Tu Mera Humsafar SwaSan FF [ PART 40 ] Updated On [ PAGE 159 ] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ishanita

hi goldie
being ur regular reader and going by d prologue I feel dis will be your most intense and promising story so far
really looking forward to it.


Thnks alot. . M Glad u Liked My Prologue. .will Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Goldie I m up for it bebs its sooo interesting n amazing ...
Thanxx for pm

Update asap😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Niyatiswaragini

Goldie I m up for it bebs its sooo interesting n amazing ...

Thanxx for pm

Update asap😃


Thnks alot fr Liking ..Will Update Soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the prologue. What happend to laksh. Till their convo they both seems fine. But suddenly hw sanskar came there? Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start dear..pls pm me the next chapter...😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great concept of ur story
Can't wait for next part
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnks Guyz fr the Wonderful Appreciation fr My New Wrk ... M Damn Happy to Recieve such Amzing Feedbacks frm U All..Really it means alot...Thnks alot Once Agn...Anywyz as u all Eagerly Waiting knw Wat Made Swara Marry Sanskaar if She Loved Laksh ?? And Where Did Laksh Go ?? So Here is the First Part of My FF Tu Mera Humsafar...Hope U Like it :).


Tu Mera Humsafar

Part 01

It's the First Nyt of Swara n Sanskaar after their Marriage And Swara who was All Pale n Dull was Standing Near a Window in Sanskaar's Room by Taking a Support of the Wall while Tears Fell frm Her Eyes Continously and Thinking wat a Game has Her Destiny Played wid Her.Jst then Sanskaar came out of the Washroom n saw Swara in a Very Sad Mood.He went Near Her n Consoled Her n Promised Her Dat He wud Fullfull Her Dreams wich She Saw Till The Tym of Our Marriage.

Sanskaar : Swara ..i knw ki its very Difficult fr u to Accept the Present Situation n i do Feel ur Pain.Plzz dnt b Sad...M There wid u wenever u want n I Promise u to Full Fill Ur Dreams wich u saw jst few Hours Ago..

Swara Turned towards Sanskaar n Saw Him wid Teary Eyes n wid a Hope dat Sanskaar wud Fullfill Jer Dreams Wich She Thot of Jst Few Hours ago..

Swara : Thnk U Sanskaar...I Trust U..I knw u will Full Fill ur Promise Done to Me..Anywyz ( Wipes Her Tears ) its alrdy too Late..Lets Go n Sleep..Subah Jaldi bhi uthna Subah ki Pooja k liye..

Sanskaar : No Swara..its ok..u no need to do all this...this all rituals r made fr Real Couples...bt v Married eachother jst fr a Reason n fr a Particular Tym...so No Need to do all these...i will Convince the Family Members Somehow...U Plzz dnt need to all these ..

Swara : No Sanskaar..its ok..let me do all the Rituals..its fyn...i knw v Married fr a Reason n after some tym we will Brk Our Marriage bt Jab tak M Ur Wife n I need to do all the Rituals atleast fr the Sake of Family..Trust Me..It will give me some Relaxation..plzz

Sanskaar Nodded In Yes n Both Prepared fr Sleep..

Sanskaar : Accha as ur Wish...accha u go n Get Freshen Up n Chng ur Clothes till den i will Prepare da Bed to Sleep..

Swara : Hmm Ok

After Some tym Swara came out of Washroom while Wiping His Face wid Towel n while Wiping She Felt Bad Seeing Sanskaar Preparing His Bed on Couch..

Swara : Sanskaar..Y r u Preparing yr Bed on Couch..its ur Room n Ur Bed na..u Sleep on Bed..i will Sleep on Couch..

Sanskaar : No Swara..u wont b Comfortable on Couch..its ok u Sleep on Bed i will Sleep on Couch..m Fyn Wid it..

Swara : No Sanskaar..Plzz i wont feel good..i will feel bad if u Sleep on Couch..Plzz u Sleep on Bed n let me Sleep On Couch ..

Sanskaar : No Swara..U try to Understand m Telling u na u wont Feel Comfortable here..

Swara : No Sanskaar ( Kept the Towel on Bed n Went Near Sanskaar in Anger ). .i said na Sanskaar u Sleep on Bed n Let me Sleep On Couch..

Both Continued Arguing like Kids n den Later Realized their Childishness n Laughed at eachother..

Swara : Lol...Look at us..we r fyting like Kids..accha ok anywyz I have an Idea...

Sanskaar : ( Laughing ) Haa tell wat Idea ??

Swara : Lets Sleep Turn by Turn..One Day u Sleep on Bed n i will Sleep on Couch den Nxt Day Me on Bed n u On Couch..Ok ??

Sankaar : Hmmm Nyc Idea..Ok..Done...So Today u Sleep On Bed n i will sleep on Couch..
As u maybe Tired coz of Wedding Preparations n all..so u Sleep on Bed Comfortably today..

Swara : Hmm Ok Thnks...

Sanskaar : Ur Welcome..

Both goes to Sleep while thinking wat Happened today n how in Seconds Destiny Chngd Their Lives.Tears Fell frm Both Their Eyes Continously bt Controlled so that the Other cud nt Hear their Weep and Dozes Off..

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Next Day

Its the First Day of Swara Post Her Marriage wid Sanskaar.So she got ready n tried to Wake Up Sanskaar fr the Pooja..

Swara : Sanskaar...utho..its Morning..n v need to Morning Aarti today First...

Sanskaar was Fast Asleep n was nt Ready to Wake Up..Jst then Swara was abt to Touch Sanskaar to wake Him Up wen She Saw One of His Shirt's Button Open n was Embarrassed to See a Part of His Bare Chest..She felt Uncomfortable n Awkward to Go Near Him bt Somehw Went Near Him n Tried to Wake Him Up..

Swara : ( Feeling Strange ) Ssanskaar..utho...Plzz its Alrdy Late..Sanskaar..

Sanskaar : ( Woke Up n Was Confused to see Swara behaving Strange n den Realized His One Button Open ) Ohh M Sorry...actually iss Shirt ka Button Loose Hai..so it gets Open agn n agn..

Swara : Hmm its ok np
..give me the Shirt i will Stitch it fr u..

Sanskaar : No Its Ok Swara..i will tell Ramu Kaka..He will do it..

Swara : Stop Arguing..i said na i will do..nw go n get Freshen Up Come Fast..V need to do Morning Aarti First Today..

Sanskaar : Haa Ok..wait..i will come..

As Sanskaar went to WashRoom Swara Cleaned the Room n Folded the Blanket of Sanskaar n Placed thr Pillows on Bed n den Went to Dressing Table n Took Sindoor n while Filling Her Own Maang Remembers Wat She thot n Wat Happened. .

Swara : ( In Mind ) Y Did the Destiny Played such a Stupid Game wid Me...wat i Dreamth of N Wat i Got in Return.. ( Tears Fell frm Her Eyes Continously while Thinking Something )

Flash Back

Only 2 Hours were Left fr the Wedding n Swara was Damn Nervous n Excited fr Her New Life wich She wud strt in Few Hours.She was Looking Absolutely Gorgeous in Light Pink Madwadi Bridal Attire with Madwadi Jewellery n Bridal Make Up..

Shomi : ( Tears Fell frm Her Eyes ) Wah Meri Shona bahut Pyaari lagrahi hai Shaadi ki Jode main.kisi nazer na lage meri Shona ko...

Swara : Thnk U Maa.. ( Hugs Her )

Shomi : Accha sun tere liye Ek Letter aaya hai.padhle..

Swara : ( Confused ) Letter ?? Mere Liye ?? Accha ok padhlungi..

Shomi Left after Handing the Letter to Swara.Swara opened the Letter n after Reading the Letter She was Hell Shocked n Felt Like Her Life Has Been Snatched frm Her..

Shona

I knw ki u were Eagerly waiting fr this Moment fr Long time n me Trust me Shona i was also waiting fr this Day frm a Long tym bt Swara i need to Go ..i cnt Marry u today.u remember ki i was waiting fr an Opportunity frm USA wich will Boost Up My Career.n Shona u wont believe it.I got that Opportunity nw..so u cn Understand hw Imp is it fr me...So M Sorry Swara i cnt Marry U nw..it will b Difficult fr u i knw..bt Plzz Understand Me.bt I Promise U Ki I Will b bak Soon fr U..Plzz Forgive Me bt I Need to Think abt My Career too.Sorry !!

Ur n Urs
Laksh

Flash Bak End


Present

Swara was Crying n Filled Her Maang n Closed Her Eyes while Filling Her Mang..

Swara : Kya Soccha tha aur Kya Paya..Laksh maine tumhare Naam ka Sindoor bharna tha apne Maang main..but seems like Destiny has Planned something else fr us...abb mujhe nhi pata ki humare Life main aur kya hoga kya nhi...I will Wait fr u Laksh..i knw u will come ...Ur Swara is Waiting fr u...yeh Shaaadi sirf ek Samjhota hai mere liye..abb aage mere Life main kya hai i dnt knw...

Sanskaar who was coming out of Washroom Heard all these n Felt Her Pain n Tears Fell frm His Eyes..

Sanskaar : ( In Mind ) Sacch main Swara..Zindagi kya Khelti hai hume kuch nhi pata ... mujhe bhi nhi pata ki kya hone wala hai hum teeno k life main...Laksh u r one Wrong Step has Spoiled Our Lives. I Hope ki u realize ur Mistake Soon My Bro...

He Wiped His Tears n Came Out by Wrapping a Towel Down bt His Upper Part was Open...Swara saw him Shirtless n was Embarrassed..


Sanskaar : Ohh Sorry..Actually i forgot to take Shirt inside...abb tak akele ehta tha na so i forgot ki u r also there today..M Sorry..

Swara : ( Looking Down in Embarrassment ) its ok...frm nw we both need to Accept the Truth..anywyz u get Ready m going down..u come down fast..

Sanskaar : Haa ...will b there in 10 Mins..

Swara : Hmm ok...

Saying this She Left the Room in Embarrassment n Sanskaar was Left in Room Alone thinking Something..

Sanskaar : Swara i knw u r facing Prblms bt I Promise ki i will Solve all ur Prblms Soon...Bhale humne yeh Shaadi ki hai lekin its a Compromise fr Our Family n Family Reputation. .nthing else dan this...I Promise u I will Full Fill all ur Dreams jst like ur HUMSAFAR...

Sanskaar got Ready n Went Downstairs fr the Pooja n SwaSan Strtd doing the Pooja together n Took Blessings of all Elders..

DP : Jeete Raho aur Saada Suhagaan raho..


AP : Khush Raho tum dono...have a Married Life..

Sujata :Khush Raho Beta..i knw ki its Difficult fr u Swara bt Swara let me tell u ki Sanskaar is really a Good Person..My Son will do anything fr u..coz yeh jo Rishta nibhata hai na puri shiddat se nibhata hai..God Bless U ...

SwaSan Looked at eachother wid Speechless Expressions n Sanskaar Snganalled Worried Swara nt to Worry n they went to RP fr Taking His Blessings.

RP : God Bless U..

Then Entire Family Members Went to Have BrkFast n After Having Brk Fast Sanskaar went to His Room fr Getting Ready fr Office n Sujata Sent Swara to Help Sanskaar..Swara Went to Room wid Hesitation coz She Never Thot all these wud happened wid her in her Life.

Swara : Woh Actually Maa told me to Help u to get Ready fr Office..

Sanskaar : Its Ok Swara...i will Manage...u no need to worry..haa i knw ki b4 Maa used to do all these fr me bt since v r married nw she wont help me in finding all my Belongings so she told u as u r my Wife..bt its ok..i will Manage ..

Swara : Hmm Thnks alot...

Sanskaar : Ur Welcome...

Swara went to Bed n Sat on Bed Reading a Magazine wen she saw Sanskaar Struggling fr His Belongings n was getting Tensed Searching His Belongings.Swara saw he was Searching fr His Wallet like a Small Kid n Smiled at Him..

Swara : Nw i Understood y Maa told me to Help u..Lol...Sanskaar u r srsly a Kid...U r sesrching fr ur Wallet Here n There while u r Having ur Wallet in ur Hand only.

Sanskaar : ( Laughs) Ohh Haa.Lol..Sorry...i have an Imp Meeting today so was Lil Tensed..

Swara Laughed Full Heartedly n seeing Her Laughing Full Heartedly First Tym After Marriage was Smiling n Feeling Happy to See Her Like this..

Sanskaar : Swara Hasti raho aise.u look Good while Smiling n Enjoying da Life ..

Swara : ( Stopped Laughing ) Hmm Thnks...accha u go nw u will b late fr the Meeting..

Sanskaar : Hmm Ya..Bye...

Sanskaar was Abt to Leave wen Swara Called Him n Sanskaar Turned Bak n Saw..

Swara : Sanskaar Suno..

Sanskaar : Haa Bolo..

Swara : All The Best Fr Ur Meeting..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles ) Thnks alot...


Muskurane Ki Wajah Tum Ho
Gungunane Ki Wajah Tum Ho
Jiya Jaaye Na, Jaaye Na, Jaaye Na..
O Re Piya Re..
Jiya Jaaye Na, Jaaye Na, Jaaye Na..
O Re Piya Re..

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Precap : Swara n Sanskaar becomes Frnds.

The End !!!

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So Guyz Here is the First Part of Tu Mera Humsafar. Hope u Like it :).I knw ki its nt Good as its da First Part so did nt get Hw to write.bt as i Proceed wid Further Parts will Try my Best to Write it Good..Do Leave ur Comments in the Comment Box Below :).


#Goldie

Edited by Goldie93 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Beautiful update
Loved it
Thnku for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Lovely update...
I really liked how u showed both of them understanding each other n caring for each other...
Waiting for next update..
And if possible then please do PM me...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
wow ...its awesome...i pray there wont be any MU between swasan...sanskar and swara are perfect humsafars

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