Swasan FURY (part 2 on page 3)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice sowmya...well written..👏
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Very promising teaser ! And definitely want to read more of this... Like to see Sanskaar active and alert to possible dangers.
Can smell action coming up and the momentum building 😃 Let the rubber hit the road..!

PS. I would like anything you dish out - Your name is my all time, most favourite character. 😃




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tapathi

Nice sowmya...well written..👏




It's nalini.. Thankyou though😊🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great.
Do pm me about update.
Plzzz.
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Interesting.. Do continue😊
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Awesome teaser.
Wanna see this side of Sanskaar.
Waiting for the update.
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Part 1

Swara. Leave baadi. Now. Cooperate with them.

Sanskar
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Its been 24hrs since she had been moved here and she has spent half the time turning the card over and over again as if it would talk back to her or explain those hundred and more unanswered calls she has been attempting. The night was ebbing away and the darkness greyed down a bit. It was the only happening thing for the last few minutes. Her hours before them were spent in restless sleep hoping for the phone to ring anytime. Her mind was wandering over the incidents of the past week. Things are getting really messy at maheshwari mansion and Ragini was being psychotic all the time, ordering people around. Uttara and laksh remained swaras only communication. She pined for sanskar. Hoped he would call. Would atleast text her. She understood that his indifference and anger are justifiable but it irked her to be kept in dark, ignored and cold shouldered. If it were just about ragini she would have understood his insecurities. But he is being arrogant and confusing at times. One minute he misses her and showers her with concern and the next min he is all cold and steely. What's his problem. Why is he so sure that ill break his heart again? Ziddi.

The alarm buzzed 5:30 in the morning. She grabbed the phone and dialed his number again knowing that he would be up and going over his routine by now. Her heart sped up at the first ring, her hand went to her chest in a vain attempt to control it.

"swara kya Mein araam se sobhi nahi saktha kuch ghanto ke liye. Its 5:30 in the morning."

Her phone dropped in a light thud over the sheets looking at his lean yet muscular form standing over her at the foot of her bed.

"Sanskar thum yaha??" She whispered only to herself. And As the initial shock wanned off, looking at his sleep ruffled hair and drowsy eyes she rose to her knees and threw herself at him. Locking her hands around his waist she crushed herself to him in complete abandon. Tears ran down her face undettered and she went on mumbling about how much she missed him and how so full of attitude he is. "ek message nahin kar sakthe Ho kya. I was all alone. Mujhe patha bhi nahin tha wo kaun the. Agar mujhe kuch Ho jaatha tho"

"kuch nahin Ho jaatha thume. Aur hona bhi nahin chahiye" he said in a cold whisper. His hands firmly gripped her shoulders trying to keep the distance.

"par sanskar.."

" swara please mujhe kuch gante do. I haven't slept in days. Uske baad tumhara jasoosi kar Lena. Par jabtak me nahin utunga ghar ke bhar ek ungli rakhne ke bhi math socho."

" house arrest !"

" Jo samajhna hai samajhlo. Goodnight"

"sanskar good night kiss nahin chahiye kya" she blurted out. Her hands flew to her mouth instantly.

He stopped in his tracks dumbfounded at her words.
Edited by bennetlizzy - 10 years ago
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Aww!hw beautiful & swt!
Haw!gdni8 kiss.haha!
Cntu soon.
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Nalini 🤗

The teaser was gripping enough and had me hooked and reading the first part has deepened the intrigue and also made me feel super glad that Sanskaar is with his Swara. I like the teaser a lot as it shows a Sanskaar I find very possible to imagine and in fact try to often get across when writing- the man who can guard his own at any cost with a fierceness that's chilling and thrilling at the same time. Also love the idea of Swara calling him in part 1 to find him there already! And the end of that part! Whoa! Madam touch me not now actually offering kisses!!! 😳
Very nice! Please PM me on updates?
Edited by tootiefrootie11 - 10 years ago

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