SAWSAN FF: My Foe to My soul (PART:-16(B). PAGE:-141) - Page 99

Originally posted by: Tapathi

kamila...🤗

suprb yaar...😊swara was soo funny...she asked him that he did any murder to stole something...🤣how cute...is he looking like that...and the hug...wow...! finaaly she hugged him...okay it is out of fear bt hugging the loved one in fear that feel is very diif...😳

arey yaar...he said i love you in wrong time...still she not beliving that he loves her...when she will belive...and that was too funny...if my husband shouts you will be in mars...🤣that loudly he shouts kya?

he hide that kiss one...what will happen when she knw abt it...iam so tensed...countinue soon...dear...😊

Tappu... 🤗 love you dear... For your wonderful comment and your support...

She is funny... She can't remember re.. What happened when she was in blazed... Soo her assumption are making him angry.. For us funny... I'm soo glad that you liked it... 😃

You are absolutely right... When we get scared we hug those who we love more.. Soo she hugged him... 😳

Yep it was wrong timing.. He should give her some hint naa.. Speaks lovingly.. Little bit romance.. No he is shouting at her mistake.. 😆

That Mars... Eee it's for all who hates shouting.. Meee... I raised my hands... I really think when some one shouts at me..why can't I abduct him or her to mask... Lectures... 😉

Shouting means louder or no.. It irritates us naa.. May be he shout aloud... 😛

Let see what future holds for them... 😳

Love you...

Originally posted by: -Liana-

Di love u big hug to u 🤗 ur updates r always treat to read & it left me craving for more & THE shock was totally unexpected SwaSan in lock up!! poor babies <3 loved how Sanskar was concern for swara & console her & the girl is so pagal she still thinks he didnt love

lol sanskar & his anger always create prob but i love how her tears melt his anger in few sec 😆 so much love ☺️

the boat scn was really beautiful loved how swara make him feel jealous she is too good i love this character of her

cant wait for the nxt part

Liana... 🤗 ... Sissy love you sis.. For this wonderful comment and support...

The pleasure is all mine... Sis . 😛 I'm soo happy that you liked it..

I thought I gave a flop.. Update. But I have to try my best.. It's not upto the mark.. 😭

He loves her but did he spoke with her lovingly or he romanced but she didn't allow him too.. 😆
She still in dilemma... He loves me... He loves me not...

He is not at fault.. He was tortured by her... He had been in jail.. His wife drunk alcohol.. Got help from danny.. He'll announce this to his family.. Soo it's obvious.. He gets angry.. That angry melted in a drop of tears... Power of girls...😆

Gondola.. Ride want to write more... But no time.. Deffo.. I'll give one perfect godola ride.. With gondolier song.. It's easy to make him jealous... 😉

Love you... Sis...

Originally posted by: _Esha_

Awesome work kamila 🤗 read it in one go 👍🏼

Esha... 🤗 ... Love you sis.. For this awesome comment.. Awww how sweet of you darling...

Love you...

Originally posted by: Anusha62

kamila superb one more beautiful update good going 🤗

Anusha... 🤗 love you soo much.. Dear.. For this lovely comment and support...

PS:I'm waiting for your new story...

Love you...

Originally posted by: Harshraaj

Read the entire parts in one go...

Just awesome yaar...

Waiting for your next update...

Do update soon

Hi.. Dear nice to meet you.. Thank you soo much.. Aww so sweet of you dear..

I'll update now...

Originally posted by: foresight

kammo...sorry i missed the last couple of chapters.

but this one is progressing so well. right from the shower breaking scene to her eating spicy food to avoid sandwich and then getting drunk and landing in prison after kissing sanskar😆😆that jail scene was funny. i liked how she had jealousy creep in and also heard about the comments that he husband loves her...though she isn't quite accepting it. the gondola ride was really nice. they fight and make up...and get even more closer. they are really funny😆

she is going to find a tough time in venice if she is scared of water though...poor girl. how did she manage to agree to going there in the first place😆

Sapna... 🤗 .. Love you yaar.. For your support and this wonderful comment...

Don't say sorry re.. My heart is crying... 😭

I'm soo glad that you liked that bathroom scene.. Spicy.. Food I'm a great fan if them.. Spicy.. I'm soo happy that you liked it too..

They jailed for nuisance re.. Not for kiss... She soo possessive about her husband.. She wants that his love for her.. Soo she flying in the sky after hearing that.. 😆

I'm a hydrophobic.. Even I have done a rafting.. 😆 .. Mee too like Swara.. I like to over come my fear... She might have no idea how Venice look... 😛 do you liked that Italian..

Your comment it means a lot to me..

Love you yaar..

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Update soon dear...

Story is going fantastic...eagerly waiting to know what will happen next...

Uploading now dear .. Love you soo much sissy..

Originally posted by: nikky22

Kamila... I have been a silent reader of ua ff. .. bt ua update made me comment dear... lovely update👏...I lv d way u write d story

Hi.. Nice to meet you.. Dear.. Thank you soo much... For this wonderful comment.. It means a lot to me...

The pleasure is all mine..

Now uploading...

Originally posted by: indrani7495

Wahi i thot hw will dey get arrested for kissing in a foreign country its not india lol😆😆ab jaldi se update karo !!😳

Now your doubts cleared dear.. I think I didn't explain well in update.. Love you.. Yaar...