Swaragini FF Chapter 5 updated page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys
I'm back but unfortunately I can't continue with my previous ff of Ragya but I want to start a new one and this will be about both Ragya and Swasan but mainly about Swaragini because I feel like that the track now is too focused on making couples rather than the bonds of the two sisters. So please comment and let me know how this sounds. I will be starting my ff today.
Thank you
PeacexLovexHope

Chapter 1: Page 1
Chapter 2: Page 2
Chapter 3: Page 3
Chapter 4: Page 4
Chapter 5: Page 5
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plzzz continue soon
and make ragini positive
waiting ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sound good but I wish you would continue with your Ragya story
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

plzzz continue soon
and make ragini positive
waiting ...

yes please and smart
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you all so much I hope you will all spread the word and comment your opinions freely
I'm starting my story from when Swara says she will go to the engagement party.
Chapter 1:
Lakshya and Ragini were on their way home. The journey was silent. They reached home and went to their room. Lakshya went into the bathroom while Ragini was taking off her Jewellery.
Ragini: Swara, you can't come tomorrow, all it would do is break your heart.
She got up and stood near the window.
Ragini: I don't want my sister to get hurt, I don't know why I am listening to them.
Lakshya: Listening to who Ragini?
Ragini's eye widened, her back to his face. She didn't know what to say.
Ragini: No one, I'm going to bed.
She went into the bathroom instead.
Lakshya: Strange.

So guys that was a little taster! Please comment below!!! Share with others.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept of ur story
Can't wait for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept :) continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much for the kind responses!

Chapter 2:
Ragini came out of the bathroom to see Lakshya fast asleep. She sighed with relief. She took her phone which was on the dressing table and slowly went downstairs. She was in the kitchen when she received a text which read:" Swara is attending the engagement I see, I told you to do everything for her not come. Its unfortunate how you've successfuly come this far. I hope you remember what our agreement was.
Ragini: What do I do now. How do I stop them from coming to bring our family down?
Sanskaar: Stop who Ragini?
Ragini turned around: Sanskaar?
Sansakaar: What are you doing down here so late and who is 'them'?
Ragini: Sanskaar, you and I started something and even thought you've stopped I have to continue.
Sanskaar: It doesn't have to be like that, you can stop.
Ragini: I can't because...
She paused, Sanskaar stood there for an answer.
Sanskaar: Tell me Ragini.
Ragini: I'm being black mailed!
The words echoed in Sanskaars ears.
Sanskaar stood closer to her.
Sanskaar: Who? Tell me Ragini, we can put an end to it.
Ragini: We can't, they've already taken their first step.

How'd you like it????!!! Please Comment, Like and Share!
PeacexLovexHope
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update
Can't wait to find out who is blackmailing Ragini
Hope Sanskar helps Ragini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz do continue. ..I love it..
So here Ragini is all positive. .hurray...

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