Ragya ff:' Tum ho mera pyaar'* chapter 22 page 57*

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Friends I want to write a ragya ff. It is a small effort I am not a good writer. Hope you will like it. Please share your views any kind of comments are welcome.
<font color="#cc0033" size="7">Index</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 1 page 1</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 2 page 3</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 3 page 5</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 4 page 9</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 5 page 10</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 6 page 12</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 7 page 13</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 8 page 16</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 9 page 18</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 10 page 21</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 11 page 22</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 12 page 25</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 13 page 27</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 14 page 28</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 15 page 31</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 16 page 35</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 17 page 38</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 18 page 41</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 19 page 45</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 20 page 49</font>
<font color="#cc0033" size="7"> Chapter 21 page 52</font>

Chapter 22 page 57
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Posted: 9 years ago
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all the best for ur ff 😊
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Characters
  1. Ragini Gadodia- she is a 20 year old sweet,shy girl who lives with her father and dada- dadi. She is a college student and is a scholarship student in a big college.
  2. Laksh Maheshwari- He is the ultimate bad boy of the college. He has no interest in studies.
  3. Durga prasad- He is the father of Laksh. He is a responsible Businessman who wants his son to share those responsibilities.
  4. Annapurna prasad- she is the mother of Laksh. She is a sweet mother who considers her son still a small child.
  5. Shekhar Gadodia- He is the single father of ragini. He has raised her all alone with love and care. Though he wants his daughter to study hard and stand on her own feet.
  6. Dadi
  7. Dada
  8. Ravi- He is the guy chosen by dadi to marry ragini. He is already in love with ragini
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Prologue
The clock struck 6. The alarm was continuously ringing. Dadi entered the room.
Dadi-" Ae chori ise kahe band nahi kar deti. Kab se mare kaan pe baj raha hai "
Ragini-" kya dadi sone do na abhi baja hi kya hai?"
Dadi-" 6 baje hai mare ko kya mat uth"
Ragini jumps out of the blanket.
Ragini-" kya 6 baj gaye aap bhi na utha nahi sakti thi"
Dadi-" lo mai to kab se keh rahi hu. Chal aake nashta kar le. Thari pasand ka banaya hai saara"
Ragini-" Dadi time kaha hai exam hai mai waise Hi late ho jaungi"

In Maheshwari house
On the table
Durga prasad-" ye aapke sahaabzade kaha hai aaj college nahi Jana kya"
Annapurna-" aa raha hai der tak pad raha tha to subah aankh nahi khuli"
Dp(laughing)-"Pad nahi raha hoga party kar raha hoga party"
Ap-" aap bhi na aisa kyu sochte hai "
Laksh comes down from the stairs
Dp-" aaiye barkhudar padai kar li aapne exam ki. Aap to college bhi nahi jate notes bhi hai ya nahi"
Ap-" bas kijiye kyu pareshaan kar rahe hai(to laksh) le beta kha aur achha paper dena"
Laksh-" maa mai kya primary class me hu. Mujhe baccho ki tarah treat karna band kare"
Dp-" lijiye aur lutaye apni mamta inmaa Inhe to kadr nahi uski".
Laksh-" mera ho gaya maa papa ki baate aur breakfast. Bas bohot kha liya chalta hu"
Ap-" achha all the best beta"

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue can't wait to read the story
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Posted: 9 years ago
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your we love I can't wait to read your next update
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Lovely prologue yaar..update fast..

Thank you radhadreamlove🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really nice story
plzzz continue soon
waiting. ...
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nyc prologue plzzz start update ,I m waiting to read
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Thank you everyone for your support😊

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