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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: foresight


don't worry re...everyone will be pleased when you take care of kavita once and for all.

and you are right...they both still have their own emotional scars that haven't healed yet...,this is preciously what is needed for them to truly and completely move on.

Yes you're right, this is needed. Thanks again Sapna!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The SwaSan scene was sooo😳
And just when they thought they had a moment of peace... They are going to be hit from all the sides...
Lakshya thinks he is still engaged to Swara and Kavita the terror ... I am soo eager to know what this Vasundra has against them...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sakura 🤗 I loved it!!

I loved the realistic way in which you presented their relationship.The sweetness of their new found love with a good dose of their years of companionship and a tinge of fear. Kavita's entry will bring out the skeleton of past and I'm curious to see how they will deal with all this and come out if it as a stronger and more secure team. I really want them to tie up all the loose ends of their pasts before they start their new journey in peace.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Happpy New Year Saku!!!
So winter is back in Swasan world!! I so love the title and having read chapters 1 and 2 its very apt after the stories of King and Queen!

There i was quietly reading with my full attention as i always need to with ur stories and thot i had it all figured out who the knight is going to be and u shattered it all with the end of part 2!! As u r always soo good at doing!!

Another kavita back frm the dead? ?? How did tht happen ? And when she said she has done too much evil already???? So tht means that entire message thing on the paper to ragini was a hoax?? Her death was staged? ? How did she manage tht? Did sanskaar not see a dead body? Was she a pawn of vasundhara even then? But why is she still in a hospital bed?

So vasundhara is the sister in law of chandrashekhar im guessing and him having discovered he has a son (sanskaar) he writes his entire property in his name so vasundhara is out to demolish sanskaar?

But how does laksh's memory loss come in this equation? Is it genuine or fake like Ragini's of the show? And did ragini really disappear or will she be back. Tho seeing her dad n dadi i do feel truly sorry fr her? Full support fr her evil acts and then blame when the plan goes awry and expecting her to make it better too?? Swara is truly better off without this man as her father!

Soo loved the wedding scene and the thought processes of Sanskaar's when it was still in progress. ... swasan are truly meant to be but separation again? ? Did feel sorry fr laksh fr his pain during the wedding but ill hate him all over again if its his own evil plan wrt to the memory loss!!

Kavita!!! Still can't get over it saku!!! The storm has indeed unleashed so how soon will u update and put us out of our misery???

Waiting eagerly fr the next...

Much love Tas
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
haa! it started with sweet serene love and ended on cunning plottings. :P
why does it feel that Lakshya is pretending or more ! has some connections with Vasundhara?!
And entry of Kavita!!! since Raagini blackmailed Chandra with evidences , so Chandra was involved in that murder mystery , but what is the role of Vasundhara! was he protecting his sister or was really involved in that matter?
well, the quotes you wrote in between the chapter are so good , Saku!!
seat belts tight for roller coaster ride!! hoping best for Swasan. 😊
Eagerly waiting for the next update. :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
what vasundara going to do with swasan using kavitha, and did laksh realy have memory loss
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
I am so sorry that I again dissapeared. You lifted my spirits with that dedication Sakura. Thank You so much.
I have been waiting so long for this part. Oh my God they got married. I am so happy. The sequences was written so beautifully...

Ragini , she broke me. I do not like this weak Ragini. Bring her back plzz but in a positive gone if that is what you have planned. One of the reasons I loved these winter series because of the grace you have written her characters. She was smart and witty , and I really do love such villains.

Laksh can never learn. He is still burning. Not good. And now he has to lose his memory. Party popper. Can't he go back in his childhood days . He spoiled my SwaSan dreams. But lools like he really has got some trick up his sleave.

The next SwaSan scene was magnificient. The love , the hopes, the dreams , their fears. It was all written so beautifully. The kisses , the mehndi scene eveything was so cute and lovely and beautiful. Thank you for such a long scene. I really do love the fact that magically the old Sanskaar is not back. He changed and changing a Little for good is never harmful.

Oh, new villains. Yeah. Till now I am liking her. Though overconfidence is never really good.
Greek refrences... I love anything from there. Mars and Ares. Although they are eachother's counterparts , there is a major difference between them. And that is while Ares is hot tempered and mostly over confident , Mars is the more calm and calculating one. So Kavita is here. I will just have to wait and read how she unfolds.

I am really loving this story as of now. Thank you for another master piece Sakura.

- Ahana
Happy New Year.


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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Saku...Lakshya is pretending about his memory loss isn't he? That vile toad...🤢

Un-Res...

Saku, its uncanny how many similar tastes we have. I am seriously thinking we must have been sisters in some past life. 😆 We already had the Mahabharata and Natural history/ ecology. And of course, Indian history--the Guptas, the Mauryas and so on. And now with you delving a bit into Graeco-Roman mythos, that's another common area of interest. 😊 Tell me, Saku, are you a fan of Egyptian history as well? Ramesses the Great, Pharaoh Thutmose and so on? If that is of interest to you too, then, Sis, there is no doubt at all that we are soul sisters connected through ether (and the internet). 😆 😛 Plus, coincidentally, I am exploring some parallels to Gandhari, in "Karna Parva--Day 17" and your chapter 3 also has Gandhari references! 😊

Can I just give you a 👏 👏 for the imaginative chapter titles you have. "Memories of Winter" reminded me of "Memories of Midnight" by the great Sidney Sheldon---very apt, since I consider you the Sheldon of our forum.

And "Of Mars, Athena and Ares"...Spellbinding! 😊

So Vasundara is coming no holds barred, weaving her conniving, Machiavellian web like a giant spider. She told her son in the previous chapter that she much prefers peace to war, but ironically, peace loving people often find themselves at the center of conflict. Seems rather self serving and delusional to me. She may like the idea of peace all right, but its peace on her terms. She would love to rule over a suppressed kingdom, in thrall to the mighty Empress Vasundara, all dissent, rivalry or opposition having been throttled! And a fine example of a peace lover she is---playing really, really dirty! 😡

Saku, you hold all the trumps of course, and will slowly reveal your hand with your customary flourish. But if I may make a guess, that vile amphibian is pretending to have short term memory loss. 🤢 Man, what a contemptible tactic to come between Sanskaar and Swara. When will this spoilt brat grow up and decide to take some ownership for his own actions? Deserting Swara, mistrusting her, maligning her should all be automatically forgiven once he says sorry? And not just forgiven (which he probably is), but Swara should go back to loving him and wanting to re enter his life? Pray, why? And to do this when she is already married to Sanskaar, and is his bhabhi, his first cousin's wife!! I just can't put into words what I feel for this guy. Nauseating. 🤢

Kavita...or Kavita's twin sister? Or a look alike? My guess is, since she was in hospital, has Vasundara arranged for plastic surgery to be done on someone to look like her? Wonder how Sanskaar is going to react. He is going to feel a lot of guilt, his residual nightmares of Kavita's death indicate that the wound is still raw, though steadily healing. Hope these devious knights aren't going to wrench it open and make him bleed again.

The Swara---Sanskaar interaction at the beginning was so deep, so romantic, so tender. The tinge of foreboding Swara had, about the beautiful fragility of the dream she has of a life with him; her earnest seeking of assurance that he would never leave her side again---that was so very moving. Sanskaar has promised her his fealty and love---I am going to hold on to that! 😊

I will end with my customary wish which I make for this season---May the balmy sun and breeze of spring clear away the lingering chill of winter!!

Love you for giving me this title of "Winter Lady". I shall try to wear the honor as best as I can. 😃


Viji dearest,🤗

Yep, I am a Egyptian history freak, give me anything inside a pyramid and I would love it to bits! They have really intriguing mysterious aura and beliefs... you guessed it right. So now it is officially established that we are soul sisters😃 I'm having Gandari and Siya in the next chapter with the darkness rising. I hope the day 17 is almost ready now, can hardly wait to read the way you have explored Gandari.
Thanks, I wanted to try something new with FK that's why I used the titles.
You're right, Vasundara's idea of peace is a twisted one just like her character, where she has crushed all the possibilities of retaliation.
Since we can both trust in our common dislike for Mr. Toad I was hoping for a prediction like this. I won't of cause reveal the truth just yet. But if he is acting, at least he has a point in doing so. It would mean he himself admits that whatever he is doing is wrong...I mean he is trying to break his brother's marriage...so he is pretending to forget the fact that there is indeed a marriage to break!
For Kavita, whoever she is, the real or a fake, she would reopen some wounds, resurface some old insecurities and make a mess of the lives in the winter land. That's all I can promise at the moment. But your guesses are very imaginative.
I hope Swara holds on to Sanskar's words too. But I'm not sure how much of her faith would remain intact when the storm called Kavita blows in.
I'm hoping to reach that spring very soon Viji.
You totally deserve the title my lady, I know you wear it proudly and that means a lot to me. 😊😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: manasie23

The SwaSan scene was sooo😳
And just when they thought they had a moment of peace... They are going to be hit from all the sides...
Lakshya thinks he is still engaged to Swara and Kavita the terror ... I am soo eager to know what this Vasundra has against them...

That is spring, the warm and bright😳
Well in the winter land you don't know when a storm will engulf all your plans.
you'll know everything soon.
Thanks a lot dear😊
Sakura24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Sakura 🤗 I loved it!!


I loved the realistic way in which you presented their relationship.The sweetness of their new found love with a good dose of their years of companionship and a tinge of fear. Kavita's entry will bring out the skeleton of past and I'm curious to see how they will deal with all this and come out if it as a stronger and more secure team. I really want them to tie up all the loose ends of their pasts before they start their new journey in peace.


Thank you so much dear,
I really believe in logical love stories so tried my level best to make this one of those. I'm glad you liked it. Of cause Kavi's return would make a storm that has to blow off the remaining snow between SwaSan making way to a clearer spring. 😊

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