The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16 - Page 34

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Posted: 9 years ago
dreamy too small update but it is nice lakshya lol waiting for next update post ASAP plx post big one
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for not replying for your last 3 chapters Dreamy. They awesome as always bt a complaint they so short. I am not used to be deprived like this by u. Please do update soon and longer chapters. I am your fan for life. And dnt worry what's going on in the show I bet half the raglak/ragini fans dnt even knw what's happening in the show. And I am not a fan of V dsena bt as soon as u mentioned him I imaged them together they would look amazing together,
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 25
So u have took few days leap 😆 ..Laksh didn't miss Ragini much because her was occupied with office work..then he bash her when sanskar told him he had a convo with him...thanks a lot for keeping it very realistic...if all of a sudden laksh has started missing her n feeling for her just because he saw how hot she is,then I wd have disliked him...
N when he got to know about Ragini missing,he got angry because she didn't inform him...typical MCP. he is..n adorable too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part26
Ragini to badi smart nikli..even detective swara failed in this case 😆
Lakshya didn't care for her at all 😲 ..he is like vo jiye ya mare Hume kya..come on yar a girl is missing for 4days..u can show some concern dr lucky..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part27
A very mysterious chapter..Ragini is again marrying..but how n why..
You have introduced a new chrctr...Abhay played by VD..yar some one pls cast teja-vd in a new show..they wd make an amazing onscreen couple..Lucky boy beware..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ana !! 😃😃
Lakshya ji is growing restless...and its so wonderful to see that !!

Please post a longer update soon !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ana brilliant update as always so he is a busy bee working and missing his wife that's nice thanks for the update can't wait to read what happens next
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Can't wait for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 28 B
Laksh was busy brooding and glaring at his room. He didn't want to go there. The room was mess...he had no strength to go and cleanup some space for himself. Lord...with...where was ragini damn...all things,strewn here and there..but he had to go and change and since he saw nobody home he decided to freshen up.
As he opened his room...a strong but sexy fragrance reached his nostrils...his room looked...wow...it looked like a humans room finally. He that finally people rembered his wife had disappeared into no mans land...and somebody need to cleen it. Ragini had spoiled all his habits. Let her be back...she needs to pay big time...every min torture he has suffered she will repent...he was unknowingly dying to hear her voice...not a single call...this was punishable crime in his view...when he heard a sweet humming coming from the bathroom...he was surprised... it meant...it meant...it meant...he made a jumping act in happiness that ragini was back...finally...he felt so so so happy that moment...his room looked like his...he had a huge grin on his face...a bright shine in his eyes...he wanted to just go and hug her straightaway...with relief...this made him to stop and think...was he really worried about her...that he felt such an exhilarating relief...y...when he was all this time denying it...whatever...this moment he lost all his anger on her...since no body knew he was home so early after so many late nights the whole week...he that to surprise her and have a lil fun...he his behind a curtain to see what she would be doing...He saw her coming out still humming some very melodious song..."

" Goonji si hai, sari fiza ,
jaisey bajti ho shehnaiyaan
Lehrati hai mehki hawa
Gungunati hai tanhaiyaan..
Sab gaatey hain Sab hi madhosh hain
Hum tum kyon khamosh hain..
Saazey dil chedo na
Chip ho kyon
Gaol na
Aao na...aao na...aao naa...aao naaa"

laksh is mesmerized. His eyes we're alight with joy. His heart enjoying her melodious voice. This was actually first time he was hearing her sing. He always thought swara was a very proficient Singer and better than her...but today ragini looked out of world..she was...getting more mysterious day by day. That night she was in those hot clothes and today...she was in short fluffy yellow color bathrobe. I mean I never tht yellow could be so... sexy...her hair dripping wet.. falling in lose tendrils...her legs and thighs..still had drops falling on them from her long lustrous hairs...she looked...sooo...happy...butt why...she took out a small guitar from behind her dressing...wow I never knew she his it there...she started playing and singing again..like a kid...she had such a cute smile on her face as if she was dreaming of some very happy memory. He rubbed his eyes to make sure he was watching ragini..and not somebody else...but it was Ragini...he had actually never seen her so happy even when he had got engaged with her...today..it looked as if she had freed herself from something. What that was bringing such a loving look on her face...he was enchanted...his heart felt a flutter...he wanted to keep on looking her...she looked so beautiful...he had no words to describe...that moment he could see a ragini who was a stranger to him or may be even swara and everybody...he saw her twirling with guitar..eyes closed..still dreaming something...lost in different world...he smirked imagining her finding him hawking at her...but he so badly wanted to go and pull her cheeks...she looked like a small kid who had just got her fav candy and she was relishing with happiness...it was getting so difficult to control...but her hot attire very well..her sexual posture was all waking up the sleeping tiger...his wife was suddenly a mysterious package and he so badly wanted to unwrap her...ravish her...he finally gave up..and moved to hold her when she surprised him again...
Ragini, in all her Cinderella world climbed the bed..and started doing ball room with the guitar...with... an imaginatory...figure...

"Tan man mein kyun aisi
behti Hui
Thandi si ik aag hai.
Saanson mein hai kaisi
Yeah raginii
Dhadkan mein kya raag hai
Yeah hua kya humein
Humko samjhao na..
Dil mein Jo baatein hai..
Hothon pe laao na..

Ragini was busy twirling and dancing with her eyes closed hugging her guitar...her voice and music had totally made laksh forget who and where he was...with whom he was...he was so lost...rembering his college days when he too used to play guitar..he wasn't a pro but he wanted to be.. but the family never approved of his music...he climbed the bed...and pulled out the guitar very softly from her hands put her hands on his soldiers instead...holding her very softly..not to awake her from dream but..that moment he wanted to be part of her dream..wanted to relive his lost dream...he too closed his eyes and lost himself in the moment...both locked in each others unaware of what they we're doing...

" Ab koi duri na uljhan koi
Bas ek ikrar hai
Ab na kahi hum na
Tum ho kahin
Bas pyar hi pyar hai
Sun sako dhadkaney
itney pass aao naa
Sab gaatey hain
Sabhi madhosh hain
Hum tum kyon khamosh hain"
Both raglak totally lost keep on dancing when ragini starts feeling a shiver down her body...being held intimately was new to her and she had sensations all over her body...her stomach doing flip flops...she mentally woke up from her dream state realizing she was back at maheshwari mansion and nobody was supposed to see her this side ever...she dreamily opened her eyes...coz she knew what she was imagining would never be true...her love for l a ksh knew no bounds...the more she wanted to suppress it the more she felt deeper...and that she could dance with laksh only in her dreams and never in reality...she open her eyes..and fainted straight away seeing laksh in real holding her with a scream...which brought laksh out of his reverie too and he held the fainting ragini...realizing suddenly she was just in a bathrobe all wet and fainted on him with a scream...making him fall and roll on bed along with all pillows and blankets entangled with them...but...he loved it...at last after so many days he felt like at home and with a grin hugged his wife tightly knowing once she come conscious she wouldn't let him near easily...so hug her till his hearts content...he realised indeed he had missed her too badly...bad ragini...u will have to pay...😉😳

Finally some cute romance...hope u all have smile on this update and ur heart to starts dreaming like raglak are . This is one of my ever fav songs...a very beautiful no..if u haven't heard it plz do here...it's such a sweet song...from movie.. kyon ho gaya na..thank friends for telling the right movie...starring aishwarya and vivek oberoi...lovely song...hope u liked this lighthearted update...coz,am warning u guys pre hand...my laksh...dreams to do lots of hot things to his wife I'm future...so my story will get bolder...

Plz do read and give long comments...


Edited by dreamyjennice - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG !! Is Ragu back ?
Or is it someone else ?

I can't wit to read further Ana !! Please update soon !! 😃😃

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