SwaSan TS: Limits

manasi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Please pm me when u update

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Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Loved the way Swara reacted to Taklu Budhha
Waiting for next chapter, Plsss post soon😊

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Autumn_Hue

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Very well written I loved how Swara stood up for herself making Durga Prasad know how much he has hurt her and realising why she was wanted back again, just so she could fight the battles for them when they'd given up tired.

Sanskaar's pain on being separated from Swara and his thoughts constantly went in her direction he misses her very much.. I really liked that part..

I'm being a sadist I know but I really really liked Swara's nonchalant stance in front of Sanskaar where she just passed by him without acknowledging his presence, her Shrugging of the shoulders when he just stood there in muted surprise on seeing her there all that made me kinda happy actually if I'm being honest..

I've had enough of her groveling and pleading if love is to come here way it will pleading and begging will get her love back..

I look forward to the next chapter update it soon and pm me if you can.

Love,

Kashmi

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928730

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Wish something like this happend in the show... A kickass swara. Great stat pls continue

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Vianna

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Brilliant, absolutely brilliant start! Loved every bit! The 'I give up.' was wow! I have to say, was waiting for this. Thank you for making Swara 'not mahaan' and a human being! Seriously needed to read something so awesome. The title and the quote are so freaking apt! The inner monologues of both Swara and Sanskaar were heart breaking. Poor SwaSan.
Fantastic concept and beautiful writing.!
Awaiting the update.

-V :)

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Lumos_18

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sarchanu
hey,
nice start
wishing for all the confusions to clear out
please update soon

Thank you😊

Will update soon

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Lumos_18

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Prizi
plz plz plz cont

Thank you😃

I will continue soon.

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Lumos_18

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: ritika52
plz continue...
its nice to c swara standing and speaking for herself here...
y is she staying aloof from sanskaar lyk dis...they can talk it out ...ryt..
plz more of swasan in the nxt update...

Thank you 😳

Swara should also stand up for herself once in a while.

And dont worry, she is not staying aloof from Sanskar, she is just not running after him. 😃

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Lumos_18

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Posted: 9 years ago

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