- Its beautiful softies & hugs them.
Kaya- Mumma, are you crying.
Manas- Mumma, you know na we hate tears in your eyes.
Ragini nods. Swara & others smile listening to this.
Swara- Ragini yeh tumhare bacche hai.
Ragini nods.
Manas- Arrey mumma, yeh toh dost uncle ki family hai.
Ragini was shocked. Ragini- Dost uncle.
Kaya- Haa mumma, woh she says pointing towards Laksh. Yeh humme kal park mein mille thhe.
Ragini looks towards Laksh. She could see pain in his eyes. She could say that he has changed in these 7 yrs but she does not want to beleive him again.
Ragini- Softies, meet them. She is your Mashi Maa, Swara. They go to her & hugs her.
Manas & Kaya- We missed you mashi maa, why did not you came to meet us.
Swara gets emotional. Swara- I missed you too kids.
Ragini- Softies, he is your Chotte papa, Sanskaar. They hugs him.
Ragini intros them with Adarsh & pari as bade papa & badi maa. Manas & Kaya meets Parsh. He gets happy to meet his siblings. Afterall someone is youger then him. The trio shares a hi-fi.
Kaya- Mumma, aur woh. She asked pointing to Laksh.
Ragini looks towards Laksh & says.
Ragini- Softies woh aapke kucch nahi lagte. Aap log unhe dost uncle kaho.
Others were shocked. Laksh closes his eyes in pain. He was knowing this.
Swara-- Ragini, tum yeh kya...
Ragini- Plz Swara...
Just then her phone rings.
Ragini- Yes, i am coming. So softies lets go.
Manas & Kaya- Yes mumma & they bid bye to others.
Swara- Ragini tum ghar nahi aaogi.
Ragini- Aaongi Swara, lekin abhi mujhe jaana hai. She leaves.
So how is this chapter...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
superb update. waiting for RagYa's confrontation please update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Awesome dea...❤️...Update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Oh this is such a great story !! 😳
Please post the next part soon !! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice

Awesome...awesome...waiting tobsee what's next...


thanks 😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: sudhi03

superb update. waiting for RagYa's confrontation please update the next part soon


thank, glad that you liked it.😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Tanii

Awesome dea...❤️...Update the nxt part soon


thanks will update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: StarshineHues

Oh this is such a great story !! 😳

Please post the next part soon !! 😳


thanks...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really liked this chapter the kids are so cute I like how they love their mum and got a present for her that was so sweet, it was nice how she introduced everyone to the kids well Laksh what can we say can't wait to read what will happen next

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