Thank you so much dear for your such a lovely and detailed feedback.😊😊Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Hi Mukta 😊
Really liked this piece. The way you have portrayed Swara's desire to give her relationship with Sanskaar, their marriage a genuine try; as well as Sanskaar's intense hurt and pain, thinking that Swara would possibly leave him to go back to her relationship with Lucky, was very good.
This para especially was very apt: ""For successful marriage only love between two people is not important. Trust, understanding, respect, loyalty, and genuine concern all these things count"
Have no words to describe the cunning and devious antics of RagYa. 🤢 They are so desperate to split SwaSan! But thankfully Swara realized their game, and firmly told Lakshya she had zero interest in him. That reassured but also confused Sanskaar, and the hihglight for me, was the sweet way Swara explained to him that she wanted to be with him, give herself time to fall for him, and to grow old with him. Very sweetly put!
And their declaration of their feelings for each other at the end, where Sanskaar says he is sure, Swara will soon grow to love him as much as he loves her, was very well done.
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