Swasan SS - Amour Orageuse - Chapter 10 page 41 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update

I wonder what is ragini going to do.

Originally posted by: Autumn_Hue

Hey sakura hi I presume this is your name and if not please tell me your name... 😃

Thank you so very very much for your lovely words of appreciation I read re read and again read your comment again it made me immensely happy.. 😳

I'm glad I fulfilled my obligation as a writer to get my character sketch correct and you enjoyed reading it. Thank you again.. 😊

Will update soon probably tomorrow have it written till the third chapter shall post it after proof reading it..

Thank you again dearie..

Love,

Kashmi 😃

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Hi Kashmi,

Yes my name is Sakura...you guessed it right.

I know when you write from heart, the comments touch your heart as well, so whenever I comment on some piece of writing I write my heartfelt thoughts there. Whatever I said before, you deserve each word of it...so take a bow dear!😊

Thanks for the special mention at the start of the chapter three, coming to the chapter itself, it seems sort of a transitional one between the storm of the night and the verdict of the morning. Here for some reason, Ragini captured my undivided attention.

She had been worshiping a god with clay feet and the way you portrayed her realization of the same fact was utterly perfect. Her thoughts flow from shock, disgust to anger and later a deep sense of disappointment on her own choice of lover, I guess she would see a different light next morning.

For Lakshya... He is such an immature creature that I don't really understand what my word for him should be. After his actions he still feel he could talk himself out of this one? He is just a lost case. I think some more punches are in order there

Sanskar...ah, the golden heart! His need to erase the memory of that vile experience from Swara's conscious was a strong touch, the entire scene which on a different setting would have been sizzling hot felt thoroughly heart wrenching here.

Swara is still in shock I guess. Let's give her some time to heal.

Enjoyed the chapter...marvelous writing!⭐️

Continue with forth part soon! 😃

Originally posted by: jess_27

Gosh... This is so beautifully written.. The way sanskar made attempts tomake her forget laksh's touch by replacing his aggression with his own passion... And also was successful in healing her a bit...

I have become a fan of ur writing... Please update next part soon...

Originally posted by: -Ros-

Hey 😳

Another fabulous update. ⭐️

Again, kudos to you for handling this story so sensitively. Swara has completely lost herself, as that flashback proved.. she's so numb to emotions & as well as physical pain.. her vulnerability & brokenness was nicely shown.

My favourite part is definitely that shower scene. How breathtakingly beautiful is that! The way Sanskaar understood how she felt unclean & him replacing Laksh's harsh blows with his caressing pecks of pure love. Again, I loved how she understood him too... even though she's been through this awful ordeal, she still remembered & recognised Sanskaar's unfaltering, virtuous love.

Thank God Ragini has finally had some kind of realisation. I liked how she thought about what she & many others put Swara through... how Swara has been let down so many times by people who should've been there for her. I hope she thinks about her fake molestation accusation on Sanskaar too, seeing she's begun to see reality.

Laksh.. I have no words. 🤬

Swasan are supporting each other. I love the maturity in their relationship.

Can't wait for next update!

Originally posted by: Asha122

Read all 3 parts in a go... Wow...!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

No words to say... Amazing update yar...

Loved it a lot...❤️ The way u described SwaSan feelings its marvellous...

Waiting to see wats Ragini decision...

Laksh he is disgusting... The way Sanskaar punched Laksh superb...

This story is one of my favourite yar... ❤️

Continue soon...😳

ll be waiting eagerly...

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ /10...

infinity Stars are also very less but still i want to say how much i loved it...