The simmering pain: Raglak STORY Note 11/3/16

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#271

Originally posted by: dreamyjennice
believe me...I was just visualizing teja and namish...while writing this...she really is beautiful and namish is a charmer...totally agree I wish to see some Cinderella,story where she plays the Cinderella ...
Coming to story...it will be swinging between both pov...coz my story develops on pov... yupp as I say once a man starts viewing a woman...fake or not...he starts noticing many other things instinctively...yeah I know the story was too intense...so I wanted some really moments where they grow through there povs. And I believe u r enjoying more coz u know there povs...so u can easily connect with changes,and growth...but my experience of life says...it doesn't take more than few min for a man to bring a change in his pov when he starts even accidently viewing a woman more than a stranger...these r men...natural change...and once there outlook turns physical..u can't stop there lust from growing...ESP when u have a,right and easy access to it...

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anzana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#272

lolzz pillows wall..
Superbb..
U jz hv set fire nd its getting hot nd hot..
Finally Ragini did show him sum mirrior of truth.
Its getting intresting..
Updte soon.

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Ardhanarishwara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#273

Read the chapter 2days back..but couldn't comment bs of xam..i will mention about the things stuck in my mind..
1)Raginis insecurities...
Poor girl had a bad upbringing ..along with it Lakshya rejection n him falling in love with her own sister had left a scar in her heart..she is highly insecure of swara...I really feel bad for her.
2)Laksh shallow thinking n Ragini questioning it..
Sabash my girl..laksh needed this reality check..i was so engrossed in the hotness of the couple n fangirling,that this point didnt even crossed my mind..
This scene made me think of a scene in the film Mein hoona..when Amrita raos chactr undergo a make over n became stylish,lucky suddenly realises his love for her..then Amrita says"The other nerd guy who is in love with her is far more better than lucky as at least his love wont change with the clothes I wear..what if I go back to my old self tomorrow?will your love stay the same?"
If lucky falls for her because of it then its not at all acceptible..
Your story is very intriguing n thought provoking..keep up the good work dr..
Plzz do update the next part..I can read before going to bed after studying n have a gd nyt sleep..

Edited by jyothirgamaya - 9 years ago

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Ardhanarishwara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: sudhi03

Ragini will have a hell of time controlling her husband once he loves her😆.

Good point indeed 😆

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@rbb1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#275

where is the next update Ana 😭

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Ardhanarishwara

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Posted: 9 years ago

#276

No update 😭 ..
Now a days I come to swaragini forum only to see whether u have updated..

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dreamyjennice

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Posted: 9 years ago

#277

Very busy ATM...will update as soon as possible...

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RamyaSK

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Posted: 9 years ago

#278

😉😊Read all the parts @ once... N yeah its tooo tooo tooo much good that I've added to fav list...seriously am in love with ur story...! N this Ragini very especially who has become mentally strong..😊