New pg 4 :Swasan os!PART3: Just a try swara feel sorry

Based on spoiler and my current frustrated mood got me make this

Swara confront sanskar .sanskar is upset on the fact that Swara doesn't trust him & still believes him to same old guy .He loved and trusted this girl so much and it was gut wrenching to read his eyes .
Swara s mission is to find kidnapper at any cost .now she has ragini with her side .Both ragini and Swara goes to storeroom once again to find loophole ,there she find s a earring .kissi din pehla Swara me dekha tha Uttara ek earring ke liye doodh rah thi ..
Swara goes to Uttara s room and finds that earring matches with one lying on the drawer .swata summones entire family out even Uttara ..

After so much of drama Uttara admits she kidnapped ragini .but Swara strongly believes there s other partner in crime .
Sometime later she finds that Laksh skin has been torn ! When she manage to get to closer look she finds out mark which ragini had referred.

She realise her grave mistake and expose him Infront of everyone

Swara :ab mera pass saath sare saabooth hai ..Laksh aap sab ko bateyaga Kya his ragini ke saath " in aggressive tone
Laksh :Tum mujh par ungli kyun utta rah Ho ! Uttara nai kaha tha woh kudhi yeh sab kiya tha ! Tumhe toh apne pati par shakh karna chahiye pehl bhi usne Tumare saath... (Before completing Swara interferes ..

Swara :ab bas !! Mein apne pati ke baare Mein kuch aur maath bolo
Sans is shocked to see Swara defending and moreover she was saying her pati ..

Swara:apna haath dikatho Laksh.. Laksh reluctantly shows up ! Swara holds his hand and tears of fake skin !
Laksh:ouchh
Swara :dard hua ! (Angry tone )
Swara :Sab log yeh dekhlo laksh ne ragini na nakoon ka nishan chuppa rakha hai
Ragini :Laksh tum... In utter shock (she never thought person she loved so much will do this )
Swara ;Laksh Tum yeh Sab Kyon kiya... ( eyes filled with tears and state of disappointment ...
Laksh: (raising his voice ) Uttara ne kaha tha na hum tak chuke the ...ragini aur uske ros ros Ka natak
Swara :tum mera Mann Mein sanskar keliye shak kyon petha kiya"( in utter disbelief )
Laksh;tumse Mein kitni baar keh chuka hoon mere Mann Mein ragini keliye koi jaga nahi hai aur kabhi Hogi bhi ., Laksh pulls her hand angrily hurting her
Ap:samalke Laksh kya kar rah Ho
Laksh :sw Swara mein tumse pyaar kartha hoon aur tumhe apne bhai ke saath nahi dekh saktha
Aur yeh sab Mein isliye ki thi taki Tum or sanskar kabhi ek na Ho paye and create rift ! Haa saach batao Mein kaafi hak tak kamiya bhi hooyi ...Tum sanskar par trust bhi nahi karthi aisa rishton bandne Mein Kya hai ...Abhi bhi waqt hai Sanskar ko use haal par chodo Woh samalega

Sanskar gets angry ..holding his fist tighter he pulls back and withdraw himself from giving any reaction ...
Swara slaps Laksh in front of everyone
Swara :Mein kabhi bhi nahi socha tha Tum iss hakthak girjaogi!! Mere booti Kismat yeh thi ki Mein Tumhe pyar ki di ! Afsoos Tum wahi par atki hooyi hai ..Mein aage badchukki Ho Laksh aur meri saala yeh hai ki Tum bhi apni life ki samjho aur age bado!!

After so much melodrama... Swara looks at sanskar feeling ashamed of herself "how can she even doubt sanskar who supported her all time ..her eyes brimming with tears

Swara :San sanskaar... She calls out his name when he turns back to go ..
Sans doesn't heed and walks off ... Swara run after him .panickingly
Swara fence his door ..closing entrance to get in
Sans: Swara mujhe tumhe koi Baath nahi karni

Swara: nahi sanskar mujhe kehna hai ...Mein yeh Sab keliye tumhe maafi maagna chahthi hoon..
Sans doesn't speak anything and cover his sheet with bedsheet and tries to sleep
Swara monodialogue : chal kal baath karogi

Swara wakes up early morning makes breakfast for sans thinking she can talk in his bedroom
Swara comes in .,,and she is astonished to find sans not in his bed ..

Swara rings him but no answer ...she became restless to know his whereabouts ,getting worried and tensed she sat waiting for him whole day ...it's midnight Swara gets dozed off ..then she hears footsteps ,she wakes up from the nap slightly drowsy yawning she sees sans ..
She ran towards him ..asking
Sans Tum Kya hogaya why u not talking to me ! Itna ignorance kyun hai ..

Sans doesn't pay attention and parts away ..ragini overhears their convos and decides to help swara .ragini understood swara started liking sans ..and she even knew her sister won't even admit her love until she is tricked ..

Ragini makes swara drink water ..in which she added a tablet so that Swara open up her mind
Swara feel giddy walks unsteadily towards Sanskar s room ..
Swara:San sanskar darwasa Kholo...tapping impatiently
San: Tum yaha itni raath koo
Swara :haa toh Bul gaya Kya yeh mera bhi kamra hai


Sans get shocked hearing this ... Redemption scene may b or may b not continued
Time for me to sleep ! I m not rechecking what I wrote so maaf karna for any mistakes

Interesting concept. Please do continue 😊

Nyc. .continue soon n do pm me da nxt part..its a.good story.

Nice start dear

Originally posted by: chibi_deea

Interesting concept. Please do continue 😊

i wrote just like that...when my mood was bad...thanks for reading .i thought readers will get bored toh aise hi stop kiya tha

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

nice start

thankyou 😊

please try to continue it..i know its OS..phir bhi please...

nice start.. continue soon..😊

nice start dear...pls continue..&&&& pm me if u can

Swara hurriedly gets into his room
swara :mein dekh rahi hoon tum ignore kar rahe ho (tears filling her eyes,stumbling upon her words)
sanskar :tum hosh mein nahi ho swara tum tumhara room mein jaake sojao
sanskar was perplexed on seeing her wife talli ...inquisitively he ask
tum piyi hai kya swara "
swara: (_smirking ) nahi toh...he sees swara is unstable so he quickly holds her wrist
swara: mein talli hoyi ho toh kya...achi baath yeh hai ki tumhe atleast theen char words bola...
she tries to grab his shirt for grip...
swara :tumhe maalum hai mein tumhare liye breakfast banaya tha...mein kitni der tak indzaar kiya ..kitni baar tumhe phone kiya
par tum nahi utaya...kyun kyun sanskar ...(bursting into tears )
she places her palm on his face caressing with care...mujhse maalum hai tum merse naaraz ho ...she feels so guilty and turn her face unable to interlock with eyes...
swara :sanskar ...i m m sorry,tum humesha mera saath ghada tha par mein tumhari achi frnd kehena ki bhi layak nahi hoon...

sanskar doesn't heed and gets busy on making her bed ...
swara : mein tumse baath kar raha hoon sanskar (angry tone) u cant ignore me like that haak bantha hai mereko sawal jawab karne keliye!!! Mein ...(unstable words)...tumhari patni hoon!
she throws pillow at him .she loses her grip and slips his legs and falls over sanskaar

Both eye lock * swasan instrumental tone plays on the background
unconscious of his anger or his emotions for a moment he gets drawn to her beauty (like cobweb attracts their preys !!lol a metaphor :P )

sanskar parts her hair which fall on her face.she for the first time felt his touch .
she felt different..she wa nervous and shy...

she comes closer to him ,closes her eyes .sanskar gets terrified seeing her intimacy ..he slowly wraps her hand around her waist (unaware and unable to hold emotion ...oops swara was wearing peach colour churidar what you saw in yesterday's episode )

she comes closer to his lips..lil breath away...sanskar was about to reciprocate the same he sees swara falling to bed asleep.he could see she smiling in her sleep he place gentle kiss on forehead .make her lie down with comforting pillows cover her up with quilt .

precap:swara wakes up and shocked to find herself in sanskar s room and he beside her.to make the situation more chaos she gets terrified to fnd herself in dissimilar dress

guys I had thought about writing only fisrt half .but since some of you insisted I ended up making something instinctly..dont know how it turned up and whether u r able to relate to character.i m mostly lazy to write anything .i feel like I could have bring out expressively emotions of characters but bec of I m lazy bumb I prefer to focus on their convos and matter.I never thought of writing os ,mood was really bad after those stupid spoilers so wrote it how I want to be.i want sanskar to give silent torture to swara and later she realize her difficultly to get old sanskar and in process she understand her feelings for him.