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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: foresight
beautifully written...i wish this is how they had done it in the show as well

Thank you so much 🤗 I wish the same

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: princess_tara
lovely OS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa
Romantic...
Heart touching
Simple awesome..

Thank you so much 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sree...
Hi Nandini
That was such a sweet OS. I loved the trust Swara has for Sanskar in this one. I really hope they show some scenes of this kind in the show as well. It was really beautiful piece.

Swara and Sanskar broke their fast. :P at least they broke each other's fast, and that too with chocolate :) so no harm done.

Keep writing and do PM me if possible.

Lots of love
Sree

Hi Sree

Thank you so much 🤗 I hope so too 😃 I want her to snub Laksh in Sanskar's favour 😉

Oops 😛 I completely forgot about the Karwachauth fast 😆 Yep no harm done 😆

Will surely pm u when I write next.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: The-Heart
Beautiful OS, short and sweet 👏
Swara feeling secure in sanskar arms😳

Do write more on swasan

Thank you so much 🤗

will write more

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Ros-
Lovely OS 😳
Wish it happened in the show too. 😔

Thank you so much 🤗 I wish the same

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sree8410
Very Romantic OS!!
I wish they showed this in serial.

Thank you so much 🤗 I wish the same 😔

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: The.Lannister
That was beautiful. How I wish something similar had happened on the show. Loved the Swara who hugged herself instead of rushing into Laksh's arms like she did in the show. And she finding solace only in Sanskaar's arms...chalo show pe na sahi, yahi padhne ko mil gaya thanks to you!

The ending with Sanskaar tapping her on the forehead with the chocolate...I found that action damn cute for some reason😳 It was all as sweet as the chocolate they both had.

Do write more. These alternative endings to the scenes in the show are always a welcome read.

Thank you so much 🤗 Ya I wish they had showed this instead of the crap they actually showed. 🤢 Ya I didn't like her rushing in his arms even in distress. How I hoped she had called and asked Sanskar to come to her aid. I added that chocolate scene and forgot about their Karwachauth fast 😆

Will surely write more.

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Posted: 9 years ago

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