hey viji.. 🤗🤗
totally loved this os..
right from the way swasan initially kept a check to ragini's plans to swasan reunion and the development of the bond between them and finally the much awaited union of these two loving souls..
everything was just perfect and damn awesome. the way u described everything makes me go awww... love u for it dear..
coming to the day -16 and day -17
i loved the way u twisted the plot from ram prasad to durga prasad. it was really interesting to read a different shade of durga prasad.
i just loved the way u described sanskaar's state after misunderstanding his father and the way swara assured him about her love for him and finally the union. it was just beautiful and the timing was really superb.
i even loved the back story of kaveri. u have weaved a very convincing story around them the characters of kaveri, durga prasad and ram were kept intact.
i seriously love this ram prasad in ur writings and i miss to see this is show. i guess the cv's have made him a mute viewer he doesnt have neither a dialogue nor any expression he is just a mute spectator in the show.
coming to the confrontations i just loved the small, crisp yet straight forward confrontation between the father and son duo. and even the confrontation of DP with Rp and sanskaar along with swara was awesomely penned down. the dependence of swasan on each other is excellently described. and im in love with this sanskaar who always seeks support and strength from his wife and even stands like a pillar when she needs that.
i just loved the clever decision of sanskaar to give away the property for her bade papa's sake and protect his self respect by leaving the house. and im really happy with the swara in this who thinks practically and stands by her husband.
actually i didnot read the previous os since many days as i have seen u left it at cliff hanger and since i cant bear suspense i thought to leave it till u update it completely. when i saw day 17 updated i read it only to find that u left it at a more higher suspense point. please do update quickly..😭 i cant bear suspense..
i dont know how the next part is gonna be but i want you to write something in lines of ragini taking the property but the mm people leaving the house and leading new and happy life in a small house starting a new business all togther and then dadi and ragini realising their mistakes.
last but not least thank u so much for such an awesome os and inspiring quotes..🤗🤗
waiting eagerly for the update
with love
rithu..
Edited by rithika2015 - 9 years ago
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