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Posted: 10 years ago
Res Nimmi. Read it today as i promised. Will comment tomorrow.


Unres, Sorry for the late comment dear, 🤗

I read it last night and it took me this long to finally unres. I loved it , i was always curious about Sanskaar backstory and i finally got it.


DP flashback was good, Although i felt bad for AP more than DP, especially the line a daughter lived by it , so did a wife but a mother wont⭐️ . i loved it. Poor Soul died saving her son , while i agree with DP feeling bad that is wife and son payed the price for his evil deeds, i dont empthasis that much with Lakshya . Because he foolishness started this mess and but you somehow tried to redeem DP and it worked to an extent. Still AP stood out in that part more than DP.

Rana story made me so invested in his character , and i really wish he doesnt have to die in the end, i cant ask Cvs but Nimmi dont let him die 😆, well i wont ask you to change anything you planned before , i was just saying that how much his flashback impacted me . His daughter death was an shocker, i thought probably he lost them in an accident but it was really painful. I liked DP in this one, he saved him and even helped him say goodbye to his wife. Now he is up against his own son. 😭.



Lastly Sanskaar flashback, wow i knew from the very beginning when he said his father hated him , that will not be his biological father . But i thought his mother was just a typical wife who stuck with him due to societal pressure since she was married to him. But i didnt except such a painful backstory for her. But she should have just took Sanskaar and left home instead of dying. poor guy was left all alone. Loved how he finally found a father figure in Rana . Now they are up agaisnt each other 😭, him knowing his father would want him to fight but still hoping he doesnt end up hurting him in this macabre war.


Short and sweet Gabreil and his kitten scene, i didnt had an inkling that he was saying it to Swara and was plesantly surprised. So now the war is on . i cant wait to read the upcoming chapters.


P.S - Nimmi, you really are a great writer dear , Keep writing . 👏







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Posted: 10 years ago
IM SPEECHLESS.!! JUST SPEECHLESS!!
This was Amazing. Just Breathtaking! You Are a Unique Writer who Painted an Amazing Art and pulled its integrity and charm to hit the world. Really Nimmie You are a blessed writter.The choice of words to let out the emotion to bring life to each emotion is something big and You Did an amazing job to bring life to it. You wont have idea how much I liked this Update dear. The way you presenting Anjel to us makes us to LOVE more and to have it more.🤗

Durga prasad maheshwari:The man who own Power, strength and master around his world was beyond delicate towards his wife and son. Sheilded them beyond his capacity. His story with Annapurna was Nice. But gave up wen unexpected misery entered. Lost his wife who he loved more than himself. Owned her and keep her promises throughot.Protected his only son from darkness to let him to live in light and njoi his life as his beloveds wish.But failed yet another time by fate.! Losted his last part of life. Last stray of hope.!His determimation to keep his son away from his world 'darkness' didnt helped him to live him in peace. Everything Changed. Poor man Forced himself to stay away from his child to control hys inner feelings but unfortunatly failed himself as father. Ultimatly resulted in lossing him!

Rana: My most favorite charracter. Im literally lacking words to put up him. The way he protected gis wife amd his daughter was amazing. Treated them like Glass with such protective sheild,fearing then to not broke. the Most lovable father. But lost both his life,his reason for his survival.BUT Sanskar wiped off his unemptiness. And now going to lose his soul,his child again. .Felt so sad for him.! Dealing with his soul,his son in one side and his friend in another.He s Going to destroy himself and his child. Even though silenltly praying to have his child won the battle!!.I was too attached to rana's Pov. And I shud admit I had tears. The pain of lossing wife and daughter who he loved his heartout, and now gonna lose his CHILD his sanskar again,letting himself destroy.! Brilliant. Wonderful job nimmie. Loved it.

Sanskar: Finally the past open. His life,pain eveything opened up. His lov towards his mama and undeserving betrayal from his step father(ofcourse another pshycho).And Finally his light of life vanished along with opening the light of truth and secrets folded. The rage and angush behind him made Gabreil born which led Darkness to pierce in his blood. Started up with destroying the man behind his parents departure! And Finally he met Rana, his Baba.! Man acted in darkness and coldness turned out to be his life,his Baba!.Brilliantly discribed their bonding. Had a small smile while reading it. Hats off!! .

Nimmie Much Needed Update. Sneak peak to 3 Povs.Justified each Charracter🤗.I cant blame Durgaprasad for such a move. Felt so sad for both Rana and Gabreil.! Its really a Hard time for both. want to face their souls together without hurting one another.Hope truth comes out.*sigh*.(Ramprasad😡)Loved this Update Throughout. I apologize for being such a long comment!😆.
Fantastic dear.! TC.Do you know somthing? LOB YA SO SO MUCH🤗.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hiee...

So Jack,Black Window,Viper and Maverick are the top 4 assassins after Gabriel who are coming for him...(Since Gabriel is the 1st😉)

Interesting!!!
So what their plan???
One at a time or all at one???

Missed Swasan!!! But its OK for the story to progress...
Itna toh chalta he!!!
Continue soon...
Thank you for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
whoa...Top5 are unleashed excluding gabriel and one for swara too..that viper...i wonder who is going to long last and first out by gabriel.
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Posted: 10 years ago
how gabriel will escape from 4 of them
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi...
It was ...full of horror and darkness...my God 😕
J,V,B & M..- 4 dangerious people with common ..contract Gabriel..
well for that black widow reminds me the gone girl movie ...
Well well i must say i simply hate that V guy eyeing on swara...
Omg my poor innocent kitten
I am sure afterall the numero one is Gabriel,he will finish them all...
But still horrified...i love my swasan...
U are giving me mild attacks everytime now a days. ..
Update soon(pm is ok for some post)
Love
simi 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Me...biting my nails...whats is going to happen now...🤪
Hope gabriel ( sanskaar) also form his own army...to protect swara...😲

Beautifully described each n every character...waiting for pms...n early updates...🤗

Love u...❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nimmi, Plz PM me whatever you write!!
So top 4 assassins after our Gaby boy is ready to lounge on him!! Okay good luck for them Bt I don't think their luck will be good. Gaby is going to shred them into pieces!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yes I am one of the silent readers who loves to read your stories. You are an amazing writer. Very talented. And yes i don't want to miss the updates so letting you know :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice so the top most assasins against gabriel bingo! this is going to be fun
honestly u took this to the next level with this
looks like the whole underworld is against gabriel
waiting for the next update plzz update soon

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