FF: Angel. (Thread 2| Note on pg. 149)

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#11

finally now swara calls him sanskar...nice updates and congrates for the new thread of Angel

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SIMI

@simsen23

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Posted: 10 years ago

#12

Nimmi...
Congratulation for another..thread 😊
i just love the swasan talks...
Swara (3 yr old hilarious 😆 )
Swara's constant switchover from sanskar to gabriel was perfectly matching with the lines...
I thought she will get angry...but...nay this girl is so cute
it was short update in compare to last 2 updates...but we can manage with frequent updates
waiting for next one with more swasan moments and gabriel one too..sweety...
Love
simi 😊

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Juanita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#13

HI NImmi 🤗

Finally you updated it and i couldnt be more happier . What an awesome chapter it was ,filled with Gabriel and Swara interaction , i loved it👏⭐️.

I really admire the sarcastic Gabriel so much , he knows just what to say at the right moment. I knew Swara will annoy him by calling him as Sanskaar . Poor guy regrets ever letting her in on this one.😆

Samsung Galaxy S6 is back and i am happy at the mere mention of it 😆. Also i love how Swara doesnt want to seperate from Gabriel even for a second, i know she is classfying it has Protection shield for now but we all know she wont like to leave him even when her life is no longer in danger.

I sure hope Gabreil is smarter in level 2 ,because i know Laksh wont stand a chance but i dont think RP is an easy target. i sure hope this second one also doesnt happen to be a Trap. Swara wants a story about Gabriel in action but she is busy praying he fails . 😆

Honestly due to recent episode i hate DP , but i think he has been a no show in ANGEL for long time now 😆.

Waiting for your next update Dear , Thanks for the PM and let me know when you update

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Saumya

@Sparklle801

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Posted: 10 years ago

#14

Congratulations for the second thread that was really good but short bhi tha kab padhte padhte khatam ho gaya pta hi ni chala try to make it longer next time .it is really fun reading your stories

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foresight

@foresight

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Posted: 10 years ago

#15

Swara is feeling sympathy for Laksh...hmmm poor girl, I am guessing he is going to make her regret that some day. Sanskar is smart...of course he is...our smart assassin. loved the part...hope we can get the story of how getting in to his profession wasnt his choice ...looking forward to the next part🤗

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#16

wow. this was so good.
I liked the Swasan banter nd Gabriel getting irritated whenever he is being called Sanskaar.

Birju Maharaj, really, Sanskaar oops Gabriel has a good sense of humour.

"Annoy me some more lady; And I will give you a live demo!" He voice was deadly calm.

This line cracked me up. I could imagine Swara's expression.
Still laughing.

Laksh has moved from his heaven, lets see, our Angel is sure to send him to the heaven(or hell in his case)

Continue soon dear.

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--Anna--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#17

Nimmi 🤗

A very very Happy New Year to you and many many Congratulations on the second thread!! 👏👏👏

I may not comment as often but I am absolutely LOVING how the story is going! 👏👏👏 Cannot wait for more to read and am already excited about the end of it - since you mentioned you had something exciting planned. 😉

Lots of Love

Anna

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 10 years ago

#18

Hello Nimmie🤗

Congo on the second thread..👍🏼

Itna short update ..jaldi khatam hogaya ..I think I am never gonaa get enough so no complains😆

Loved the convo b/w swara and sanskaar ..should I call angel ,would love to see sanskaar yearning to called by that name by his angel

The convo about phone is damn funny ..😆 gaby wins this round .. haar baar swara ki nahi chalegi 😆

All I can say about lucky is bhaag lucky bhaag😆 ayyo vaadi peru teesukunappudalla ..Naa peru kuda vastundi but chalo now he left swara ka peecha I am fine😉

Awesome like always .. Btw Brutal violence ke baad kya intense hone waala hain ..lol ..waiting

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lucky