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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: stay_on_waves

Hey Sakura, I love ur writings and I have read all ur Short stories, well this one also seems very interesting, so Swara is convicted and is Icarus and Sanskaar is foresaken by his family and using Swara as her pawn for his own good but in due course he is going to fall in love with her, ur SS are always mysterious and thriller. I love them, waiting for yhis story to unfold.

Hey dear😊
I think we haven't interacted before. I'm glad you like my work and is interested to read this one. I hope you will not be disappointed. Hope to hear more from you😊 Thanks a lot😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Ready for another roller coaster of mystery and thrills. You do write them the best. Awaiting the next update.

Editing the post just to say...Thank you for introducing me to the legend of Icarus.

Thanks dear😊
I'm glad you learned about Icarus. I will be posting the first part soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Banjaaran...


Such a captivating Start Saku..
Bring it on... Soon!


Thanks Nimmie😊
I'm posting shortly😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: moonstonespirit

Sakura 🤗 Brilliant start.


Will read up on the title soon, probably after exams. But who is the sun and who will be Icarus??
Battle of wits and desires!!! Sounds interesting and thanks for PM

I think I missed this comment😕 Sorry dear.🤗
Thanks a ton, I'm so happy you found it interesting! You'll know everything soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very tantalizing, Saku...as always. 😊

I loved your definition of "victory". By the way, my very traditional, given name corresponds to "Goddess of Victory" in Tamil. 😊 So as you can imagine, I find definitions and debates of victory most interesting!

I loved these lines, they said so much in such a concise, effective manner.


""Victory is when you go beyond the capacity of feeling the bitterness of defeat, victory itself is not a feeling; it is the emptiness that you adore when you are filled to the rim with dejection, the coldness that you welcome after being burned by defeat. It is not water for a thirsty throat; it is simply not being thirsty anymore. Victory itself is nothing, but demands everything in return. For me victory is peace, an ability to go beyond; an ability to fly free, at last. That victory I am still searching for.

In the world to which I belong, victory has a different meaning. It is glory, wealth, power and sometimes love. Here victory is attached to gaining, attaining and overpowering. Here victory is not freedom, but another chain of desire, here victory is not peace. Here my search is always incomplete.""


So very well put.

I am literally rubbing my hands in glee, at the thought of a courtroom drama, a la Perry Mason versus Hamilton Burger, in true Erle Stanley Gardener style. 😊 You've given us mystery thrillers in the hallowed school of Sidney Sheldon and now you are set to give us a crime trial. I can't wait.

So "SK" hates Durga Prasad...and left home 5 years back. Is the background (with Kavita) similar in this story? One sister (Swara?) on trial for murdering the supposed boyfriend, with the bridegroom (Mr Toad, I presume?) marrying the sister (Ragini) on the very same day. The confession coming after the marriage---if it is indeed Swara, would be just like her, to become the sacrificial goat!

Looking forward to chapter 2 already. 😊 And the winds of winter OS # 8 please!


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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Brilliant prologue and Chapter 1. Its a 'Lawyer' drama! Looking forward to this story as keenly as I did the others. Beautifully written.

Please update soon. :)

-V
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

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Very tantalizing, Saku...as always. 😊

I loved your definition of "victory". By the way, my very traditional, given name corresponds to "Goddess of Victory" in Tamil. 😊 So as you can imagine, I find definitions and debates of victory most interesting!

I loved these lines, they said so much in such a concise, effective manner.


""Victory is when you go beyond the capacity of feeling the bitterness of defeat, victory itself is not a feeling; it is the emptiness that you adore when you are filled to the rim with dejection, the coldness that you welcome after being burned by defeat. It is not water for a thirsty throat; it is simply not being thirsty anymore. Victory itself is nothing, but demands everything in return. For me victory is peace, an ability to go beyond; an ability to fly free, at last. That victory I am still searching for.

In the world to which I belong, victory has a different meaning. It is glory, wealth, power and sometimes love. Here victory is attached to gaining, attaining and overpowering. Here victory is not freedom, but another chain of desire, here victory is not peace. Here my search is always incomplete.""


So very well put.

I am literally rubbing my hands in glee, at the thought of a courtroom drama, a la Perry Mason versus Hamilton Burger, in true Erle Stanley Gardener style. 😊 You've given us mystery thrillers in the hallowed school of Sidney Sheldon and now you are set to give us a crime trial. I can't wait.

So "SK" hates Durga Prasad...and left home 5 years back. Is the background (with Kavita) similar in this story? One sister (Swara?) on trial for murdering the supposed boyfriend, with the bridegroom (Mr Toad, I presume?) marrying the sister (Ragini) on the very same day. The confession coming after the marriage---if it is indeed Swara, would be just like her, to become the sacrificial goat!

Looking forward to chapter 2 already. 😊 And the winds of winter OS # 8 please!


Hey Viji! In fact when I wrote the opening paras I was thinking about the same thing...Victory perhaps would be the meaning of your name's full form. Sort of smirking at my own victory of making a right guess here.
Yes, it is court room drama with crime solving on later stages. I had enough of cold wars on board rooms and haunted mansions...wanted some different angle here.
SK indeed hates Durga, has left home five years back but the background is different...far more sinister.
As you might know who SK is...his client obviously is the Devi of sacrifice. And Mr Toad😆 has already married Miss Cobra😉
I would post the wind later tonight.😛
Thanks dear, you know how much your comments mean to me...I keep telling you😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Brilliant prologue and Chapter 1. Its a 'Lawyer' drama! Looking forward to this story as keenly as I did the others. Beautifully written.

Please update soon. :)

-V

Thanks V😊
Yes it is court room drama. I will update soon😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing just read the prologue nd the first ch
honestly i hv no words to describe how good it is
by the way i read two of your stories can you give me the links of all your ffs i wanted to read them
waiting for the update :)

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