.Ek Duje Ke Vaaste. A SwaSan OS - Page 3

Lovely...you beautifully portrayed all their emotions,...you made me shed few tears girl...their pain was so real...and I absolutely loved the finale...hated kavita's over confidence though, but was overjoyed when that got punctured...😃...aha finally swasan together...(akhir mein dilwale apni dulhania le hi gayee...).

Originally posted by: SwaSanFanGirl

Thats really sweet of you. I am glad you liked it. Thank you so much for reading and commenting!!

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

I really loved ur os

Great emotions and intense feelings

I especially loved the part when sanskar slept in Swara's lap

But sorry to say this but I don't want it to end like this because I really felt bad for Kavita

I hope on the show either Kavita is a Humshakal or a negative since beginning u know like a gold digger

Because no matter what, what sanskar had for Kavita was really strong and intense. He literally destroyed himself and his family for her. Now this kind of feelings just don't vanish. Yes you move on when u know it's not meant to be but they don't vanish. So I really don't want sanskar to choose between Kavita or swara.

I am sorry

I really loved ur os but more than Swasan unfortunately I felt bad for Kavita because Kavita in ur os did not deserved to be rejected because it's not her fault. In ur os actually swara also did not deserved to be rejected. So I really want that sanskar chooses one of them but without hurting any one of them.

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

awesome..

Originally posted by: 3dancelover

this was amazing ur a great writer

i would love it if the actual show worked out like this

Originally posted by: foresight

beautifully done. you covered their past situations, their mental state, their emotions and smoothly drove them to the beautiful confession. well written

Originally posted by: SuMaN_TR

wow so deep and real emotion !!!

I was really feeling my swasan and there condition !!!

Seriously not at all negativity ... totally positive amd intense feeling !!!

Specially love swara understaning character !!!

Outstanding job 👏👍🏼

Thank that u didn't made kavita negative !!!

waiting for more of your work !!!!

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

amazing OS
beautifully written