Pawn 1 - Swasan OS - Page 2

Originally posted by: sarra0

Nice stiry, loved the ending...but im sad its a OS...wud have loved to have read more on this

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey! Very nicely written indeed and you unfolded both the tale and the eventual suspense so beautifully! Really like this style of narrative and I loved how you explored individual feelings of the characters! Nicely done and I hope to read more!

Best wishes

S

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Very very interesting!

Liked how you set the story up by simply describing each character's psyche...

Sanskaar being the chess master had already made his moves.. that subtle & smooth reveal at the end was really nice!

Wish this was a 4S or sth.. would've loved to dig more deeply into his game plan.

Awesome start! 👍🏼

Originally posted by: raaz19

Lovely a mysterious past to our hero... I like this streak of his indeed...

Originally posted by: zeenucharm

Wow intresting...sooo its all sanskar plans...eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: Cinderella3

Hey!

Beautiful piece of work! Loved the way you explored the emotions of each character. Sanskar manipulated the situation well to his benefit. And he got the desired result too. I wonder what would be Swara's reaction once she comes to know about his reality. Continue soon dear. Will be looking forward to read more.