SAWSAN FF: My Foe to My soul (PART:-16(B). PAGE:-141) - Page 50

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice update

Really loved this childish swara,

All the swasan scenes were awesome. And today swara realized her feelings. She started loving her husband. Waiting for your next update

Yaaar... 🤗 ... Love you.. For this comment...

Childish Swara.. What to say.. It's my wish yaar.. I love heroines with little bit childishness..

Oh you loved swasan moments... Me... 😛

Swara realised... But confession.. I may drag... I know you'll always stand by my side...

Next update within 24 hours...

Love yaa...

you are really awesomeee...dis epi s also fantastic...bt i need sanky's pov for swaras childishness...how u hav sel nick names simply superb...trouble to angelic trouble then angelic trouble to little rowdy...then now tamarin...how u alone can think like dis????i m jealous f u.,. 😉 ...finally swara fell in love with sanky...waiting 4 ur nxt update...pls upload it fastly

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Machan... 🤗 countless kisses for you...

Love you so much re... For this cutti cute comment..CCC..

Love yaa.. If anyone read this they'll think that you're a boy.. 😆

You naughty 😛

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Liana... 🤗 Thank you dear for loving my story.. For this wonderful comment too.. 😃

The characters.. I tried my best to creat them.. everyone should feel that they are real not reel.. I'm soo happy that you loved that... 😊

Hello she fits perfectly in this Swara... Ha.. Ha.. Ha.. I imagine that she is doing all this craziness...
VARUN Man he fit for every character...

Ahh its my pleasure that you loved my writing... Yaar..

Love yaayaa...

Originally posted by: foresight

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">I read some of the recent chapters all in one go. the story is really goingfantastic.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">i love how swara found out what priya told sanskar and the sweet way she apologises. she is finally starting to make an effortwithrelationship there...so she still has herinherent childishness alive. and then the beautiful was she prepares kheer for him and her chat with AP where she find out there is more to her husband. why he has been serious and more importantly, the way he has been happy with her. and then she kissed his forehead...the girl is finally taking the right steps in her marriage.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">in the next one, we have sanskarbeing gentle in caressing his wife and then she throws him a curve ball turning up in a towel. boy is shemaking it tough for him. the guy has some self control.😆the poor girl is dreaming about him so much..more and more with every passing day. and so she is his little rowdy now...he pranks her with ink on the cheek and she rubs it on him and how. only to bedisturbed by devar laksh and adarsh!😆so Maa wants to send them off to honeymoon ...which swararejects only to feel bad and help him in washing his car...and apply dirt on him, and then finally calls him by his name..even willing to go for the honeymoon...that chocolate moment wasreally something else...it scared herenough because of what she was feeling to make the excuse of maa</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">and now coming to the latest chapter...that wasreally nice one. so she is the monkey now. she knows her brother to well. that entire thing was so funny...right from her climbing the pipe letting him in, making him hold the heels and waking up her brother...getting him to cook while she is off to play...and he join her, winks at her and shoots her system in overdrive...our swara hasfinally realised she is in love. iwonder how she will behave with him now...looking forward to it. i guess wewill seen sanskar in more casuals to help her. they are already having some sweet momentst-shirt and hair and seat belt and all.</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="2">liked the updates. waiting for the next one
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Sapna... 🤗 ... Love you yaar... For reading my story and for this wonderful review...

Ahh.. Sometimes we regret about our past... That's what happened for Swara.. That apology.. I want something different and to impress him... and make him to lose his anger.. So that what's app is . apt for that... She has to she thinks that she wants this marriage coz of her papa.. but she wants this for her.. she is falling for him.. 😉 That kheer...what will be boya favourite... Apart from beer.. they are not like girs.. So kheer is better... AP.. Sasuma is another maa in a girl lifelife I want good bond between them.. Heart to heart talk between them.. He is changed for herher by his character now just.. Outfits.. That kiss man... You are a girl right.. 😳 I wanted that here to assure him that she is feeling something for him.. Yep right step in her marriage..

Next one... Ah... He is treating her in a geniune manner.. He doesn't want to force her.. I really like those kinda boyss... Who treat girls with respect.. That attack on his virtue re... That towel.. 🤣 but he has strong willpower.. He is in dilemma so obviously it takes time to come back.. Dream she is dreaming but not giving geniune chachance to her husband to make that dream real... Bechara... Prank... I love pranks like VARUN... 😉 actually Laksh and Adarsh are bears... Honeymoon.. It'll happen in my way.. Little romanc more fun.. She is fuss about flightflight yaar... That chocolate eating is his impulsive act.. Yep he scared her more...

Monkey... Swara fits perfect in howler and tamarin.. He.. He... He... I like risking I love girls bravery.. It's nice to have brother.. I have one younger... I used to spy on him.. We fight a lot in same way even now.. He is 21..
Climbing pipe,.. Asking him to carry her heel.. Waking up her brother.. You liked those love yaa.. MeMe..
That was a attack on her virtue.. That wink.. Wink always work.. Deffo he'll change himself for her...

To write sensible storie... You.. Nimmi... Sakura... Are there..

To write crazy I'm here... Thanks for liking my story...

Love yaaa...

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Hey ( ka)MILA! Another nice update dear. Don't take too long for the next update. Jiju se baat kam kiya kar. Next update jade likhna . Love you . Swasan AT main aaya kar , jamke baat karenge.😊❤️bye

Hey... 🤗 .. Apu. You found my pet name... MA friends uses to call me..

Hey yaa.. I can't understand Hindi... Love you so much for this.. Comment and reading my bokawass...

Is First finish the job then talk to your jiju... May I rite.. Explain meme..
AT no time yaar fully occupied by ff... Now that ss... really missing that... I'll try..

Ah.. Take care... Love yaa...

Originally posted by: chco

awesome update
do pm me

Hey yaa... Thank you soo much...
Yep will pm you...

Originally posted by: TRPS

Hey Kamila! 😊
really enjoying Swasan's journey so much!! :)
aha! Swara!! the gone case in love, and still not that much aware! knowingly and unknowingly Sanskaar is doing his work and magic. :)
Sanskaar's care, concern and wink did the "Gazab" on Swara. :D and she is changing Sanskaar for good! wanna read her reaction when Sanskaar will wear T-shirts. :)
love how he name her on monkeys, so apt in all situations, a giggle escaped from my mouth after reading her climbing and hanging on pipe scene. really, So perfect Sanskaar names her! :))
nice update dear, continue soon,eagerly waiting for next update. :)

Hey... Toshika 🤗 ... Thanks yaar.. For this superb comment...

Swasan journey just now started... It lasts forever... Thanku for loving it..

That gone case... Is just now realised her love she'll torture her hubby until her confession.. Not much aware of it..

Sanskaaar magic.. Is working.. His caring distance are making an impact on her...

Man that wink.. What to say... It's an unexpected attack from him.. But winks always work right.. 😉

Her reactions will be... 😲 .. [:D/] .. 👏 he will be like 😎 ha... Ha... When he wears casual

What he'll do yaar her acts are like monkeys... I'm happy that I'm responsible for that giggle... Sanskaar fully observing her.

Thank you souch yaar for this review..

Love yaa...

Originally posted by: gayu6

Wow sis I loved n enjoyed each n every word of the update. It's really super awesome. He s admiring his wife. I loved tat part akka. Then surprise visit to her home. Climbing the pipe n she asked him to take her sandals he took it as 1st work given to him from his wife. Then hw she wake up her Bro their fight. Loved. Then their game n he winks at her so she loses the game. Then she wants his attention towards her only. So started dancing on the stool n fell down he came n took her to her room. N he told ntng is impt than her. Finally she realised her love feelings for him her hubby. Waiting wen they ll propose. Super sis.

Gayu... 🤗 chellam... Sissy.. Love you rere for this wonderful comment..

I'm happy that you enjoyed this update... That admiring... I totally forgot the continuation.. Raaz reminded meme Oh I wrote that in instance... Oh liked that... Mmmawh

First job from his wife.. 😆 nice job to do... Climbing fight with her bro are my stunts.. Shhh secrets..

That game anything other than dodge ball won't suit for Swara herehere.. Yes she loses game but gained her love..

Wink... Always work... To gain his attention.. She'll do more stupid thinks.. Dancing on stool she really didn't expect that fall. It pulled her legs...

He man is a real man.. I'm loving him anywhere.. Sanskaar.. Nothing is important in this world except his wife..

How could she avoid him long she is also a human naa. finally love happened...

Love yaa...

Didi
when are u going to update next?
u promoted see wide in24hrs yesterday I guess