Swasan FURY (part 2 on page 3) - Page 2

Aww!!! How sweet!!! And the good night kiss
Very well-written and an interesting start.
Please update soon.

Inside every girl, a secret swan slumbers, longing to burst forth and take flight.
Inside every boy a lordly lion prepares to pounce

So my dear people yes no wonder our dear touch me not is longing to burst.

But lets wait how much the lion resists .

Shruthi thanks for the comment. Yea a vicious sanskar is so chilling and thrilling. I'm really trying hard to mix up the lovey dovey with the vicious one. Some one who doesn't think twice to pay back. Especially when swara is on his side and no longer empathising Ragini. Its an attempt. I don't know how it will fare. But lets see.

Sonu, yea that line just blurted out of me actually. So i thought its high time swara gets a bit touchy with him. Do you think sanskar will be all in for that? Or will swara actually stick to her offer? Wont it be good to watch her trying and him falling. Lets see. My mind is still numb with the new real track revelations.

Prachi thanks for the comment.

Sanavi, sneha, tapathi rithika thank you guys

I just hope I have no more restriction on my posts. Or I would be commenting invidually.
With your encouragement ill try to do what I can guys.

Thanks all for the comments.
Love all
Nalini.

How cute...good night kiss.. Aweee...!superb...👏

Nice update..Swasan r so cute😊

nice

Beautiful start to the story... Looking forward to more from you. Like this nonchalant sanskar and this implosive and almost Romatically upfront Swara. Good one

WOAH !!!

Hey...Will you plz continue this. Pretty please...*Puppy Face*